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Sept. 21, 2021

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Full Moon and Friends

These three days, it's been sunny without any clouds. I thought the summer was over, but it wasn't. Additionally, the moon was almost full moon, so I could see a very clear and beautiful moon over the starry sky last night. Moreover, my friends of mine came to visit me by chance, and I could show them around. I rarely enjoy my town's famous products and sightseeing spots even though I live here, and it was also interesting for me. Through the experience, I thought again that friends are one of the most valuable things in the world. I'll keep in touch with my friends and cultivate relationships.

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These past three days, it's been sunny without any clouds.

I thought the summer was over, but it wasn't.

Additionally, the moon was almost full moon, so I could see a very clear and beautiful moon over the starry sky last night.

Moreover, my friends of mine came to visit me by chance, and I could showed them around.

I rarely enjoy my town's famous products and sightseeing spots even though I live here, and it was also interesting for me.

I'll keep in touch with my friends and cultivate relationships.

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Full Moon and Friends

These three days, it's been sunny without any clouds.

These past three days, it's been sunny without any clouds.

I thought the summer was over, but it wasn't.

Additionally, the moon was almost full moon, so I could see a very clear and beautiful moon over the starry sky last night.

Additionally, the moon was almost full moon, so I could see a very clear and beautiful moon over the starry sky last night.

Moreover, my friends of mine came to visit me by chance, and I could show them around.

Moreover, my friends of mine came to visit me by chance, and I could showed them around.

I rarely enjoy my town's famous products and sightseeing spots even though I live here, and it was also interesting for me.

Through the experience, I thought again that friends are one of the most valuable things in the world.

I'll keep in touch with my friends and cultivate relationships.

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