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kiwy

Nov. 2, 2021

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1.My phone rang when I was riding my bike. I stopped to answer. A boy started, "teacher, I want to ask a leave." I replied, "who are you?" He told me his name and the reason that he had a toothache. I told him to wait till 7 p.m, then I would signed the note for his leave. It is a principle that if students who live in the dormitory want to leave during the weekdays, the teacher need to sign a note for them to make sure that the teacher knows their track. Furtheremore, their parents also need to submit a request to the teacher. After all these have done, the parents should go to the security room to sign a note and then leave with the students.
The boy is the guy who seldom takes part in the cleaning work and handing in homework. What's funny is that his parents never regard these as his fault but the teacher's. His father even called me and tried to blame me by these stuff once a time. However, I stroke back and won.
His mother sent a message to me tonight. I hestitated whether I should told her that her son hadn't handed homework a countless time, and was so noisy during some class. I really didn't want to waste my time to talk to her because she was so rude. However, I told her in the end since she had connected with me. She replied that she had aksed her son to complete the homework tonight and hand it to me tomorrow. After a while ,here came the funnist part: she asked me what the homework was. I replied that I had told the students on Sunday evening, and I left the homework in office, so I couldn't answer her question. She said that her son would finish the homework tomorrow then. I had implied that her son never paid any attention to the homework, but she didn't take it seriously or even got it. Besides, she would never use the polite words like,"thank you" and "please." That's why her son is so rude.

2.In the third lesson in the afternoon, a boy who sits in front of the teacher desk, kept transmitting notes under the desk(传纸条) with two girls sit behind him. I was reading at that time, but I could feel his eyes on me for many times before he passed or receipted a note. However, I pretended to focus on my book. It was quite funny, but I don't want to waste my time to stopped them because it really was not a big deal.

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Funny Stuffs

1.My phone rang when I was riding my bike today. I stopped to answer.

A boy starteaid, "teacher, I want to ask aould like to ask for some sick leave."

I replied, "who are you?"

He told me his name and the reason, that he had a toothache.

I told him to wait till 7 p.mPM, then I would signed the note for his leave.

If you use an acronyms make sure to include periods after every letter (i.e. p.m., see what I did there? :p)

It is a principrule that if students who live in the dormitory want to leave during the weekdays, the teacher needs to sign a note for them to make sure that the teacher knows their tracksituation.

Furtheremore, their parents also need to submit a request to the teacher.

After all these have doneat, the parents shouldmust go to the security room to sign a note, and then they can leave with the students.

The boy is thea guy who seldom takes part in the cleaning work and handing inrarely hands in his homework.

What's funny is that his parents never regard these issues as his fault but the teacher's instead.

His father even called me and tried to blame me by thesefor this stuff once ae time.

However, I strokeuck back and won.

Stroke is actually a different verb which is kinda like 软软的摸,can also mean 画/划 as a noun.

His mother sent me a message to me tonight.

I hestitated on whether I should toldell her that her son hadn't handed failed to hand in his homework a countless times, and was sovery noisy during some clasclass sometimes.

I really didn't want to waste my time to talking to her because she was so rude.

However, I told her in the end since she had connected with m, however, since it was she who had wanted to talk with me in the first place.

Changed the sentence a bit but this is probably the most natural and conveys the most about the situation.

She replied that she had aksked her son to complete the homework tonight and hand it to me tomorrow.

After a while ,Finally, here came the funniest part: she asked me what the homework was.

I replied that I had told the students on Sunday evening, and I had left the homework in my office, so I couldn't answer her question.

She said that her son would finish the homework tomorrow, then.

I had implied that her son never paid any attention to the homework, but she didn't take it seriously or even got ittry to understand what I was saying.

Besides, she would never use thed polite words like,such as "thank you" and "please."

Nice punctuation! No comma before the quote though, because it's not dialogue or an actual quotation.

That's why her son is so rude.

2.In the third lesson in the afternoon, a boy who sits in front of the teacher desk, kept transmittpassing notes under the desk(传纸条) with two girls sitting behind him. I was reading at that time, but I could feel his eyes on me for manya long times before he passed or receiptved a note.

However, I pretended to focus on my book.

It was quite funny, but I doidn't want to waste my time to stopped themdealing with it because it really was not a big deal.

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Nice job! Glad there's still some fun moments at work amongst the bad stuff

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sivanc

Nov. 2, 2021

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我也看得出来你用功试图进步英文能力!

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kiwy

Nov. 3, 2021

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我也看得出来你用功试图进步英文能力!

correct:“我也看得出来,你很用功去提高英语水平。”
英文更广泛用于港台地区。
试图更偏向贬义(pejorative n.)
提高水平,提高能力;进步is a noun,取得进步。

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kiwy

Nov. 3, 2021

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When I am unhappy about my job but I can't quit immediately, I will tell myself that I am observing the human world.(so sad☹️)

Funny Stuffs

1.My phone rang when I was riding my bike. I stopped to answer.

1.My phone rang when I was riding my bike today. I stopped to answer.

A boy started, "teacher, I want to ask a leave."

A boy starteaid, "teacher, I want to ask aould like to ask for some sick leave."

I replied, "who are you?"

He told me his name and the reason that he had a toothache.

He told me his name and the reason, that he had a toothache.

I told him to wait till 7 p.m, then I would signed the note for his leave.

I told him to wait till 7 p.mPM, then I would signed the note for his leave.

It is a principle that if students who live in the dormitory want to leave during the weekdays, the teacher need to sign a note for them to make sure that the teacher knows their track.

It is a principrule that if students who live in the dormitory want to leave during the weekdays, the teacher needs to sign a note for them to make sure that the teacher knows their tracksituation.

Furtheremore, their parents also need to submit a request to the teacher.

Furtheremore, their parents also need to submit a request to the teacher.

After all these have done, the parents should go to the security room to sign a note and then leave with the students.

After all these have doneat, the parents shouldmust go to the security room to sign a note, and then they can leave with the students.

The boy is the guy who seldom takes part in the cleaning work and handing in homework.

The boy is thea guy who seldom takes part in the cleaning work and handing inrarely hands in his homework.

What's funny is that his parents never regard these as his fault but the teacher's.

What's funny is that his parents never regard these issues as his fault but the teacher's instead.

His father even called me and tried to blame me by these stuff once a time.

His father even called me and tried to blame me by thesefor this stuff once ae time.

However, I stroke back and won.

However, I strokeuck back and won.

His mother sent a message to me tonight.

His mother sent me a message to me tonight.

I hestitated whether I should told her that her son hadn't handed homework a countless time, and was so noisy during some class.

I hestitated on whether I should toldell her that her son hadn't handed failed to hand in his homework a countless times, and was sovery noisy during some clasclass sometimes.

I really didn't want to waste my time to talk to her because she was so rude.

I really didn't want to waste my time to talking to her because she was so rude.

However, I told her in the end since she had connected with me.

However, I told her in the end since she had connected with m, however, since it was she who had wanted to talk with me in the first place.

She replied that she had aksed her son to complete the homework tonight and hand it to me tomorrow.

She replied that she had aksked her son to complete the homework tonight and hand it to me tomorrow.

After a while ,here came the funnist part: she asked me what the homework was.

After a while ,Finally, here came the funniest part: she asked me what the homework was.

I replied that I had told the students on Sunday evening, and I left the homework in office, so I couldn't answer her question.

I replied that I had told the students on Sunday evening, and I had left the homework in my office, so I couldn't answer her question.

She said that her son would finish the homework tomorrow then.

She said that her son would finish the homework tomorrow, then.

I had implied that her son never paid any attention to the homework, but she didn't take it seriously or even got it.

I had implied that her son never paid any attention to the homework, but she didn't take it seriously or even got ittry to understand what I was saying.

Besides, she would never use the polite words like,"thank you" and "please."

Besides, she would never use thed polite words like,such as "thank you" and "please."

That's why her son is so rude.

2.In the third lesson in the afternoon, a boy who sits in front of the teacher desk, kept transmitting notes under the desk(传纸条) with two girls sit behind him. I was reading at that time, but I could feel his eyes on me for many times before he passed or receipted a note.

2.In the third lesson in the afternoon, a boy who sits in front of the teacher desk, kept transmittpassing notes under the desk(传纸条) with two girls sitting behind him. I was reading at that time, but I could feel his eyes on me for manya long times before he passed or receiptved a note.

However, I pretended to focus on my book.

However, I pretended to focus on my book.

It was quite funny, but I don't want to waste my time to stopped them because it really was not a big deal.

It was quite funny, but I doidn't want to waste my time to stopped themdealing with it because it really was not a big deal.

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