June 20, 2021
Day Twenty: Do You Believe in Horoscopes?
No, I don't. I would watch the news on TV in the morning before I went to school. The TV shows had horoscope segments, and the results were different between them. One time, I was said Aquarius was the worst today but, on the other hand, Aquarius was the best today in another program. It's irrational, isn't it? Additionally, I don't want to be affected when I make decisions due to the horoscopes.
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One time, I wasit said Aquarius was the worst today, but, on the other hand, in another program, it said Aquarius was the best today in another program.
One time, it said Aquarius was the worst today, but in another program, it said Aquarius was the best today.
use of "on the other hand" doesn't fit here.
Additionally, I don't want to be affected by the horoscopes, when I make decisions due to the horoscopes.
Additionally, I don't want to be affected by the horoscopes, when I make decisions.
June 21, 2021
Thank you!
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Day Twenty: Do You Believe in Horoscopes? |
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No, I don't. |
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I would watch the news on TV in the morning before I went to school. |
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The TV shows had horoscope segments, and the results were different between them. |
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One time, I was said Aquarius was the worst today but, on the other hand, Aquarius was the best today in another program.
One time, use of "on the other hand" doesn't fit here. |
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It's irrational, isn't it? |
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Additionally, I don't want to be affected when I make decisions due to the horoscopes.
Additionally, I don't want to be affected by the horoscopes, when I make decisions |
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