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Day Six

ponta 360 · June 6

Prompt: "PROMPT FOR JUNE 2021 WRITING CHALLENGE: What is at the top of your bucket list?" by Jacque. Like this prompt? Write your own response here.

Target Language - English

What I want to do most before I die is going to space. I want to feel zero gravity and see the earth and its beautiful blue. Now, the Artemis plan is going on, which seeks to build a moon base. Therefore, I believe it will be feasible for all people to go to space or the moon within 50 years. However, I don't want space burial for my bones because it will be space debris.


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Aviva 0 June 6, 2021
Day Six
What I want to do most before I die is going to space.
I want to feel zero gravity and see the earth and its beautiful blue.

I want to feel zero gravity and see the eEarth and its beautiful blue.

If you're talking about the planet Earth, you should capitalize it.
Use lowercase ("earth") if you're talking about the soil, the ground, etc.

https://www.dictionary.com/e/earth/
Now, the Artemis plan is going on, which seeks to build a moon base.

Now, the Artemis plan is going on, which seeks to build a moon base, is going on.

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Therefore, I believe it will be feasible for all people to go to space or the moon within 50 years.
However, I don't want space burial for my bones because it will be space debris.

However, I don't want spacto be burial for my bones because it will beed in space because my remains will turn into space debris.

That might be a really expensive burial lol

Overall feedback & comment:

Nice! If you ever do make it to space, be sure to write another journal and tell us about it ;)
Comment added on 06/06/2021