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Scarlett_farther
Sept. 18, 2023 · English · 1 min read

Write a short response on this prompt: Describe your routine in the morning and afternoon.

General Routine in Days

I live in the downtown area in my city. The environment has been improved a lot in the past years. Generally, I wake up at 7:30 in the morning to the sounds of birds, it is really amazing that birds can fly so high because I live on the 41st floor in a high-rise building. After a quick washing and some fast food in 15 minutes, I go to work by subway. Fortunately, my working office and home is so close, that it only takes me 15 minutes to get to work.

On weekdays. I get back home at 5 o'clock In the afternoon. In most cases, I directly go home on the same subway as in the morning. Occasionally, I might invite or be invited by friends or colleagues to have a chinwag with beers.

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    Sept. 19, 2023, 1:04 a.m.

    あなたが日本語流暢にを話せることに私は感嘆しています、ありがとございます。

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I live in the downtown area in my city.

I live in the downtown area inof my city.

特定の場所や部分を指す際、「Of」が適切な前置詞となります。
Grammar

I live in the downtown area inof my city.

The environment has been improved a lot in the past years.

The environment has been improved a lot in the pasgreatly in recent years.

現在完了形の方が適切です。「a lot」も大丈夫ですが、より高度な単語を使ったりしたい場合、「greatly」の方が良いでしょう。
Grammar Usage Stylistic

The environment has been improved a lot in the past few years.

Generally, I wake up at 7:30 in the morning to the sounds of birds, it is really amazing that birds can fly so high because I live on the 41st floor in a high-rise building.

Generally, I wake up at 7:30 in the morning to the sounds of birds, it is really. It's amazing that birds can fly so high becaus, especially since I live on the 41st floor inof a high-rise building.

明確さのために、二つの文に分けられました。「It's」は「it is」の短縮形であり、この文脈ではもっと自然でカジュアルです。
Usage Stylistic

After a quick washing and some fast food in 15 minutes, I go to work by subway.

After a quick washing and some fast food ina 15 -minutes, I go breakfast, I head to work by subway.

"Washing"は通常、物を清潔にすることを指しますが、"wash"は自分自身を速やかに洗うことを指すことがあります。また、"15-minute breakfast"という表現は"some fast food in 15 minutes"よりも自然に聞こえます。「head to work」と「go to work」の違いについては、日常の会話で、これら二つの表現はよく取り替えて使われます。しかし、行動の開始や方向性を強調するために、「go to work」よりも「head to work」を使う人が多いでしょう。
Usage Stylistic

After 15 minutes for a quick washing and some fast food in 15 minutes, I go to work by subway.

Fortunately, my working office and home is so close, that it only takes me 15 minutes to get to work.

Fortunately, my working office and home isare so close, that it only takes me 15 minutes to get to workcommute. / so close that my commute only takes me 15 minutes.

「get to work」も大丈夫ですが、通勤と言う意味のある「commute」も良いです。
Grammar Stylistic

Fortunately, my working office and home isare so close, that it only takes me 15 minutes to get to work.

On weekdays.

On weekdays.

On weekdays.,

I get back home at 5 o'clock In the afternoon.

On weekdays, I get back home at 5 o'clock Iin the afternoon.

Grammar Usage

In most cases, I directly go home on the same subway as in the morning.

In most cases, I directly go home on the same subway asMost of the time, I take the same subway route home as I do in the morning.

Usage Stylistic

Occasionally, I might invite or be invited by friends or colleagues to have a chinwag with beers.

Occasionally, I might invite, or be invited by, friends or colleagues to have a chinwag withfor a chat over beers.

明確さのためにカンマを追加しました。ほとんど「チャット」の方が、より口語的な「chinwag」よりも理解しやすいです。私は初めてその表現を聞いたのです。
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