June 27, 2021
Day Twenty-Seven: What is Your Favorite Season?
My favorite season is spring because it's a warm and comfortable temperature, and I associate it with a fresh start. In Japan, the beginning of the year is in April, so people tend to start their new life in spring. Also, I think spring is an exciting season because cold and short-days winter end and it's toward summer.
Day Twenty-Seven: What is Your Favorite Season?
My favorite season is spring because it's a warm and comfortable temperature, and I. I also associate it with a fresh start.
These are separate thoughts so it makes more sense to break the sentence into two.
In Japan, the year beginning of the year is in April, so people tend to start their new life in spring.
Also, I think spring iIt's an exciting season because the cold and short- days of winter endare over and it's towardalmost summer.
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June 28, 2021
Thank you so much!
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Day Twenty-Seven: What is Your Favorite Season? |
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My favorite season is spring because it's a warm and comfortable temperature, and I associate it with a fresh start. My favorite season is spring because it's These are separate thoughts so it makes more sense to break the sentence into two.
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In Japan, the beginning of the year is in April, so people tend to start their new life in spring. In Japan, the year begin |
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Also, I think spring is an exciting season because cold and short-days winter end and it's toward summer.
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