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Day Twenty-Seven: What is Your Favorite Season?

ponta 360 · June 27

Prompt: "PROMPT FOR JUNE 2021 WRITING CHALLENGE: What is your favourite season?" by Jacque. Like this prompt? Write your own response here.

Target Language - English

My favorite season is spring because it's a warm and comfortable temperature, and I associate it with a fresh start. In Japan, the beginning of the year is in April, so people tend to start their new life in spring. Also, I think spring is an exciting season because cold and short-days winter end and it's toward summer.


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kidneyprivilege 83 June 27, 2021
Day Twenty-Seven: What is Your Favorite Season?
My favorite season is spring because it's a warm and comfortable temperature, and I associate it with a fresh start.

My favorite season is spring because it's a warm and comfortable temperature, and I. I also associate it with a fresh start.

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These are separate thoughts so it makes more sense to break the sentence into two.
In Japan, the beginning of the year is in April, so people tend to start their new life in spring.

In Japan, the year beginning of the year is in April, so people tend to start their new life in spring.

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  • Stylistic
Also, I think spring is an exciting season because cold and short-days winter end and it's toward summer.

Also, I think spring iIt's an exciting season because the cold and short- days of winter endare over and it's towardalmost summer.

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  • Stylistic

Overall feedback & comment:

Overall very good! I mostly made stylistic changes, hope that was helpful.
Comment added on 06/27/2021