Oct. 21, 2020
Fast fashion
You should stop buying fast fashion. Young people often buy trendy, cheap items that go out of style quickly, and they throw them away. Instead, you should buy quality clothing that will not wear out fast. Most fast fashion comes from China and other Asian countries, so shipping it to Japan requires the use of fossil fuels. The fashion industry accounts for 10 % of annual global carbon dioxide emissions. At this pace, the fashion industry’s emissions will be more than 50 % by 2030. Quality clothing is not so cheap, but it is worth the price, not only because they look nice, but because they are environmentally friendly.
Fast fashion
You should stop buying fast fashion.
Young people often buy trendy, cheap items that go out of style quickly, and they (then) throw them away.
The original was grammatical, but this makes it clearer that it's a consequence of going out of style.
Instead, you should buy quality clothing that will not wear out fast.
Most fast fashion comes from China and other Asian countries, so shipping it to Japan requires the use of fossil fuels.
The fashion industry accounts for 10 % of annual global carbon dioxide emissions.
At this pacee pace at which it is currently developing, the fashion industry’s emissions will be more than 50 % by 2030.
"This pace" didn't make sense because you didn't describe an on-going trend earlier.
Quality clothing is not so cheap, but it is worth the price, not only because ithey looks nice, but because they areit is environmentally friendly.
"Clothing" is singular, "clothes" is plural.
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Great! Few errors, and most of the things that I fixed were more for clarity and style.
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You should stop buying fast fashion. |
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Young people often buy trendy, cheap items that go out of style quickly, and they throw them away. Young people often buy trendy, cheap items that go out of style quickly, and they (then) throw them away. The original was grammatical, but this makes it clearer that it's a consequence of going out of style.
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Instead, you should buy quality clothing that will not wear out fast. |
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Most fast fashion comes from China and other Asian countries, so shipping it to Japan requires the use of fossil fuels. |
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The fashion industry accounts for 10 % of annual global carbon emissions. |
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At this pace, the fashion industry’s emissions will be more than 50 % by 2030. At th "This pace" didn't make sense because you didn't describe an on-going trend earlier.
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Quality clothing is not so cheap, but it is worth the price, not only because they look nice, but because they are environmentally friendly. Quality clothing is not so cheap, but it is worth the price, not only because it "Clothing" is singular, "clothes" is plural.
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The fashion industry accounts for 10 % of annual global carbon dioxide emissions. The fashion industry accounts for 10 |
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