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ponta

June 8, 2021

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Day Eight

I hardly remember my dreams when I wake up. I feel I dreamed, but it's vague. I only catch the dream about its situation. The other day, I dreamed but I only called back it was about my childhood. I think I could recall my dreams when I was a kid. Unfortunately, most of the dreams were scary. Perhaps, I only remembered scary dreams because I was timid.

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Day Eight

I hardly remember my dreams when I wake up.

I feel I dreamed, but it'Most of the time, even though I know that I dreamed, the dream still feels vague.

I added “most of the time” since you’re talking about dreams in a general context. You could also say “usually” instead of “most of the time”.

I usually only catch the dream about its situationwhat situation the dream is about.

The other day, I had a dreamed, but I only called backcould only remember that it was about my childhood.

I think you might have wanted to say “recalled” here? If that is the case, you could replace “remember” with “recalled” in the sentence.

I think I could recall my dreams better when I was a kid.

Since it seems like you’re comparing yourself now with your younger self, I put “better”.

Unfortunately, most of the dreams I had were scary.

It’s not grammatically incorrect but it sounds more natural to include “I” to keep the consistency since you’re talking about your own dreams, not dreams in general.

Perhaps, I only remembered the scary dreams because I was a timid child.

The reason why you put “the” here is to show that you are referring to the scary dreams you had as a kid. Without the “the”, it sounds like you’re talking about it in a general context. Also, saying “I was timid” by itself doesn’t sound natural, since people usually use it as a phrase to describe what they were scared of, like “I was timid of ___”. Otherwise, you could also use “timid” as an adjective. Basically, my point is that using “timid” by itself sounds weird and kind of unnatural.

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I can relate to this a lot actually. I usually don’t remember my dreams that well, but as a kid I always remembered the nightmares I had. I think it may be because people tend to remember the negative things in their lives more than the positive.

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ponta

June 9, 2021

217

Thank you so much!

Day Eight

I hardly remember my dreams when I wake up.

I feel I dreamed, but it's vague.

I feel I dreamed, but it'Most of the time, even though I know that I dreamed, the dream still feels vague.

I only catch the dream about its situation.

I usually only catch the dream about its situationwhat situation the dream is about.

The other day, I dreamed but I only called back it was about my childhood.

The other day, I had a dreamed, but I only called backcould only remember that it was about my childhood.

I think I could recall my dreams when I was a kid.

I think I could recall my dreams better when I was a kid.

Unfortunately, most of the dreams were scary.

Unfortunately, most of the dreams I had were scary.

Perhaps, I only remembered scary dreams because I was timid.

Perhaps, I only remembered the scary dreams because I was a timid child.

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