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Ged's War Journals

“Ged's War Journals” is an animation movie. The story is based on two books; One is “The Earthsea Cycle” that is a fantasy novel written by Ursula Kroeber Le Guin and the other is “The Journey of Shuna” written by Hayao Miyazaki. This movie was released in 2006 and got a bad reputation. The director, Goro Miyazaki, was badly criticized by his father, Hayao Miyazaki who is a famous movie director of Ghibri.
Some movie theaters in Tokyo are now showing old movies because the showing of the new movies have been postponed due to the COVID19. While I was watching line-ups to choose one, I happened to see opinions on this movie. Someone gave a comment that it was a shame that it was almost amazing movie.
I watched this movie in 2006 but it gave me little impression so I forgot most of the story now. The comment, however, led me to watch the movie.
The story is about a teenager boy who has gloomy personality. He killed his father and escaped. In the meantime, he met a great wizard and travelled with him. Consequently, thanks to this wizard and a girl who the boy met in the middle of the travel, he changed himself to be strong.
14 years ago, I didn't understand about why he has so gloomy personality, but now I somehow understand it. Teenagers are apt to get emotionally unstable. The boy isn't interested in living since he's had a hard time finding out a reason to live.
Detailed psychological description of the characters is good, but why he killed his father and also what meaning the sword he had stolen from his father has weren't described.
By the way, according to the news a while ago, some people who had shut themselves off from society for many years killed their parents, saying someone wispered to them in their mind to do it.
Based on this news, if a dark wizard manipulated him to kill his good father, the story would be more understandable. It seems to me that an emotionally unstable person is easily possessed by an evil spirit. If the story went like that, the last scene that the boy tried to kill the dark wizard would be more meaningful.
Besides, if no one can take out the sword from the scabbard, what kind of person can take it out? It was unclear, yet the boy took out the sword and gave a damage to the dark wizard. What's that sword?🙄 It left behind a mystery to me.
The comment I saw was surely right. The story is very interesting, but the movie missed some important things. Yes, indeed it's almost an amazing movie.😆


ゲド戦記

『ゲド戦記』はアニメ映画です。ストーリーは2つの本を基にしています。1つはUrsula Kroeber Le Guin作のファンタジー小説『Earthsea』ともう1つは宮崎駿作『ショナの旅』です。この映画は2006年に公開され不評でした。監督の宮崎吾朗は父親の宮崎駿から酷評を受けました。宮崎駿はジブリの有名な映画監督です。
今、東京では昔の映画を上映している映画館があります。コロナの影響で新作が公開延期になっているからです。一つ見ようと上映作品リストを見ていると、たまたまこの映画についてのコメント欄が目に入りました。ある人が、もう一歩ですばらしい映画だったのに惜しい、とコメントしてました。私は2006年にこの映画を見ましたが、印象が薄くほとんど話を覚えていません。ところが、このコメントを読んで見る気になりました。
ストーリーは暗い性格の十代の少年についてです。彼は父親を殺し逃亡します。その間、偉大な魔法使いに出会い、彼と旅をします。結果、この魔法使いと旅の途中で出会った少女のおかげで少年は強くなります。
14年前、この少年はなんでこうも暗い性格なのか理解できなかったけど、今はなんとなくわかる気がします。十代の若者は情緒不安定になりやすいというのもわかるし。この少年は生きる意味をなかなか見いだせず、生きることに興味を持てなかったんでしょうね。
登場人物の心理描写はよく描けてると思うのだけど、なぜすばらしい父親を殺したのか、少年が父親から盗んだ剣が何を意味するのかが描かれていなかった。
ちょっと脱線するが、以前、何年も引きこもっている人が親を殺し、誰かが自分にやれと囁いたと供述したとニュースで報道してました。
このニュースに基づいて、もし闇の魔法使いに父親を殺すよう操られたとすれば、話はもっとわかりやすくなっていただろうと思います。不安定な心に魔は入りやすいでしょうから。そうすれば、少年が闇の魔法使いを倒そうとする最後の場面ももっと意味あるものになったのではと思う。
さらに、誰も剣を鞘から抜くことができないのであれば、ではどんな人が抜けるのか? 不明のままで少年が抜き、闇の魔法使いを負傷させた。。。その剣って何だろう?🙄 謎が残った。
私が見たコメントは確かに当たってる。ストーリーはすごく面白いのだけど、なんか大事なポイントを逃しているような。う〜ん、確かにあと一歩だった。。。と思う😆

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Ged's War Journals

“Ged's War Journals” is an animationed movie.

The story is based on two books; Oone is “The Earthsea Cycle” that is, a fantasy novel written by Ursula Kroeber Le Guin, and the other is “The Journey of Shuna” written by Hayao Miyazaki.

This movie was released in 2006 and got a bad reputationviews..

The director, Goro Miyazaki, was badly criticized by his father, Hayao Miyazaki, who is a famous movie director of Studio Ghibrli.

Some movie theaters in Tokyo are now showing old movies because the showing of the new movies haves been postponed due to the COVID19.

While I was watchinglooking at the line-ups to choose one, I happened to see opinionsome reviews on this movie.

Someone gave a commented that it was a shame that it was almost an amazing movie.

I watched this movie in 2006, but it gave meleft little impression so Ion me, so I have forgotten most of the story now.

The comment, however, led me to watch the movie.

The story is about a teenager boy who has a gloomy personality.

He killeds his father and escapeds.

Escapes what or from where? Also, when summarizing events in movies and books, it is common to use simple present tense. Using past tense as you did is not grammatically incorrect, but I am going to correct to simple present tense because that feels more natural to me.

In the meantime, he metets a great wizard and travelleds with him.

Consequently, thanks to this wizard and a girl who the boy met in the middle of theets during his travels, he changed himself to bes and becomes strong.

14 years ago, I didn't understand about why he hasd souch a gloomy personality, but now I somehow understand it.

Teenagers are apt to getoften emotionally unstable.

The boy isn't interested in living since he's had a hard time finding out a reason to live.

“Finding out” is used for facts or information.

Detailed psychological descriptions of the characters is are good, but why he killed his father and also whatthe meaning of the sword he had stolen from his father has weren't described.

By the way, according to the news a while ago, some people who had shut themselves off from society for many years killed their parents, saying someonethat a voice in their mind whispered to them in their mindand told them to do it.

Based on this news, if a dark wizard manipulated himthe boy to kill his good father, the story would be more understandable.

Since you switched topics away from the boy in the movie and back again, you have to specifically mention “the boy” and not just say “him”.

It seems to me that an emotionally unstable person is easily possessed by an evil spirit.

If the story went like that, the last scene that, in which the boy tried to kill the dark wizard, would be more meaningful.

Besides, if no one canould take out the sword (out) from the scabbard, what kind of person canould take it out?

In my corrected version of the sentence “out” is optional.

It was unclear, yet the boy took out the sword and gave a damage tod the dark wizard.

What's that sword?🙄 It left behindis a mystery to me.

The comment I saw was surely right.

The story is very interesting, but the movie missed some important things.

Yes, indeed it's almost an amazing movie.😆

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shiera

July 19, 2020

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The boy isn't interested in living since he's had a hard time finding out a reason to live.

“Finding out” is used for facts or information.

Thank you for correcting the long post.

Ged's War Journals

“Ged's War Journals” is an animation movie.

“Ged's War Journals” is an animationed movie.

The story is based on two books; One is “The Earthsea Cycle” that is a fantasy novel written by Ursula Kroeber Le Guin and the other is “The Journey of Shuna” written by Hayao Miyazaki.

The story is based on two books; Oone is “The Earthsea Cycle” that is, a fantasy novel written by Ursula Kroeber Le Guin, and the other is “The Journey of Shuna” written by Hayao Miyazaki.

This movie was released in 2006 and got a bad reputation.

This movie was released in 2006 and got a bad reputationviews..

The director, Goro Miyazaki, was badly criticized by his father, Hayao Miyazaki who is a famous movie director of Ghibri.

The director, Goro Miyazaki, was badly criticized by his father, Hayao Miyazaki, who is a famous movie director of Studio Ghibrli.

Some movie theaters in Tokyo are now showing old movies because the showing of the new movies have been postponed due to the COVID19.

Some movie theaters in Tokyo are now showing old movies because the showing of the new movies haves been postponed due to the COVID19.

While I was watching line-ups to choose one, I happened to see opinions on this movie.

While I was watchinglooking at the line-ups to choose one, I happened to see opinionsome reviews on this movie.

Someone gave a comment that it was a shame that it was almost amazing movie.

Someone gave a commented that it was a shame that it was almost an amazing movie.

I watched this movie in 2006 but it gave me little impression so I forgot most of the story now.

I watched this movie in 2006, but it gave meleft little impression so Ion me, so I have forgotten most of the story now.

The comment, however, led me to watch the movie.

The story is about a teenager boy who has gloomy personality.

The story is about a teenager boy who has a gloomy personality.

He killed his father and escaped.

He killeds his father and escapeds.

In the meantime, he met a great wizard and travelled with him.

In the meantime, he metets a great wizard and travelleds with him.

Consequently, thanks to this wizard and a girl who the boy met in the middle of the travel, he changed himself to be strong.

Consequently, thanks to this wizard and a girl who the boy met in the middle of theets during his travels, he changed himself to bes and becomes strong.

14 years ago, I didn't understand about why he has so gloomy personality, but now I somehow understand it.

14 years ago, I didn't understand about why he hasd souch a gloomy personality, but now I somehow understand it.

Teenagers are apt to get emotionally unstable.

Teenagers are apt to getoften emotionally unstable.

The boy isn't interested in living since he's had a hard time finding out a reason to live.

The boy isn't interested in living since he's had a hard time finding out a reason to live.

Detailed psychological description of the characters is good, but why he killed his father and also what meaning the sword he had stolen from his father has weren't described.

Detailed psychological descriptions of the characters is are good, but why he killed his father and also whatthe meaning of the sword he had stolen from his father has weren't described.

By the way, according to the news a while ago, some people who had shut themselves off from society for many years killed their parents, saying someone wispered to them in their mind to do it.

By the way, according to the news a while ago, some people who had shut themselves off from society for many years killed their parents, saying someonethat a voice in their mind whispered to them in their mindand told them to do it.

Based on this news, if a dark wizard manipulated him to kill his good father, the story would be more understandable.

Based on this news, if a dark wizard manipulated himthe boy to kill his good father, the story would be more understandable.

It seems to me that an emotionally unstable person is easily possessed by an evil spirit.

If the story went like that, the last scene that the boy tried to kill the dark wizard would be more meaningful.

If the story went like that, the last scene that, in which the boy tried to kill the dark wizard, would be more meaningful.

Besides, if no one can take out the sword from the scabbard, what kind of person can take it out?

Besides, if no one canould take out the sword (out) from the scabbard, what kind of person canould take it out?

It was unclear, yet the boy took out the sword and gave a damage to the dark wizard.

It was unclear, yet the boy took out the sword and gave a damage tod the dark wizard.

What's that sword?🙄 It left behind a mystery to me.

What's that sword?🙄 It left behindis a mystery to me.

The comment I saw was surely right.

The story is very interesting, but the movie missed some important things.

Yes, indeed it's almost an amazing movie.😆

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