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perth

July 30, 2023

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follow others' advice better than my inner-self ?

when the time of change comes in my life, I often choose to listen and follow others' advice more than myself. I used to think that the right path was because they wish me well and they know the world better than me, But now I realize this thought might be wrong because their advice may be right at their age but will not be for today. the world changes all the time and the thing that you are good at and not hate will return value to you in some way finally.

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when theDuring times of change comes in my life, I often choose to listen and follow others' advice more than myselfd to rely on the advice of others more than my own instincts.

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tThe world changes all the time and the thing that you are good at and not hate will return value to you in some way finallyis constantly evolving, but if you excel in something you enjoy, it will eventually bring value to your life.

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perth

Aug. 2, 2023

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Thanks again 😇

Is following others' advice better than following my inner-self ?

wWhen the times of change comes into my life, I often choose to listen and follow others' advice more than myself.

I used to think thatit was the right path was, because they wish me well and they know the world better than me,. But now, I realize this thought might be wrong because their advice may be right at their age but will not be for me today.

tThe world changes all the time, and the things that you are good at and do not hate will return value to you in some way finally.

You could also use “enjoy” instead of “do not hate”. Instead of “finally,” you could also use “in the future.”

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perth

July 30, 2023

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Thank you very much for your kind 😇

follow others' advice better than my inner-self ?


Is following others' advice better than following my inner-self ?

follow others' advice better thanIs it better to listen to my inner- self ?than the advice of others?¶

when the time of change comes in my life, I often choose to listen and follow others' advice more than myself.


wWhen the times of change comes into my life, I often choose to listen and follow others' advice more than myself.

when theDuring times of change comes in my life, I often choose to listen and follow others' advice more than myselfd to rely on the advice of others more than my own instincts.

I used to think that the right path was because they wish me well and they know the world better than me, But now I realize this thought might be wrong because their advice may be right at their age but will not be for today.


I used to think thatit was the right path was, because they wish me well and they know the world better than me,. But now, I realize this thought might be wrong because their advice may be right at their age but will not be for me today.

I used to thbelieve that followinkg thate advice of others was the right path waschoice because they wish me well and they know the world better than me, But now I realize this thought might be wrong because their advice may be right at their age but will not be for todayhave good intentions and more life experience. However, I have come to realize that their guidance may not be relevant to today's world.

the world changes all the time and the thing that you are good at and not hate will return value to you in some way finally.


tThe world changes all the time, and the things that you are good at and do not hate will return value to you in some way finally.

You could also use “enjoy” instead of “do not hate”. Instead of “finally,” you could also use “in the future.”

tThe world changes all the time and the thing that you are good at and not hate will return value to you in some way finallyis constantly evolving, but if you excel in something you enjoy, it will eventually bring value to your life.

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