Sept. 10, 2021
Darkness
When I was a kid, I was so scared of darkness. I hated the darkness when I was in bed, so I begged my parents to stay beside me or turn on the light. It wasn't only at night. I didn't like the poorly lighted hallway because of the contrast between outside brightness and it. I believed a scary monster lurked in the darkness. This tendency disappeared as I grew up.
Darkness
When I was a kid, I was so scared of the darkness.
I hated the darkness when I was in bed, so I begged my parents to stay beside me or turn on the light.
Your sentence is technically correct, but "darkness" is often used to describe badness or evil. When talking about a completely dark area, we usually call it "the dark."
It wasn't only at night.
I didn't like the poorly lightedt hallway because of the contrast betweenwith the outside brightness and it.
I believed a scary monster lurked in the darkness.
This tendency disappeared as I grew up.
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Nice job! The distinction between "the dark" and "the darkness" is kind of odd, which I had never realized until now. The dark is a lack of light, so it makes more sense as an entity to be afraid of. Darkness is the state of being dark, so a monster may lurk in the darkness.
Sept. 11, 2021
I didn't realize too, so it's nice to know!
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I hated the darkness when I was in bed, so I begged my parents to stay beside me or turn on the light. I hated the dark Your sentence is technically correct, but "darkness" is often used to describe badness or evil. When talking about a completely dark area, we usually call it "the dark."
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It wasn't only at night. |
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I didn't like the poorly lighted hallway because of the contrast between outside brightness and it. I didn't like the poorly li |
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I believed a scary monster lurked in the darkness. |
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This tendency disappeared as I grew up. |
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