Jan. 17, 2021
It's a paradox that it is sunny while it is raining.
Roy worked his way up through excellent job.
Poorer people could be better off only if they work harder.
The dramatic change is under way which is triggered by little things.
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It's a paradox that it is sunny while it is raining.
Roy worked his way up through the company to get an excellent job.
Poorer people cwould be better off if only if they worked harder.
I think the best way to write this would be “poor people would be better off if they just worked harder”
Theriggered by little things, dramatic change is now under way which is triggered by little things.
A more natural way to write this
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It's a paradox that it is sunny while at the same time, it is raining.
Roy worked his way up throughby having excellent job.work ethics.
Or you could say "Roy worked his way up by doing an excellent job."
Poorer people cwould be better off only if they worked harder.
TheA dramatic change is under way which iwas triggered by little things.
It is somewhat childlike to use words such as "little" or "big", especially when you are an advanced writer. Try to substitute "little" with "inconsequential", "insignificant", "minor", "trivial", etc.
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It's a paradox that it is raining while it is sunny. |
Roy worked his way up through excellent job. Roy worked his way up through the company to get an excellent job. Roy worked his way up Or you could say "Roy worked his way up by doing an excellent job."
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Poorer people could be better off only if they work harder. Poor I think the best way to write this would be “poor people would be better off if they just worked harder”
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The dramatic change is under way which is triggered by little things. T A more natural way to write this
It is somewhat childlike to use words such as "little" or "big", especially when you are an advanced writer. Try to substitute "little" with "inconsequential", "insignificant", "minor", "trivial", etc.
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It's a paradox that it is sunny while it is raining. It's a paradox that it is sunny while at the same time, it is raining. |
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