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April 8, 2021

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Donating Blood

Today, I went to donate blood for the second time. This January, I tried to do but I was interrupted because of a vasovagal reaction (VVR). VVR is a physical reaction triggered by stress such as blood sampling, and it causes feeling sick or blood pressure to drop. I think I was too nervous and had fear for blood last time. Therefore, I took measures VVR, and I could give my blood with no problem this time. I'm feeling refreshed because I could be helpful to people and overcome my weakness.

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Donating Blood

Today, I went to donate blood for the second time.

I think I was too nervous and had fear for blood last time.

I'm feeling refreshed because I could be helpful to people and overcome my weakness.

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April 9, 2021

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April 9, 2021

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Donating Blood


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Today, I went to donate blood for the second time.


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This January, I tried to do but I was interrupted because of a vasovagal reaction (VVR).


This January, I tried to do so, but I was interrupted because of a vasovagal reaction (VVR). This January, I tried to do so, but I was interrupted because of a vasovagal reaction (VVR).

VVR is a physical reaction triggered by stress such as blood sampling, and it causes feeling sick or blood pressure to drop.


VVR is a physical reaction triggered by stress such as blood sampling, and it causes one to feeling sick or blood pressure to drop. VVR is a physical reaction triggered by stress such as blood sampling, and it causes one to feel sick or blood pressure to drop.

I think I was too nervous and had fear for blood last time.


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Therefore, I took measures VVR, and I could give my blood with no problem this time.


Therefore, I took measures against/to prevent VVR, and I could give my blood with no problem this time. Therefore, I took measures against/to prevent VVR, and I could give my blood with no problem this time.

I'm feeling refreshed because I could be helpful to people and overcome my weakness.


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