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julien

July 18, 2021

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Do you usually remember your dreams in the morning?

I usually don't remember my dreams in the morning.
But, some mornings I do remember. I just remember of stressful dreams.
The dreams are remember have always the same pattern : I have to go somewhere but I have difficulties to go there.
In one dream I had to go to a place by bike but my bike was broken, so I have to look for an another way to travel (car, bus, train...)
In another dream I had to travel by plane but my travel documents were not enough to pass accross the border.

In fact I just remember of dreams about travels that turn bad. That probably says something about me...

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Do you usually remember your dreams in the morning?

I usually don't remember my dreams in the morning.

But, some mornings I do remember.

I just remember of stressful dreams.

Remember + noun, not 'remember of' + noun

The dreams areI remember have always have the same pattern : I have to go somewhere but I have difficulties to gogetting there.

'Always' comes before the verb it is modifying.

'I have difficulties + -ing', not infinitive. 'Getting' feels stylistically preferable to 'going'.

In one dream I had to go to a placsomewhere by bike but my bike was broken, so I haved to look for an another way to travel (car, bus, train...)

'Have' > 'had' to keep consistent past tense.

Although 'to a place' is grammatically correct, 'somewhere' feels stylistically preferable when talking about an unspecified destination.

In another dream I had to travel by plane but my travel documents were not enough to pass accross the border.

In fact I just remember of dreams about travels that turn bad.

'Remember' does not need 'of'.

That probably says something about me...

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Nice! It's mostly a case of remembering that French uses 'de' when remembering things whereas English doesn't have a preposition with 'remember'.

Do you usually remember your dreams in the morning?

I usually don't remember my dreams in the morning.

But, some mornings I do remember.

I just remember of stressful dreams.

I just remember of stressful dreams.

The dreams are remember have always the same pattern : I have to go somewhere but I have difficulties to go there.

The dreams areI remember have always have the same pattern : I have to go somewhere but I have difficulties to gogetting there.

In one dream I had to go to a place by bike but my bike was broken, so I have to look for an another way to travel (car, bus, train...)

In one dream I had to go to a placsomewhere by bike but my bike was broken, so I haved to look for an another way to travel (car, bus, train...)

In another dream I had to travel by plane but my travel documents were not enough to pass accross the border.

In fact I just remember of dreams about travels that turn bad.

In fact I just remember of dreams about travels that turn bad.

That probably says something about me...

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