Jan. 25, 2023
Day 18: Who are you?
If you would be able to ask yourself a question ten years in the future, what it would be?
I would ask: who are you? Let me explain why I want to ask this. People change a lot even in just one year, ten years in the future you'll be practically another person. For example, five years ago I used to hate anime, manga and the English language. But now I watch anime and read a lot of mangas, even now, I'm studying Japanese and I love learning English. Right now I would like to be an architect but maybe, down in the line, I'll end up being an engineer, a professional translator or a doctor, who knows!
I'm going to be another person ten years in the future I'm sure of that. Therefore I would like to ask my future self, who are you?
Changing the subject, now I write my posts by hand on a notebook and then I type them in my computer. I read that our brain works better when we write by hand.
Sorry if I can't answer your corrections but I don't have much time recently, but I'm so grateful for all of your corrections!!
Day 18: Who are you?
If you would bere able to ask yourself a question ten years in the futurefrom now, what it would it be?
I would ask:, who are you?
Let me explain why I want to ask this.
People change a lot even in just one year, ten years in the future so that in ten years you'll be practically another person.
For example, five years ago I used to hate anime, manga and the English language.
But nowNow, however, I watch anime and read a lot of mangas, e. Even now, I'm studying Japanese and I love learning English.
とても面白そうです。
Right now I would like to be an architect but maybe, down in the line, I'll end up being an engineer, a professional translator or a doctor, who knows!
I'm going to be another person ten years in the futurefrom now, I'm sure of that.
Therefore, I would like to ask my future self, who are you?
Changing the subject, now I write my posts by hand oin a notebook and then I type them ion my computer.
I read that our brain works better when we write by hand.
SI'm sorry if I can't answer your corrections butecause I don't have much time recently, but I'm so grateful for all of your corrections!!
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そうですよね。10年後の自分の人にとてもいい質問ですね。頭がいいですよ。上手に書けています！
Jan. 27, 2023
ありがとうございます !!
Day 18: Who are you?
If you would bere able to ask yourself a question to yourself, ten years into the future, what it would be?
For me, I would ask: who are you?
It makes it more clear that you are now talking about yourself and your perspective, given that you introduced the text talking directly to the reader.
Let me explain why I wanted to ask you this.
People change a lot, even in just onea year,. In ten years in the future, you'’ll be practically be another person.
This was a good attempt, I could understand what you were trying to say, however it sounded unnatural so I changed the word order and usage !
For example, five years ago I used to hate anime, manga and the English language.
Just saying ‘English’ already implies that you’re speaking of the English language.
But now I watch anime and read a lots of mangas, even now, I'm studying Japanese and I love learning English.
Right now I would like to be an architect but maybe, down in the line, I'll end up being an engineer, a professional translator or a doctor, who knows!
I'm going to be another person in ten years in the future, I'm sure of that.
Therefore I would like to ask my future self, “who are you?”.
Changing the subject, I now I write my posts by hand oin a notebook and then I type them inonto my computer.
I read that our brain works better when we write by hand.
Sorry if I can't answer your corrections but I don'recently I haven’t haved much time recently, but I'm so grateful for all of your corrections!!
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Well done! I enjoyed reading this, you are going very well with your English.
Jan. 27, 2023
Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed my writing
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I'm going to be another totally different person in ten years in the future, I'm sure of that.
Changing the subject, now I write my posts by hand oin a notebook, and then I will type them ion my computer.
I read that our brain works better when we write by hand.
Sorry if I can't answer your corrections but I don't have much time recently, but I'm soI have been busy lately, so I haven't been able to respond to the corrections. I'm sorry, but I am very grateful for all of yourthe corrections!! and feedback.
Jan. 27, 2023
Thank you!
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Sorry if I can't answer your corrections but I don't have much time recently, but I'm so grateful for all of your corrections!!
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