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May 6, 2021

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Forgiving

More than fifteen years ago, my boyfriend broke up with me. I was deeply in love with him, for this reason I had a bad time.
I wasted a lot of energy trying to understand why. Was it my fault?. Was he in love with other person?. We were happy, weren't we?. I was angry and mislead. My attitude was taxing and after a while I understood there were no answers to this questions.
Finally I understood the only truth is that a relationship has to be balanced. If he was not anymore happy with our life, we could never be happy together. So maybe, breaking up was an honest decision. He was giving me the chance to find somebody that really cares about me. I felt so relieved and grateful.
Ever since I understood that, I try to forgive any person that hurts me. It's not always easy but in the long run it's more healthy.

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Forgiving

More than fifteen years ago, my boyfriend broke up with me.

I was deeply in love with him, for this reason. So I had a very bad time.

I wasted a lot of energy trying to understand why.

Was it my fault?.

Was he in love with another person?.

We were happy, weren't we?.

I was angry and mislead.

My attitude was taxing and after a while I understood there were no answers to thisese questions.

Taxing? Did you mean that your attitude was mentally/physically taxing to you?

Finally, I understood the only. The truth is that, a relationship has to be balanced.

If he was not anymore longer happy with our life, we could have never been happy together.

So maybe, breaking up was an hones good/the right decision.

Honest doesn't seem right here.

He was giving me the chance to find somebody that really caresd about me.

I felt so relieved and grateful.

Ever since I understood that, I try to forgive any person that hurts me.

It's not always easy but in the long run it's more healthy. But it's healthier in the long run.

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Forgiving

More than fifteen years ago, my boyfriend broke up with me.

I was deeply in love with him, for this reason I had a bad time.

I was deeply in love with him, for this reason. So I had a very bad time.

I wasted a lot of energy trying to understand why.

Was it my fault?.

Was it my fault?.

Was he in love with other person?.

Was he in love with another person?.

We were happy, weren't we?.

We were happy, weren't we?.

I was angry and mislead.

I was angry and mislead.

My attitude was taxing and after a while I understood there were no answers to this questions.

My attitude was taxing and after a while I understood there were no answers to thisese questions.

Finally I understood the only truth is that a relationship has to be balanced.

Finally, I understood the only. The truth is that, a relationship has to be balanced.

If he was not anymore happy with our life, we could never be happy together.

If he was not anymore longer happy with our life, we could have never been happy together.

So maybe, breaking up was an honest decision.

So maybe, breaking up was an hones good/the right decision.

He was giving me the chance to find somebody that really cares about me.

He was giving me the chance to find somebody that really caresd about me.

I felt so relieved and grateful.

Ever since I understood that, I try to forgive any person that hurts me.

It's not always easy but in the long run it's more healthy.

It's not always easy but in the long run it's more healthy. But it's healthier in the long run.

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