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ponta 360 · June 5

Prompt: "PROMPT FOR JUNE 2021 WRITING CHALLENGE: If you could time travel, would you go into the past or the future?" by Jacque. Like this prompt? Write your own response here.

Target Language - English

I would go into the future because I want to see how the world will have changed. There isn't a jet airplane or the Internet 100 years ago. The speed of technology development is rapid, so I could see incredible things and technologies in the future, which I can't predict. I also want to check the answer comparing to the future that we imagine now.


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rhinoink 0 June 5, 2021
I would go into the future because I want to see how the world will have changed.

I would go into the future because I want to see how the world will havehas changed.

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どちらも正しいですが、このほうが自然と思います。
There isn't a jet airplane or the Internet 100 years ago.

There isweren't a jet airplanes or the Internet 100 years ago.

The speed of technology development is rapid, so I could see incredible things and technologies in the future, which I can't predict.

(The speed of) technology development is so rapid, soif I went into the future, I cwould be able to see incredible things and technologies in the future, which I can't predicty that I could never have imagined.

"could never have imagined"="beyond my imagination/wildest dreams"
Predictはいい言葉ですが、もう「未来にすごい技術があるはずだ」を予測したので、「it's unpredictable」(予測できない)はちょっと...
I also want to check the answer comparing to the future that we imagine now.

I also want to check the answer comparingsee how much it differs to the future that we imagine now.

Overall feedback & comment:

いいですね!現在と過去の人が考えていた未来とを比較するのは確かに面白いですね。
Comment added on 06/05/2021