May 17, 2022
finding out about the history of the house or building
In some countries, more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in.
What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question?
In the present society, a myriad of people from some nations is curious about the origin of their houses or building. The curiosity about Interesting stories about the past and the concern about the places can be two rational and primary for this. In this essay, two reasons and the way to learn about this would be discussed.
The first reason worth mentioning is that we live in a modern-day, where a range of intriguing stories about the past exists, which leads to the attraction of knowledge about the past. The gone-by invention and achievement were hyped in media and through word of mouth. That leads to the eagerness to find the own origin of the home. The second reason is the insecurity of people about the place they live. When people do not grasp firm knowledge about their home, they sometimes feel confused about what happened in the past in their home. When they are clear about what has gone on in their place, they feel more secure and safe.
In this modern-day, the biggest source for finding information is the internet. First of all, surfing the internet is the first and necessary step to approach knowledge. However, not all information about local homes and buildings is not available and save on the internet. In this situation, asking local people or relatives is the optimal choice. People, who live in the same area, can have some knowledge about their neighborhood.
In the light of the above analysis, curiosity and seeking the feeling of security could be two of the reasons for finding out about the origin of the place people live. To do this, searching on the internet and asking the local people could be the way.
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In some countries, more people are becoming interested in (finding out about) the history of the house or building they live in.
How can people research the answer to this question?
You don't really research a question directly
In the present-day society, a myriads of people from somecertain nations isare curious about the origin of their houses or building.
It's a bit jarring to read "a myriad" (a large quantity) and then jump straight to "some nations" (small quantity)
Their curiosity about Iinteresting stories aboutof the past and the concerns about the places can be two rational and primary for this.
"two rational and primary" -> I don't understand this bit?
Avoid using "this" too much because it gets ambigious as to what you are referring to.
In this essay, two reasons and the way to learn about this wouldill be discussed.
Usually when you write a thesis, you have to explicitly state your ideas (what are your two reasons and what is the "way to learn about this"?). Otherwise, it's quite ambigious and the reader doesn't know what to expect.
The gone-by inventions and achievements were hyped in the media and through word of mouth, which kindled people's eagerness to find the origin of their own home.
hype is quite colloquial, you could use "promoted by the media" but I don't understand which "inventions and achievements" you are referring to, so it might not work.
That leads to the eagerness to find the own origin of the home.
I joined the sentence to the previous one
The second reason is thepeople's insecurity of people about their place they livof residence.
A bit formal to say "place of residence" but it's a good enough synonym to avoid repeating "place where you live"
When people do not grasp firm knowledge abouthave a firm understanding of their home, they will sometimes feel confused about what happened in the past in their homethe events that took place there in the past.
"grasp firm knowledge" sounds strange to me
try not to repeat "their home" so much :)
When they are clearfeel informed about what has gone on in their place, they feel more secure and safe.
Clear doesn't really work here
In this modern-day setting, the bigggreatest source ofor finding information is the internet.
Modern day is not a noun, it's an adjective. You have to have a noun after it or use a different word.
First of all, surfing the internet is the first and necessary step to approaching knowledge.
However, not all information about local homes and buildings is not available and saved on the internet.
In this situation, asking local people or relatives is the optimal choice.
People, who live in the same area, can have some knowledge about their neighborhood.
"People who live in the same area" is all one clause so there is no commas
In the light of the above analysis, curiosity and seeking the feeling of security could be two of the reasons forthat drive people to finding out about the origin of the place people liveir homes.
To do this, searching on the internet and asking the local people could be the way.
Aug. 1, 2022
thank you very much <3
In the present society, a myriad of people from some nations isare curious about the origin of their houses or buildings.
Aug. 1, 2022
thank you very much <3
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finding out about the history of the house or building
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In some countries, more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. In some countries, more people are becoming interested in (finding out about) the history of the house or building they live in. |
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What are the reasons for this? |
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How can people research this question? How can people research the answer to this question? You don't really research a question directly
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In the present society, a myriad of people from some nations is curious about the origin of their houses or building. In the present society, a myriad of people from some nations In It's a bit jarring to read "a myriad" (a large quantity) and then jump straight to "some nations" (small quantity)
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The curiosity about Interesting stories about the past and the concern about the places can be two rational and primary for this. Their curiosity about "two rational and primary" -> I don't understand this bit?
Avoid using "this" too much because it gets ambigious as to what you are referring to. |
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In this essay, two reasons and the way to learn about this would be discussed. In this essay, two reasons and the way to learn about this w Usually when you write a thesis, you have to explicitly state your ideas (what are your two reasons and what is the "way to learn about this"?). Otherwise, it's quite ambigious and the reader doesn't know what to expect.
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The first reason worth mentioning is that we live in a modern-day, where a range of intriguing stories about the past exists, which leads to the attraction of knowledge about the past. |
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The gone-by invention and achievement were hyped in media and through word of mouth. The gone-by inventions and achievements were hyped in the media and through word of mouth, which kindled people's eagerness to find the origin of their own home. hype is quite colloquial, you could use "promoted by the media" but I don't understand which "inventions and achievements" you are referring to, so it might not work.
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That leads to the eagerness to find the own origin of the home.
I joined the sentence to the previous one
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The second reason is the insecurity of people about the place they live. The second reason is A bit formal to say "place of residence" but it's a good enough synonym to avoid repeating "place where you live"
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When people do not grasp firm knowledge about their home, they sometimes feel confused about what happened in the past in their home. When people do not "grasp firm knowledge" sounds strange to me
try not to repeat "their home" so much :) |
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When they are clear about what has gone on in their place, they feel more secure and safe. When they are Clear doesn't really work here
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In this modern-day, the biggest source for finding information is the internet. In this modern-day setting, the Modern day is not a noun, it's an adjective. You have to have a noun after it or use a different word.
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First of all, surfing the internet is the first and necessary step to approach knowledge. First of all, surfing the internet is the first and necessary step to approaching knowledge. |
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However, not all information about local homes and buildings is not available and save on the internet. However, not all information about local homes and buildings is |
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In this situation, asking local people or relatives is the optimal choice. |
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People, who live in the same area, can have some knowledge about their neighborhood. People "People who live in the same area" is all one clause so there is no commas
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In the light of the above analysis, curiosity and seeking the feeling of security could be two of the reasons for finding out about the origin of the place people live. In the light of the above analysis, curiosity and seeking the feeling of security could be two of the reasons |
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To do this, searching on the internet and asking the local people could be the way. |
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