April 1, 2021
Foreign Workers
I learned about foreign workers when I was university student because I wanted to know why they work in a country other than their birth country. What makes them do that? I was able to reach a conclusion. They go to work in a country other than their brith coutry to seize a great opportunity to earn money, especially Southeast Asian people.
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Foreign Workers
I learned about foreign workers when I was university student because I wanted to know why they work in a country other than their birth country. I learned about foreign workers when I was university student because I wanted to know why they work in a country other than their birth country.
I learned about foreign workers when I was a university student because I wanted to know why they work in a country other than their birth country.
What makes them do that?
Foreign Workers
I learned about foreign workers when I was university student because I wanted to know why they choose to work in a country other than their birth country. I learned about foreign workers when I was university student because I wanted to know why they choose to work in a country other than their birth country.
I think adding "choose to" is more precise because you are interested in their decision.
What makes them do that?
I was able to reach a conclusion.
They go to work in a country other than their brirth country to seize a great opportunity to earn money, and this is especially true of Southeast Asian people.
They go to work in a country other than their birth country to seize a great opportunity to earn money, and this is especially true of Southeast Asian people.
just writing "especially Southeast Asian people" is a dangling participle because it does not refer to a specific noun.
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April 2, 2021
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I learned about foreign workers when I was university student because I wanted to know why they work in a country other than their birth country. I learned about foreign workers when I was university student because I wanted to know why they choose to work in a country other than their birth country. I learned about foreign workers when I was university student because I wanted to know why they choose to work in a country other than their birth country. I think adding "choose to" is more precise because you are interested in their decision. I learned about foreign workers when I was university student because I wanted to know why they work in a country other than their birth country. I learned about foreign workers when I was university student because I wanted to know why they work in a country other than their birth country. I learned about foreign workers when I was a university student because I wanted to know why they work in a country other than their birth country. |
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They go to work in a country other than their brith coutry to seize a great opportunity to earn money, especially Southeast Asian people.
They go to work in a country other than their b just writing "especially Southeast Asian people" is a dangling participle because it does not refer to a specific noun. |
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