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brytcelf

Jan. 26, 2023

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Describing my city

Hi, my name's Caroline, and today I would describe the city where I live.
Toledo is a city near Madrid, in Spain. It's a beautiful medieval city, with wonderful churches, bridges, squares and their kind people. Toledo it's heaven for history lovers or anyone loves art and architecture. The buildings are evidence of all cultures than were here. In fact, this land was home to Romans, Visigoths, Christians, Arabs, and Jewish.
Many times, Toledo is called "the city of the three religions" because in the past, when Arabs ruled here, these three people (Christian, Arab and Jewish) lived in harmony. I don't think this is absolute true but it's probably that they coexisted peacefully.
Then later, this harmony was broked but fortunally, we are coexisting without any of these problems now.
Of course, this city is not perfect but I'm not here to talk about this.
There are many others things that I can talk you, like gastronomy, museums (the famous one is "house's Greco) or swords, knives, and daggers, but I'd do it next time.
Thanks for any corrections and have a good day :)

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Hi, my name's Caroline, and today I wouldill describe the city where I live.

It's a beautiful medieval city, with wonderful churches, bridges, squares and their kind people.

Toledo it's heaven for history lovers or anyone who loves art and architecture.

The buildings are evidence of all cultures thant were here.

In fact, this land was home to Romans, Visigoths, Christians, Arabs, and Jewish.s

You can refer to them as Jews or Jewish people

Many timesOften, Toledo is called "the city of the three religions" because in the past, when Arabs ruled here, these three people (Christian, Arab and Jewish) lived in harmony.

I don't think this is absolutely true but it's probably that they coexisted peacefully.

Then later, this harmony was brokedn but fortunaltely, we are coexisting without any of these problems now.

There are many others things that I can talkell you, like gastronomy, museums (the famous one is "house's Greco) or swords, knives, and daggers, but I'd will do ithat next time.

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Toledo sounds like a beautiful place! I hope to visit it one day. Thank you for sharing!

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brytcelf

Jan. 31, 2023

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thanks for the corrections and of course, you're welcome :D

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Hi, my name's Caroline, and today I would like to describe the city where I live.

Toledo it's heaven for history lovers or anyone loves art and architecture.

The buildings are evidence of all the cultures thant were here.

In fact, this land was home to Romans, Visigoths, Christians, Arabs, and Jewishs.

"Jewish people" also works.

Many times, Toledo is called "the city of the three religions" because in the past, when Arabs ruled here, these three peoples (Christian, Arab and Jewish) lived in harmony.

"people" is the plural of "person," but we can also pluralize it into "peoples" to refer to a large group of people. "these three people" sounds like just 3 individual people.

I don't think this is absolutely true but it's probablikely that they coexisted peacefully.

You can use "probable" instead of "likely," but "likely" sounds a little more casual and natural. "probable" sounds more scientific.

Then lLater, this harmony was brokedn, but fortunaltely, we are coexisting without any of these problems now.

There are many others things that I can talk you about, like gastronomy, museums (the famous one is "hoMuse'so del Greco") or swords, knives, and daggers, but I'dll do it next time.

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I want to go to Toledo!!

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brytcelf

Jan. 31, 2023

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you are welcome :)

Describing my city

Hi, my name's Caroline, and today I would describe the city where I live.

Hi, my name's Caroline, and today I would like to describe the city where I live.

Hi, my name's Caroline, and today I wouldill describe the city where I live.

Toledo is a city near Madrid, in Spain.

It's a beautiful medieval city, with wonderful churches, bridges, squares and their kind people.

It's a beautiful medieval city, with wonderful churches, bridges, squares and their kind people.

Toledo it's heaven for history lovers or anyone loves art and architecture.

Toledo it's heaven for history lovers or anyone loves art and architecture.

Toledo it's heaven for history lovers or anyone who loves art and architecture.

The buildings are evidence of all cultures than were here.

The buildings are evidence of all the cultures thant were here.

The buildings are evidence of all cultures thant were here.

In fact, this land was home to Romans, Visigoths, Christians, Arabs, and Jewish.

In fact, this land was home to Romans, Visigoths, Christians, Arabs, and Jewishs.

In fact, this land was home to Romans, Visigoths, Christians, Arabs, and Jewish.s

Many times, Toledo is called "the city of the three religions" because in the past, when Arabs ruled here, these three people (Christian, Arab and Jewish) lived in harmony.

Many times, Toledo is called "the city of the three religions" because in the past, when Arabs ruled here, these three peoples (Christian, Arab and Jewish) lived in harmony.

Many timesOften, Toledo is called "the city of the three religions" because in the past, when Arabs ruled here, these three people (Christian, Arab and Jewish) lived in harmony.

I don't think this is absolute true but it's probably that they coexisted peacefully.

I don't think this is absolutely true but it's probablikely that they coexisted peacefully.

I don't think this is absolutely true but it's probably that they coexisted peacefully.

Then later, this harmony was broked but fortunally, we are coexisting without any of these problems now.

Then lLater, this harmony was brokedn, but fortunaltely, we are coexisting without any of these problems now.

Then later, this harmony was brokedn but fortunaltely, we are coexisting without any of these problems now.

Of course, this city is not perfect but I'm not here to talk about this.

There are many others things that I can talk you, like gastronomy, museums (the famous one is "house's Greco) or swords, knives, and daggers, but I'd do it next time.

There are many others things that I can talk you about, like gastronomy, museums (the famous one is "hoMuse'so del Greco") or swords, knives, and daggers, but I'dll do it next time.

There are many others things that I can talkell you, like gastronomy, museums (the famous one is "house's Greco) or swords, knives, and daggers, but I'd will do ithat next time.

Thanks for any corrections and have a good day :)

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