May 25, 2023
FCE B2 Writing Part1 Essay - Planting tree
Must include:
1. Clear the air
2. Shade
3. My own idea
The essay:
In the last 100 years, our planet has suffered the most important deforestation in its entire history. Only a century has been enough to see how 3/4 of the green surfaces have disappeared due to human activities.
If each person on the planet born in the 20th century had planted a tree along his or her life, we wouldn't have gotten the actual levels of pollution in our cities because the resulting forests grown would have helped to clear the air and reduce contamination.
Nevertheless, we are on time to revert this situation. Small actions like planting a tree can make the difference between a devastated Earth in the next century and a planet where we will be able to inhabit in brotherhood with nature.
In addition, those big vegetation areas would have provided shade and fresher conditions that had minimized the global warming effect produced by gases and high temperatures.
To sum up, although it seems a bit late, today is better than tomorrow for starting to help our environment and, in the end, ourselves.
FCE B2 Writing Part1 Essay - Planting trees
Must include: 1.
Clear the air 2.
Shade 3.
My own idea
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The essay:
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In the last 100 years, our planet has suffered the most importsignificant deforestation in its entire history.
Only a century has been enough topassed at we now see how 3/4 of the green surfaces have disappeared due to human activities.
If each person on the planet, born in the 20th century had planted a tree aloduring his or her life, we wouldn't have gotten the actualreached these levels of pollution in our cities because the resulting forests grown would have helped to clear the air and reduce contamination.
Nevertheless, we are onhave time to revertse this situation.
Small actions like planting a tree can make the difference between a devastated Earth in the next century and a planet where we will be able to inhabit in brotherhoodlive in harmony with nature.
In addition, thoese big vegetation areas would have provided shade and freshbetter conditions that hado minimized the effect of global warming effect produced by gases and high temperatures.
To sum up, although it seems a bit late, today is better than tomorrow for starting to help our environment and, in the end, ourselves.
May 26, 2023
Thank you so much indeed! Keep working for the exam...
My own idea
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The essay:
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Over the last 100 years, our planet has suffered the most importantdevastating deforestation ( in its entire history / of all time ).
Only a century has been enoughIt has only taken a century to see how 3/4 of the green surfpaces have disappeared due to human activitiesy.
I'm not 100% sure what you mean with "green surfaces".
If eachvery person on the planet born in the 20th century had planted a tree along his or hein their life, we wouldn' not have gotten the actualreached current levels of pollution in our cities. This is because of the resulting forests grown would have helped to clearing the air and reduce contaminationof pollutants.
I think this sentence reads more easily if it is divided into two.
Nevertheless, we are onthis is the time to revert this situation.
Small actions, like planting a tree, can makbe the difference between a devastated Earth in the next century and a planet where we will be able toone that we can inhabit in brotherhoodunity with nature.
Brotherhood is usually something we use when referring to groups of people, not concepts or ideas.
In addition, those bigareas of vegetation areas would have provided the shade and fresher conditions that hadnecessary to minimized the effects of global warming effect produced bycaused by ( greenhouse ) gases and highrising temperatures.
To sum up, although it ( seems / may seem ) a bit late, today is better than tomorrow for starting to help ourhelping the environment and, ( in the end, / ultimately ) ourselves.
I think in English, "now is better than never" would be a more commonly used phrase.
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Good job!
May 26, 2023
Thank you so much! I have a lot of work to do yet :)
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FCE B2 Writing Part1 Essay - Planting tree FCE B2 Writing Part1 Essay - Planting trees |
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Must include: 1. |
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Clear the air 2. |
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Shade 3. |
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My own idea The essay: In the last 100 years, our planet has suffered the most important deforestation in its entire history. My own idea My own idea |
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Only a century has been enough to see how 3/4 of the green surfaces have disappeared due to human activities.
I'm not 100% sure what you mean with "green surfaces".
Only a century has |
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If each person on the planet born in the 20th century had planted a tree along his or her life, we wouldn't have gotten the actual levels of pollution in our cities because the resulting forests grown would have helped to clear the air and reduce contamination. If e I think this sentence reads more easily if it is divided into two.
If each person on the planet, born in the 20th century had planted a tree |
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Nevertheless, we are on time to revert this situation. Nevertheless, Nevertheless, we |
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Small actions like planting a tree can make the difference between a devastated Earth in the next century and a planet where we will be able to inhabit in brotherhood with nature. Small actions, like planting a tree, can Brotherhood is usually something we use when referring to groups of people, not concepts or ideas.
Small actions like planting a tree can make the difference between a devastated Earth in the next century and a planet where we will be able to |
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In addition, those big vegetation areas would have provided shade and fresher conditions that had minimized the global warming effect produced by gases and high temperatures. In addition, In addition, th |
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To sum up, although it seems a bit late, today is better than tomorrow for starting to help our environment and, in the end, ourselves. To sum up, although it ( seems / may seem ) a bit late, today is better than tomorrow for I think in English, "now is better than never" would be a more commonly used phrase.
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