March 6, 2021
On June 22nd, it was my friend's birthday. So, we went to a beer garden with our friend's to celebrate his birthday. We had prepared a birthday plate to supprise him without telling him. It looked like he was verry happy when my other friend brought the plate, but at the same time, I was also supprised because my name was also written on the plate like " Happy Birthday Shinpei(my friend's name) and Kazu(my name)". Actually, it's my birthday on June 29th, so my they had prepared without me knowing. I was really happy about that.
Friend's Birthday
On June 22nd, it was my friend's birthday.
So, we went to a beer garden with our friend's to celebrate his birthday.
We had prepared a birthday plate to suprprise him without telling him.
English = perfect.
But a birthday plate is not an expression we use.
Do you mean cake? present?
If you truly mean plate then you would need to write;
"We had prepared a special plate for his birthday to surprise him without telling him."
Also
Surprise means not telling him --> so --> "We had prepared a special plate for his birthday to surprise him" -- or -- ""We had prepared a special plate for his birthday without telling him"
It looked like he was verry happy when my other friend brought the plate, but at the same time, I was also suprprised because my name was also written on the plate like " Happy Birthday Shinpei(my friend's name) and Kazu(my name)".
Actually, it's my birthday on June 29th, so my they had also prepared it for me without me knowing.
I was really happy about that.
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Friend's Birthday |
On June 22nd, it was my friend's birthday. |
So, we went to a beer garden with our friend's to celebrate his birthday. So |
We had prepared a birthday plate to supprise him without telling him. We had prepared a birthday plate to su English = perfect.
But a birthday plate is not an expression we use. Do you mean cake? present? If you truly mean plate then you would need to write; "We had prepared a special plate for his birthday to surprise him without telling him." Also Surprise means not telling him --> so --> "We had prepared a special plate for his birthday to surprise him" -- or -- ""We had prepared a special plate for his birthday without telling him" |
It looked like he was verry happy when my other friend brought the plate, but at the same time, I was also supprised because my name was also written on the plate like " Happy Birthday Shinpei(my friend's name) and Kazu(my name)". It looked like he was ver |
Actually, it's my birthday on June 29th, so my they had prepared without me knowing. Actually, it's my birthday on June 29th, so |
I was really happy about that. |
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