Sept. 23, 2021
Do not drink milk tea in the afternoon
It was 1:30 a. m. at the moment when I was writing this journal. I can hear the sound of my heart battering clearly It seems as my heart would explode immediately. That must be blamed for a cup of milk tea. That milk tea was so savory and filled with Jasmine's pleasant flavor. Unfortunately, it contains rich caffeine that leads to my sleepless night. I even started to tell stories with myself in my mind to help me fall asleep. My roommate even begins to snore like a hippo while I still have a clear mind…I assume I will suffer from sleeplessness till tomorrow even though I'm exhausted…😢😢 So do not drink milk tea or anything else contains caffeine in the afternoon unless you want to know what does midnight sounds like...
It was 1:30 a. m. at the moment when I was writingAM when I wrote this journal.
I can hear the sound of my heart beattering clearly . It seems as though my heart wouldmight explode immediatelyat any moment.
Thatis sensation must be blamed foron a cup of milk tea.
That milk tea was so savory and fillinfused with Jjasmine's pleasant flavor.
Unfortunately, it contains riched lots of caffeine that, which leads to my sleepless night.
I have even started to tell stories withto myself in my mind to help me fall asleep.
My roommate evenhas beginsun to snore like a hippo while I still have a clear mindremain wide awake…I assume I will suffer from sleeplessness untill tomorrow even though I'm exhausted…😢😢 So, do not drink milk tea, or anything else that contains caffeine, in the afternoon, unless you want to know what does midnight sounds like...
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Nice writing!
Sept. 24, 2021
Thank you! I was wondering which tense I should use last night!
I canould hear the sound of my heart battering clearly. It seems ased like my heart would explode immediately.
That must be blamed for aA cup of milk tea was to blame.
That milk tea was so savory and filled with Jjasmine's pleasant flavor.
Unfortunately, it contains riched caffeine, which thats leadsd to mya sleepless night.
I evenOut of desperation, I've started to tell stories withto myself in my mind to help me fall asleep.
My roommate evenhas beginsan to snore like a hippo while I still have a clear mind…my mind remains alert. I assume I will suffer from sleeplessness till tomorrow even though I'm exhausted…😢😢 So do not drink milk tea or anything else containsing caffeine in the afternoon unless you want to know what does midnight sounds like...
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This really resonated with me! Falling asleep is one of the greatest feelings...and lying awake early in the morning is one of the worst.
Sept. 24, 2021
Thank you for your exact corrections! I hope you can fall asleep soon tonight.
Sept. 25, 2021
Thank you for your specific explanations! I'm really confused with the tense in English. 😅 There are many kinds of tenses in English while my mother tongue doesn't focus on the tense a lot.
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Do not drink milk tea in the afternoon |
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It was 1:30 a. m. at the moment when I was writing this journal. It was 1:30 |
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I can hear the sound of my heart battering clearly It seems as my heart would explode immediately. I can hear the sound of my heart beat I c |
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That must be blamed for a cup of milk tea. Th
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That milk tea was so savory and filled with Jasmine's pleasant flavor. That milk tea was so savory and That milk tea was so savory and filled with |
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Unfortunately, it contains rich caffeine that leads to my sleepless night. Unfortunately, it contain Unfortunately, it contain |
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I even started to tell stories with myself in my mind to help me fall asleep.
I have even started to tell stories |
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My roommate even begins to snore like a hippo while I still have a clear mind…I assume I will suffer from sleeplessness till tomorrow even though I'm exhausted…😢😢 |
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My roommate even begins to snore like a hippo while I still have a clear mind…I assume I will suffer from sleeplessness till tomorrow even though I'm exhausted…😢😢 So do not drink milk tea or anything else contains caffeine in the afternoon unless you want to know what does midnight sounds like... My roommate My roommate |
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