April 8, 2022
Essay: car park or history museum
You must answer this question. Write your answer in 220-260 words in an appropriate style.
You have listened to a radio discussion programme about which facilities are needed most in your area.
You have made the notes below:
Which facilitis are needed most in your area?
- Car park.
- Sport centre.
- History museum.
Write an essay discussing two of the facilities in your notes. You should explain which facility is needed most in your area, giving reasons in support of your answer.
You may, if you whish, make use of the opinions expressed in the discussion, but you should use your own words as far as possible.
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(What could make it sound more natural? )
I recently listened to a discussion in a local radio program about the the lack of some important facilities in our town, such as a history museum and a parking area for residents' cars.
Those are not essential facilities for citizens, what it is good, as this indicate the comfort level in this area. That is likely to be the most reasonable reason why most people in the program were declined to build a new history museum, instead of wasting the public space for a car park, an option which only car owners benefits from it, like I heard from some participants in the discussion. Moreover, this city is an universitary one, so presumably most of the citizens during the course period, that is to say students from different parts of the country, will not need a car park for anything but to wrong-doings, as it is the perfect place to be hidden from the watchful eye of the police.
As regards to building a new museum, it is likely not an interesting idea for people of all ages, as I just explained above. However, it is an interesting place to make students from the differenst schools of our city getting into depth in our local history, far beyond what they have learnt in their classes. Therefore, it is at least an interesting tool for teachers to get their student involved in the subject.
All in all, without going into details, I consider that museums are the facilities most needed and less care for within the topic of the radio program.
What could make it sound more natural?
I recently listened to a discussion in a local radio program about the the lack of some important facilities in our town, such as a history museum and a parking area for residents' cars.
Those are not essential facilities for citizens, what it is good, as this indicate the comfort levelich is a sign of the good-quality infrastructure that is present in thise area.
That is most likely to be the most reasonable reason why most of the people in the program were declined to build a new history museum, instead of (?) wasting the public space for a car park, an option which only car owners benefits from it, like I heard from some participants in the discussion.
no entiendo esta parte , ya dijiste que tanto el museo como el espacio para aparcar los coches no eran muy necesarios, entonces por qué hay un contraste aquí?
Moreover, this city is home to an universitary one, so presumably most of the citizens during the course period, that is to say students from different parts of the country, will not need a car park for anything but to wrong-doingsy, so it's probable that most of the inhabitants will only use the car park to commit criminal acts during the school term, as it is the perfect place to be hiddenhide from the watchful eye of the police.
However, it iscould be an interesting place to makefor students from the differenst schools of our city getting into depthlve into our local history, fargoing beyond what they have learnt in their classes.
Therefore, it is at the very least an interesting tool for teachers to get their student(s) involved in the subject.
All in all, without going into too much details, I consider that museums arto be the facilities most neededthat are lacking the most and less care for (?) within the topic of the radio program.
no entiendo esta parte.
April 8, 2022
No pude entender algunas partes, quizá puedas decirme en español qué es lo que querías decir, voy a traducirlo.
April 16, 2022
Muchas gracias de nuevo Applebubble por tus correcciones. He visto lo que me decías y lo he cambiado para que tenga sentido. Cualquier ayuda o pregunta que tengas en español sólo tienes que escribirme.
April 16, 2022
claro q sí. Un abrazo.
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Essay: car park or history museum |
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You must answer this question. |
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Write your answer in 220-260 words in an appropriate style. |
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You have listened to a radio discussion programme about which facilities are needed most in your area. |
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You have made the notes below: |
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Which facilitis are needed most in your area? |
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- Car park. |
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- Sport centre. |
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- History museum. |
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Write an essay discussing two of the facilities in your notes. |
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You should explain which facility is needed most in your area, giving reasons in support of your answer. |
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You may, if you whish, make use of the opinions expressed in the discussion, but you should use your own words as far as possible. |
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(What could make it sound more natural? ) |
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I recently listened to a discussion in a local radio program about the the lack of some important facilities in our town, such as a history museum and a parking area for residents' cars. I recently listened to a discussion in a local radio program about the |
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Those are not essential facilities for citizens, what it is good, as this indicate the comfort level in this area. Those are not essential facilities for citizens, wh |
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That is likely to be the most reasonable reason why most people in the program were declined to build a new history museum, instead of wasting the public space for a car park, an option which only car owners benefits from it, like I heard from some participants in the discussion. That is most likely no entiendo esta parte , ya dijiste que tanto el museo como el espacio para aparcar los coches no eran muy necesarios, entonces por qué hay un contraste aquí?
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Moreover, this city is an universitary one, so presumably most of the citizens during the course period, that is to say students from different parts of the country, will not need a car park for anything but to wrong-doings, as it is the perfect place to be hidden from the watchful eye of the police. Moreover, this city is home to a |
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As regards to building a new museum, it is likely not an interesting idea for people of all ages, as I just explained above. |
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However, it is an interesting place to make students from the differenst schools of our city getting into depth in our local history, far beyond what they have learnt in their classes. However, it |
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Therefore, it is at least an interesting tool for teachers to get their student involved in the subject. Therefore, it is at the very least an interesting tool for teachers to get their student(s) involved in the subject. |
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All in all, without going into details, I consider that museums are the facilities most needed and less care for within the topic of the radio program. All in all, without going into too much detail no entiendo esta parte.
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