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Full Moon and Friends

ponta 0 · Sept. 21

Target Language - English

These three days, it's been sunny without any clouds. I thought the summer was over, but it wasn't. Additionally, the moon was almost full moon, so I could see a very clear and beautiful moon over the starry sky last night. Moreover, my friends of mine came to visit me by chance, and I could show them around. I rarely enjoy my town's famous products and sightseeing spots even though I live here, and it was also interesting for me. Through the experience, I thought again that friends are one of the most valuable things in the world. I'll keep in touch with my friends and cultivate relationships.



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levicitodd 2 Oct. 6, 2021
These three days, it's been sunny without any clouds.

These past three days, it's been sunny without any clouds.

I thought the summer was over, but it wasn't.
Additionally, the moon was almost full moon, so I could see a very clear and beautiful moon over the starry sky last night.

Additionally, the moon was almost full moon, so I could see a very clear and beautiful moon over the starry sky last night.

Moreover, my friends of mine came to visit me by chance, and I could show them around.

Moreover, my friends of mine came to visit me by chance, and I could showed them around.

I rarely enjoy my town's famous products and sightseeing spots even though I live here, and it was also interesting for me.
I'll keep in touch with my friends and cultivate relationships.

Overall feedback & comment:

Great job, almost no errors!
Comment added on 10/06/2021