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kazu

March 6, 2021

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Friend's Birthday

On June 22nd, it was my friend's birthday. So, we went to a beer garden with our friend's to celebrate his birthday. We had prepared a birthday plate to supprise him without telling him. It looked like he was verry happy when my other friend brought the plate, but at the same time, I was also supprised because my name was also written on the plate like " Happy Birthday Shinpei(my friend's name) and Kazu(my name)". Actually, it's my birthday on June 29th, so my they had prepared without me knowing. I was really happy about that.

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Friend's Birthday

On June 22nd, it was my friend's birthday.

So, we went to a beer garden with our friend's to celebrate his birthday.

We had prepared a birthday plate to suprprise him without telling him.

English = perfect.

But a birthday plate is not an expression we use.

Do you mean cake? present?

If you truly mean plate then you would need to write;

"We had prepared a special plate for his birthday to surprise him without telling him."

Also

Surprise means not telling him --> so --> "We had prepared a special plate for his birthday to surprise him" -- or -- ""We had prepared a special plate for his birthday without telling him"

It looked like he was verry happy when my other friend brought the plate, but at the same time, I was also suprprised because my name was also written on the plate like " Happy Birthday Shinpei(my friend's name) and Kazu(my name)".

Actually, it's my birthday on June 29th, so my they had also prepared it for me without me knowing.

I was really happy about that.

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That's a great story! :)

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kazu

March 12, 2021

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It was easy for me to understand thanks to your plain explanation.

Friend's Birthday

On June 22nd, it was my friend's birthday.

So, we went to a beer garden with our friend's to celebrate his birthday.

So, we went to a beer garden with our friend's to celebrate his birthday.

We had prepared a birthday plate to supprise him without telling him.

We had prepared a birthday plate to suprprise him without telling him.

It looked like he was verry happy when my other friend brought the plate, but at the same time, I was also supprised because my name was also written on the plate like " Happy Birthday Shinpei(my friend's name) and Kazu(my name)".

It looked like he was verry happy when my other friend brought the plate, but at the same time, I was also suprprised because my name was also written on the plate like " Happy Birthday Shinpei(my friend's name) and Kazu(my name)".

Actually, it's my birthday on June 29th, so my they had prepared without me knowing.

Actually, it's my birthday on June 29th, so my they had also prepared it for me without me knowing.

I was really happy about that.

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