Feb. 10, 2023
Hi, I'm here again. It's difficult to learn a new lenguage because I'm learning alone, without any class, any course or any app, ok, that's not really true, I have a free course that I found in Internet and an app for vocabulary, but it's not complete, so I need to watch videos on Youtube for understand better. So, according to this free course, today I should write about my daily life.
Let's go:
I get up at half past six. After take a shower I do my breakfast and go to work. I start to work at nine and finish at half past four. I had lunch at 1:00.
After work, I come home and eat something fast, a pasta, a sandwich or leftovers from last night dinner. At 6:00 pm, I start to study english for an hour and a half.
Then, I do exercise, take another shower, listen to music or podcasts ( lately, I listen this just in english or french, because I need to learn english and I don't want to forget the little bit I learn of french).
Finally, I go to sleep about eleven.
Yes, I think It's a relax routine...
Thanks for any correction, I read you :D
My Daily Life - Routine
This is more how we'd say and write it in the US.
Hi, I'm here again.
It's difficult to learn a new leanguage because I'm learning alone, without any class, any course or any app, ok. Okay, that's not really true,. I haveusing a free course that I found inon the Internet and an app for vocabulary, but it's not complete, so I need to watch videos on Youtube foto get a better understand bettering.
Good for you!
So, according to this free course, today I should write about my daily lifroutine.
Let's go:.
I get up at half past six.
AfterThen I take a shower I do, eat my breakfast and go to work.
I start to work at nine9am and finish at half past four4:30pm.
I hadve lunch at 1:00pm.
After work, I come home and eat something fast, a like pasta, a sandwich or leftovers from last night's dinner.
At 6:00 pm, I start to study eEnglish for an hour and a half.
I think this is what's needed to really learn a language.
Then, I do exercises, take another shower, and listen to music or podcasts. ( lLately, I listen thio things just in eEnglish or fFrench, because I need to learn eEnglish and I don't want to forget the little bit I learn of frenchof French I've learned).
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Then, I exercise, take another shower, and listen to music or podcasts. (Lately, I listen to things just in English or French, because I need to learn English and I don't want to forget the little bit of French I've learned).
Finally, I go to sleep abrout elevennd 11pm.
Yes, I think It's a relaxing routine...
Thanks for any correction,. I'll read yours, too. :D
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Very nice! Good work!
Daily Life - Routine
Hi, I'm here again.
It's difficult to learn a new leanguage because I'm learning alone, without any class, any course or any app, okpp. OK, that's not really true, I have a free course that I found ion the Internet and an app for vocabulary, but. However, it's not complete, so I need to watch videos on Youtube forto understand better.
When you use "any" before "class", you don't need to use it with the other items on the list.
I have split this into 3 sentences as I think it's too long otherwise.
"to understand" - the correct preposition.
So, according to this free course, today I should write about my daily life.
Let's go:
I get up at half past six.
After I take a shower, I doeat my breakfast and go to work.
Alternative: After TAKING a shower, I eat my breakfast and go to work.
I start to work at nine and finish at half past four.
I hadve lunch at 1:00.
"had" is the past tense of "have"
After work, I come home and eat something fast, a pasta, a sandwich or leftovers from last night's dinner.
"Pasta" is non-countable
At 6:00 pm, I (start to) study english for an hour and a half.
"start to" isn't wrong, but it is unnecessary
Then, I do exercise, take another shower, and listen to music or podcasts ( l. Lately, I listen thishave been listening to these just in eEnglish or fFrench, because I need to learn eEnglish and I don't want to forget the little bit I learn of fFrench) that I learned.
In English, you listen TO something.
Languages always have a capital letter.
Finally, I go to sleep at about eleven.
Alternative: Finally, I go to sleep around eleven.
Yes, I think Iit's a relaxing routine...
Thanks for any corrections, I will read youthem :D
Feedback
Good luck on your English learning journey! Hope you have lots of fun :)
Daily Life - Routine
Hi, I'm here again.
It's difficult to learn a new leanguage because I'm learning alone, without any class, any course, or any app, ok, that's not realpp. It's actually not entirely true, because I have a free course that I found ion the Internet and an app for vocabulary, but. However, it's not complete, so I need to watch videos on Youtube forto understand better.
So, according to this free course, today I should write about my daily life.
Let's go:
I get up at half past six.
After take a shower I dohave my breakfast and go to work.
I start to work at nine and finish at half past four.
I hadve lunch at 1:00.
After work, I come home and eat something fast, a pasta, a sandwich, or leftovers from last night's dinner.
At 6:00 pm, I start to study eEnglish for an hour and a half.
Then, I do exercise, take another shower, listen to music or podcasts ( lately, I listen thishave been listening in just in eEnglish or fFrench, because I need to learn eEnglish and I don't want to forget the little bit I learn of fFrench I have learned).
Finally, I go to sleep at about eleven.
Yes, I think It's a relaxing routine...
Thanks for any correction, I read youthem. :D
It's difficult to learn a new leanguage because I'm learning alone, without any class, any course, or any app, ok. Okay, that's not really true, I have a free course that I found inon the Internet and an app for vocabulary, but it's not complete, so I need to watch videos on YoutTube forto understand better.
After takeing a shower, I dohave my breakfast and go to work.
I start to working at nine and finish at half past four.
I hadve lunch at 1:00.
Changing to present tense here to match the previous sentence
After work, I come home and eat something fast, a like pasta, a sandwich, or leftovers from lastthe previous night's dinner.
Speaking about a generalization/habit, it makes more sense to say "the previous night's dinner" instead of "last night's dinner"
At 6:00 pm, I start to study eing English for an hour and a half.
Then, I do exercise, take another shower, and listen to music or podcasts ( lately, I listen thiso them just in eEnglish or fFrench, because I need to learn eEnglish and I don't want to forget the little bit I learned of fFrench).
Finally, I go to sleep at about eleven.
Yes, I think Iit's a relaxing routine...
Thanks for any corrections, I will read youthem :D
No problem!
Feedback
Good job, keep it up
Daily Life - Routine My Daily This is more how we'd say and write it in the US.
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After work, I come home and eat something fast, a pasta, a sandwich or leftovers from last night dinner. After work, I come home and eat something fast, After work, I come home and eat something fast, "Pasta" is non-countable
After work, I come home and eat something fast After work, I come home and eat something fast Speaking about a generalization/habit, it makes more sense to say "the previous night's dinner" instead of "last night's dinner"
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At 6:00 pm, I start to study english for an hour and a half. At 6:00 pm, I At 6:00 pm, I (start to) study english for an hour and a half. "start to" isn't wrong, but it is unnecessary
At 6:00 pm, I I think this is what's needed to really learn a language.
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Then, I do exercise, take another shower, listen to music or podcasts ( lately, I listen this just in english or french, because I need to learn english and I don't want to forget the little bit I learn of french). Then, I Then, I do exercise, take another shower In English, you listen TO something.
Languages always have a capital letter. Then, I do exercises, take another shower, and listen to music or podcasts. ( or
Then, I exercise, take another shower, and listen to music or podcasts. (Lately, I listen to things just in English or French, because I need to learn English and I don't want to forget the little bit of French I've learned). Then |
Finally, I go to sleep about eleven. Finally, I go to sleep at about eleven. Finally, I go to sleep at about eleven. Alternative: Finally, I go to sleep around eleven.
Finally, I go to sleep a Finally, I go to sleep at about eleven. |
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