Day Twenty-Five: Do You Own a Lot of Stuff or Very Little?

ponta 360 · June 25

Prompt: "PROMPT FOR JUNE 2021 WRITING CHALLENGE: Do you own a lot of stuff or very little?" by Jacque. Like this prompt? Write your own response here.

I own a lot of stuff before and I'm trying to reduce them. When I find a thing that I haven't use for a year, I throw it away. I dumped many clothes, furniture, or miscellaneous goods so far. I thought the more I have, the happier I will be, but it wasn't. As an exception, I stack up books in my room. There are a lot of books; half of them are unread. I don't hesitate to buy new books because I believe they will be assets in my life.

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js 0 June 25, 2021

I own a lot of stuff before and I'm trying to reduce them.

I own a lot of stuff ~~before~~ and I'm trying to reduce them amount.

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Grammar

When I find a thing that I haven't use for a year, I throw it away.

I dumped many clothes, furniture, or miscellaneous goods so far.

I ~~dumped many~~got rid of a lot of clothes, furniture, orand miscellaneous goods so far.

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Grammar
Stylistic

I thought the more I have, the happier I will be, but it wasn't.

I thought that the more I haved, the happier I w~~ill~~ould be, but it wasn't the case.

As an exception, I stack up books in my room.

There are a lot of books; half of them are unread.

There are a lot of books; and half of them are unread.

I don't hesitate to buy new books because I believe they will be assets in my life.

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ponta 360 June 26, 2021

Thank you for your correction!