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kazu

April 1, 2021

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Foreign Workers

I learned about foreign workers when I was university student because I wanted to know why they work in a country other than their birth country. What makes them do that? I was able to reach a conclusion. They go to work in a country other than their brith coutry to seize a great opportunity to earn money, especially Southeast Asian people.

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Foreign Workers

I learned about foreign workers when I was university student because I wanted to know why they work in a country other than their birth country.

I learned about foreign workers when I was a university student because I wanted to know why they work in a country other than their birth country.

What makes them do that?

Foreign Workers

I learned about foreign workers when I was university student because I wanted to know why they choose to work in a country other than their birth country.

I think adding "choose to" is more precise because you are interested in their decision.

What makes them do that?

I was able to reach a conclusion.

They go to work in a country other than their brirth country to seize a great opportunity to earn money, and this is especially true of Southeast Asian people.

just writing "especially Southeast Asian people" is a dangling participle because it does not refer to a specific noun.

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kazu

April 2, 2021

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Thank you for your collection:)

Foreign Workers

I learned about foreign workers when I was university student because I wanted to know why they work in a country other than their birth country.

I learned about foreign workers when I was university student because I wanted to know why they choose to work in a country other than their birth country.

I learned about foreign workers when I was university student because I wanted to know why they work in a country other than their birth country.

What makes them do that?

I was able to reach a conclusion.

They go to work in a country other than their brith coutry to seize a great opportunity to earn money, especially Southeast Asian people.

They go to work in a country other than their brirth country to seize a great opportunity to earn money, and this is especially true of Southeast Asian people.

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