Dec. 29, 2019
Essay about the effects of internet in today's world
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world.
Nowadays, most people own a phone or have a computer in their home, and they are able to get access to Internet through these devices. Consequently, usage of the online network affects our life much wide range than ever. Personally, I'm of the opinion that we get a positive effect by using Internet more widely. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will present in the following essay.
First of all, we are able to be more openly to each other in the world. By using the Internet, people can communicate and share their ideas, so it is more easily to understand them and know about their opinions. It is an effective chance to free ourselves about negative or misunderstood thinking to individuals who don't share the same belief with us. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Before I was using the Internet, I was feeling passively about other countries and their societies. Afterwards, I was able to connect to the internet. At that time, I became more willing to understand other people and try to correct my previous thoughts.
Secondly, it is handy to learn new knowledge and get better education. Online courses and learning from YouTube videos are two examples of unitizing the good aspect of internet. A person can learn and improve his/her skills by only visiting these websites. For this reason, some individuals are taking online courses to help strengthen their resume. I have my own background on this. Seven years ago, when I was studying engineering in college, I faced troubles grasping essential concepts on one of my courses. After some time, I talked with my friend about this issue, and he advise me to think about learning from internet. After few days, I start watching some videos and registered on a website and start attending online classes. By the end of semester, I was surprised of the results I made in that course!
In conclusion, I strongly believe that internet is beneficial to people and made their life more productive. This is because it made us more acceptable to other opinions and beliefs, and because it allows us to be gain more knowledge and become self-educated.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Overall, the widespread use of the iInternet has had a mostly positive effect on life in today's world.
Nowadays, most people own a phone or have a computer in their home, and they are able to get access to the Internet through these devices.
Consequently, usage of the online network affects our life muchto a wide rangr degree than ever before.
Personally, I' am of the opinion that we get a positive effect by using Internet more widely.
In an essay, avoid contractions "don't, i'm, won't". It is good in everyday speech, but an essay is formal.
I feel this way for two reasons, which I will present in the following essay.
First of all, we are able to be more openly to each other in the world.
By using the Internet, people can communicate and share their ideas, so it is more easilyer to understand them and know about their opinions.
It is an effective chancemethod to free ourselves aboutfrom negative or misunderstood thinking abouto individuals who don't share the same belief withs as us.
My personal experience is a compelling example of this.
Before I was usingused the Internet, I was feelingfelt passively about other countries and their societies.
Afterwards, I was able to connect to the iInternet.
At that time, I became more willing to understand other people and to try to correct my previous thoughts.
Secondly, it is handy tofor learning new knowledge and to get a better education.
Online courses and learning from YouTube videos are two examples of unittilizing the good aspects of ithe Internet.
A person can learn and improve his/her skills by onlyjust visiting these websites.
For this reason, some individuals are taking online courses to help strengthen their resumes.
I have my own background onexperience with this.
Seven years ago, when I was studying engineering in college, I faced troubldifficulties grasping essential concepts onf one of my courses.
After some time, I talked with my friend about this issue, and he advised me to think about learning from ithe Internet.
After a few days, I started watching some videos and, registered on a website and started attending online classes.
By the end of the semester, I was surprised ofby the progresults I made in that course!
In conclusion, I strongly believe that ithe Internet is beneficial to people and madekes their lifeves more productive.
This is because it made us more acceptable totolerant of other opinions and beliefs, and because it allows us to be gain more knowledge and become self-educated.
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Contractions = won't, don't can't, I'm etc. These are good when talking with friends or saving paper. In an essay, they are bad.
Dec. 31, 2019
Thank you for your assistant. I will take your note in my mind next time.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world.
Nowadays, most people own a phone or have a computer in their home, and they are able to get access to Internet through these devices.
Nowadays, most people own a phone or have a computer in their home, and they are able to get access to Iinternet through these devices.
Consequently, usage of the online network affects our life much wide rangore than ever.
Personally, I'm of the opinion that we get a positive effect by using Internet more widely.
I feel this way for two reasons, which I will present in the following essay.
First of all, we are able to be more openly to each other in the world.
I corrected the grammar here, but the meaning is still not quite clear. What you have written suggests “we can be more honest with each other”, but I can’t quite be sure. I’d recommend trying to find another way to phrase it.
By using the Internet, people can communicate and share their ideas, so it is more easily to understand them and know about their opinions.
It is an effective chance to free ourselves aboutfrom negative or misunderstood thinking to individuals who don't share the same belief with us.
My personal experience is a compelling example of this.
Before I was using the Internet, I was feelingfelt passively about other countries and their societies.
Again, I don’t quite know what you mean here. Do you mean that you weren’t interested?
I’m afraid I can’t explain why this should be “felt” rather than “was feeling”. They’re both grammatically correct, but “felt” sounds more natural to me, even though it was happening over an extended period. English is a strange language! 🙄😆
AfLaterwards, I was able to connect to the internet.
At that time, I became more willing to understand other people and try to correct my previous thoughts.
Secondly, it is handy to learn new knowledge and get better education.
Online courses and learning from YouTube videos are two examples of unitiztilising the good aspect of internet.
I think that’s just a spelling error. I spelt it the British way, but if you’re learning American English it might be “utilizing” with a “z”.
A person can learn and improve his/her skills by only visiting these websites.
A person can learn and improve his/her skills by onsimply visiting these websites.
This isn’t an important correction. Your way works well too — it’s more a matter of style really.
For this reason, some individuals are takingtake online courses to help strengthen their resume.
Simple present here, since they aren’t currently right at this very second in the process of doing it.
I have my own background on this.
Seven years ago, when I was studying engineering in college, I faced troubles grasping essential concepts on one of my courses.
After some time, I talked with my friend about this issue, and he advise me to think about learning from internet.
After few days, I started watching some videos and, registered on a website and started attending online classes.
By the end of semester, I was surprised of the results I made in that course!
In conclusion, I strongly believe that internet is beneficial to people and made their life more productive.
This is because it made us more acceptableing to other opinions and beliefs, and because it allows us to be gain more knowledge and become self-educated.
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You have very good grammar here, there are just a few confusions in meaning, but that might just be me being dumb 😉😅
Dec. 29, 2019
First of all, we are able to be more openly to each other in the world.
I corrected the grammar here, but the meaning is still not quite clear. What you have written suggests “we can be more honest with each other”, but I can’t quite be sure. I’d recommend trying to find another way to phrase it.
“To be open to someone” is most likely the phrase you are looking for, but it also means to be vulnerable.
Dec. 31, 2019
First of all, we are able to be more openly to each other in the world.
I corrected the grammar here, but the meaning is still not quite clear. What you have written suggests “we can be more honest with each other”, but I can’t quite be sure. I’d recommend trying to find another way to phrase it.
How about this: "First of all, we become more receptive to each other" ?
Dec. 31, 2019
Before I was using the Internet, I was feelingfelt passively about other countries and their societies.
Again, I don’t quite know what you mean here. Do you mean that you weren’t interested?
I’m afraid I can’t explain why this should be “felt” rather than “was feeling”. They’re both grammatically correct, but “felt” sounds more natural to me, even though it was happening over an extended period. English is a strange language! 🙄😆
I meant here that I had a negative assumptions about others in the would before I access to Internet.
Dec. 31, 2019
Thank you for your help and corrections! I hope you find your way easy to Japanese.
EAn essay about the effects of internet in today's world
I would say your original was okay, but An Essay adds a bit of a contemporary flavour to it in my opinion.
Overall, the widespread use of the internet has had a mostly positive effect on life in today's world.
Again, the original was okay, but my correction "has had" sounds a bit more native.
Consequently, usage of the online networks affects our life to a much wide rangr degree than ever.
No particular network, right, several networks? :) Also, "much wider range" would be a correct expression on its own, but it doesn't fit in this context. When discussing an effect, we say the "degree" of the effect.
Personally, I'm of the opinion that we get aare positive ely affected by using Internet more widely.
Although your expression was correct grammatically, a native speaker would express it through the verb "to affect".
First of all, we are able to be more openly to each other in the world.
It is an effective good chance to free ourselves aboutfrom negative or misunderstood thinking toideas about individuals who don't share the same belief withas us.
"Chance" would not be described by "effective" by a native speaker. Sorry, but it just doesn't sound right. :( Also, one is freed "from" ideas/thinking, not "about".
Before I was using the Internet, I was feelingfelt passively about other countries and their societies.
I feel that the whole expression is a little improperly done, so maybe you could respond to this and explain what you meant a little more clearly?
Afterwards some time, I was able to connect to the internet.
Most speakers would specify a point of reference, like after how long, or after what, so maybe add that next time. :)
Secondly, it is handy tofor learning new knowledge and get better education.
This sentence is correct on its own, but it doesn't reference the internet, just that *learning is handy*, not that *the internet [it] is handy* for learning.
Online courses and learning from YouTube videos are two examples of unitilizing the good aspect of internet.
I think this was just a spelling mistake.
I have my own background onexperience with this.
"Background" doesn't sound very natural here. "Experience" fits better.
Seven years ago, when I was studying engineering in college, I faced troubles grasping essential concepts ofrom/in one of my courses.
Either "from" or "in" works, but not "on".
After some time, I talked with my friend about this issue, and he advise me to thinkconsider about learning from internet.
"To consider" sounds, again, more like what a native speaker would say.
After few days, I start watching some videos and, registered on a website, and started attending online classes.
Remember, and is only used with the last member of a list. Also, "started" past tense.
By the end of semester, I was surprised ofwith the results I mhade got in that course!
One is surprised "with", and one "gets" results, doesn't "make" them.
This is because it made us more acceptableing to other opinions and beliefs, and because it allows us to be gain more knowledge and become self-educatedtaught.
"Accepting" means *we* are accepting *them*, "acceptable" means that *they* think *we* are worth accepting. (I know it's a little difficult to wrap your head around, but.. :( ) "Self-taught" sounds more natural, at least in my dialect of English, but yours was fine.
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This journal entry would be impressive enough by a native English speaker, for a leaner, this is rather incredible! It seems you have been learning for quite some time, and I am very impressed by your skills. Just some work on the way you phrase certain sentences, and you're well on your way to native-level fluency! Great job!
Dec. 30, 2019
Before I was using the Internet, I was feelingfelt passively about other countries and their societies.
I feel that the whole expression is a little improperly done, so maybe you could respond to this and explain what you meant a little more clearly?
I meant that I had a wrong perception toward other societies who don't share my beliefs/traits.
Dec. 30, 2019
Thank you [Faizyrooma4] for your time and effort. I liked your style of explanation, it helped me more to understand the reasons behind my faults.
Dec. 30, 2019
Yes, I tend to go more in depth with my explanations, as I think it helps. Glad you liked it :) Keep learning English!
Overall, the widespread use of the iInternet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world.
Nowadays, most people own a phone or have a computer in their home, and they are able to get access tohe Internet through these devices.
Consequently, usage of the online network affects our life with a much wider range than ever.
Personally, I'm of the opinion that we get a positive effect by using Internet more widelya wide use of the Internet gives us a positive effect.
First of all, we are able to be more openly to each other in the world.
By using the Internet, people can communicate and share their ideas, so it is more easilyer to understand them and know about their opinions.
It is an effective chance to free ourselves aboutof negative or misunderstood thinking abouto individuals who don't share the same belief with us.
Before I wasstarted using the Internet, I was feelingfelt passively about other countries and their societies.
Afterwards, I was able to connect to the iInternet.
Atfter that time, I became more willing to understand other people and tryied to correct my previous thoughts.
Secondly, it is handy tolets us learn new knowledge and get better education.
Online courses and learning from YouTube videos are two examples of unittilizing thea good aspect of iInternet.
A person can learn and improve his/her skills by only visiting these websites.
For this reason, some individuals are takingtake online courses to help strengthen their resume.
After some time, I talked with my friend about this issue, and he advised me to think about learning from ithe Internet.
After a few days, I started watching some videos and, registered on a website, and started attending online classes.
By the end of semester, I was surprised ofwith the progresults I made in that course!
You can also say "I was surprised with the grades I received in the course".
In conclusion, I strongly believe that ithe Internet is beneficial to people and madekes their life more productive.
This is because it made uslets us become more acreceptablive to other opinions and beliefs, and because it allows us to be gain more knowledge and become self-educated.
Dec. 31, 2019
Thank you for your help, I will try to correct these mistakes next time !
Overall, the widespread use of the iInternet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world.
Nowadays, most people own a phone or have a computer in their home, and they are able to get access to the Internet (OR able to access the Internet) through these devices.
Consequently, usage of the online network affects our life muchves in more ways than ever before. (OR our lives more than ever OR our lives in a wider range of ways than ever.)
You can say "ever" or "ever before", based on your preference. I think "ever before" sounds slightly more formal.
Personally, I'm of the opinion that we get ausing the Internet more widely has a positive effect on us. (OR Personally, I'm of the opinion that we are positive ely affected by using the Internet more widely.)
First of all, we are able to be more openly to with each other inaround the world.
By usingUsing (OR By using OR With) the Internet, people can communicate and share their ideas, so it is more easilyer to understand them and knowlearn about their opinions.
It is an effectivegives us the (OR It is a OR It provides the) chance to free ourselves aboutfrom negative or misunderstood thinking towards individuals who don't share the same belief withs as us.
Before I was usingused the Internet, I was feelingfelt passively about other countries and their societies.
Afterwards, I was able to connect to the internet.Then I was able to connect to the Internet. ¶
OR Then I became able to connect to the Internet. ¶
OR Then I got access to an Internet connection. ¶
OR Then I got online.
At that timeWhen that happened, I became more willing to understand other people and to try to correct my previous thoughts. ¶
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Once that occurred, I became more willing to understand other people and to try to correct my previous thoughts.
Secondly, it iallows handy access to learning new knowledge and getting a better education.¶
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Secondly, it makes it more convenient to acquire new knowledge and get a better education. (OR to become better educated.)¶
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Secondly, it makes learning new things and getting a better education more convenient (OR accessible).
Online courses and learning from YouTube videos are two examples of unitiztilising theis good aspect of ithe Internet.
A person can learn and improve his/their skills by onlyjust by (OR by just) visiting these websites.
"By only visiting" works, but "just" feels more natural to me.
I have my own background oin this.
Seven years ago, when I was studying engineering in college, I faced troubles grasping essential concepts oin one of my courses.
After some time, I talked with my friend about this issue, and he advised me to think about learning from ithe Internet.
After few days, I started watching some videos and, registered on a website, and started attending online classes.
By the end of semester, I was surprised ofby the results I madeof my work in that course! ¶
OR By the end of semester, I was (pleasantly) surprised by my results in that course!
In conclusion, I strongly believe that ithe Internet is beneficial to people and has made theiour lifeves more productive.
This is because it has made us more acceptabling of (OR receptive to) other opinions and beliefs, and because it allows us to be gain more knowledge and become self-educated.
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One note: people disagree about whether or not to capitalize "Internet". We usually write "internet" casually, but in formal writing it can vary. How confusing!
I think that the Internet is like any other tool. It can be used for good and ill, since people are capable of good and ill. Widespread access to information is powerful and we need to be critical of the sources.
Great writing! Keep up the good work. :)
Dec. 31, 2019
Thank you for your corrections. I was confused to write "internet" or "Internet" but now it I think I will stick with the latter one now.
I agree with you on your thought, we should be aware of the bad behavior that happened on there.
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Essay about the effects of internet in today's world
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Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world. Overall, the widespread use of the Overall, the widespread use of the Overall, the widespread use of the internet has had a mostly positive effect on life in today's world. Again, the original was okay, but my correction "has had" sounds a bit more native.
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Nowadays, most people own a phone or have a computer in their home, and they are able to get access to Internet through these devices. Nowadays, most people own a phone or have a computer in their home, and they are able to get access to Nowadays, most people own a phone or have a computer in their home, and they are able to get access to the Internet (OR able to access the Internet) through these devices. Nowadays, most people own a phone or have a computer in their home, and they are able to Nowadays, most people own a phone or have a computer in their home, and they are able to get access to the Internet through these devices. |
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Consequently, usage of the online network affects our life much wide range than ever. Consequently, usage of the online network affects our life m Consequently, usage of the online network affects our li You can say "ever" or "ever before", based on your preference. I think "ever before" sounds slightly more formal.
Consequently, usage of the online network affects our life with a much wider range than ever. Consequently, usage of No particular network, right, several networks? :) Also, "much wider range" would be a correct expression on its own, but it doesn't fit in this context. When discussing an effect, we say the "degree" of the effect.
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Personally, I'm of the opinion that we get a positive effect by using Internet more widely. Personally, I'm of the opinion that Personally, I'm of the opinion that Personally, I'm of the opinion that we Although your expression was correct grammatically, a native speaker would express it through the verb "to affect".
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First of all, we are able to be more openly to each other in the world. First of all, we are able to be more open First of all, we are able to be more open I corrected the grammar here, but the meaning is still not quite clear. What you have written suggests “we can be more honest with each other”, but I can’t quite be sure. I’d recommend trying to find another way to phrase it.
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By using the Internet, people can communicate and share their ideas, so it is more easily to understand them and know about their opinions.
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It is an effective chance to free ourselves about negative or misunderstood thinking to individuals who don't share the same belief with us. It is an effective chance to free ourselves It It is an effective chance to free ourselves It is a "Chance" would not be described by "effective" by a native speaker. Sorry, but it just doesn't sound right. :( Also, one is freed "from" ideas/thinking, not "about".
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Before I was using the Internet, I was feeling passively about other countries and their societies. Before I was using the Internet, I Again, I don’t quite know what you mean here. Do you mean that you weren’t interested?
I’m afraid I can’t explain why this should be “felt” rather than “was feeling”. They’re both grammatically correct, but “felt” sounds more natural to me, even though it was happening over an extended period. English is a strange language! 🙄😆 Before I Before I Before I was using the Internet, I I feel that the whole expression is a little improperly done, so maybe you could respond to this and explain what you meant a little more clearly?
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Afterwards, I was able to connect to the internet. Afterwards, I was able to connect to the
After Most speakers would specify a point of reference, like after how long, or after what, so maybe add that next time. :)
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At that time, I became more willing to understand other people and try to correct my previous thoughts. A
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Secondly, it is handy to learn new knowledge and get better education. Secondly, it Second Secondly, it is handy This sentence is correct on its own, but it doesn't reference the internet, just that *learning is handy*, not that *the internet [it] is handy* for learning.
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Online courses and learning from YouTube videos are two examples of unitizing the good aspect of internet. Online courses and learning from YouTube videos are two examples of u I think that’s just a spelling error. I spelt it the British way, but if you’re learning American English it might be “utilizing” with a “z”.
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A person can learn and improve his/her skills by only visiting these websites. A person can learn and improve his/her skills by This isn’t an important correction. Your way works well too — it’s more a matter of style really.
A person can learn and improve "By only visiting" works, but "just" feels more natural to me.
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For this reason, some individuals are taking online courses to help strengthen their resume. For this reason, some individuals Simple present here, since they aren’t currently right at this very second in the process of doing it.
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I have my own background on this. I have my own background I have my own "Background" doesn't sound very natural here. "Experience" fits better.
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Seven years ago, when I was studying engineering in college, I faced troubles grasping essential concepts on one of my courses. Seven years ago, when I was studying engineering in college, I faced troubles grasping essential concepts Seven years ago, when I was studying engineering in college, I faced troubles grasping essential concepts Either "from" or "in" works, but not "on".
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After some time, I talked with my friend about this issue, and he advise me to think about learning from internet. After some time, I talked with my friend about this issue After some time, I talked with my friend about this issue, and he advised me to think about learning from After some time, I talked with my friend about this issue, and he advise me to "To consider" sounds, again, more like what a native speaker would say.
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After few days, I start watching some videos and registered on a website and start attending online classes. After few days, I started watching some videos After few days, I started watching some videos After a few days, I started watching some videos After few days, I start watching some videos Remember, and is only used with the last member of a list. Also, "started" past tense.
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By the end of semester, I was surprised of the results I made in that course! By the end of semester, I was surprised By the end of semester, I was surprised You can also say "I was surprised with the grades I received in the course".
By the end of semester, I was surprised One is surprised "with", and one "gets" results, doesn't "make" them.
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In conclusion, I strongly believe that internet is beneficial to people and made their life more productive. In conclusion, I strongly believe that In conclusion, I strongly believe that In conclusion, I strongly believe that |
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This is because it made us more acceptable to other opinions and beliefs, and because it allows us to be gain more knowledge and become self-educated. This is because it made us more accept This is because it has made us more accept This is because it This is because it made us more accept "Accepting" means *we* are accepting *them*, "acceptable" means that *they* think *we* are worth accepting. (I know it's a little difficult to wrap your head around, but.. :( ) "Self-taught" sounds more natural, at least in my dialect of English, but yours was fine.
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