Sept. 9, 2023
I have a drinking party with nostalgic members today.
I belonged to a volleyball club when I was a university student. The members liked holding a drinking party and I also joined it. Especially when the senior members joined it, I enjoyed more than usual.
After graduating, there were few parties with the same guys. I haven’t seen them for a couple of years.
This year the volleyball team I belonged to before won the title. It boosted my motivation holding the old school party.
We are getting together tonight. I’m looking forward to seeing them!
I have a drinking party with nostalgic membersome old friends today.
I belonged towas in a volleyball club when I was a university student.
Especially when the senior members joined itattended, I enjoyed more than usual.
After graduating, there were a few parties with the same guys.
I haven’t seen them for a couple of years.
This year the volleyball team I belonged toused to be apart of before won the title.
It boosted my motivation holding the old school party.
Drinking party
I have a drinking party with nostalgic membersome old friends today.
nostalgic -> old (in this context)
I used to belonged to a volleyball club when I was a university student.
The members liked holding a drinking partyies and I ( often ) also joined itn.
join it = To attach multiple objects together くっつける
join in = To take part in an activity 参加する
EDIT: I think you were using the verb "join", in which case "join it" is technicially correct, but it sounds a little unnatural.
Especially when the senior members joined it, I enjoyed it more than usual.
After graduating, there were a few parties with the same guys.
I haven’t seen them forin a couple of years.
This year, that same volleyball team I belonged to before won the title.
It boosted my motivation to holding the old school party ( even more ).
We are getting together tonight.
I’m looking forward to seeing them!
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I belonged to a volleyball club when I was a university student. I used to belong I |
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