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brytcelf

Feb. 10, 2023

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Daily Life - Routine

Hi, I'm here again. It's difficult to learn a new lenguage because I'm learning alone, without any class, any course or any app, ok, that's not really true, I have a free course that I found in Internet and an app for vocabulary, but it's not complete, so I need to watch videos on Youtube for understand better. So, according to this free course, today I should write about my daily life.

Let's go:
I get up at half past six. After take a shower I do my breakfast and go to work. I start to work at nine and finish at half past four. I had lunch at 1:00.
After work, I come home and eat something fast, a pasta, a sandwich or leftovers from last night dinner. At 6:00 pm, I start to study english for an hour and a half.
Then, I do exercise, take another shower, listen to music or podcasts ( lately, I listen this just in english or french, because I need to learn english and I don't want to forget the little bit I learn of french).
Finally, I go to sleep about eleven.
Yes, I think It's a relax routine...
Thanks for any correction, I read you :D

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My Daily Life - Routine

This is more how we'd say and write it in the US.

Hi, I'm here again.

It's difficult to learn a new leanguage because I'm learning alone, without any class, any course or any app, ok. Okay, that's not really true,. I haveusing a free course that I found inon the Internet and an app for vocabulary, but it's not complete, so I need to watch videos on Youtube foto get a better understand bettering.

Good for you!

So, according to this free course, today I should write about my daily lifroutine.

Let's go:.

I get up at half past six.

AfterThen I take a shower I do, eat my breakfast and go to work.

I start to work at nine9am and finish at half past four4:30pm.

I hadve lunch at 1:00pm.

After work, I come home and eat something fast, a like pasta, a sandwich or leftovers from last night's dinner.

At 6:00 pm, I start to study eEnglish for an hour and a half.

I think this is what's needed to really learn a language.

Then, I do exercises, take another shower, and listen to music or podcasts. ( lLately, I listen thio things just in eEnglish or fFrench, because I need to learn eEnglish and I don't want to forget the little bit I learn of frenchof French I've learned).

or

Then, I exercise, take another shower, and listen to music or podcasts. (Lately, I listen to things just in English or French, because I need to learn English and I don't want to forget the little bit of French I've learned).

Finally, I go to sleep abrout elevennd 11pm.

Yes, I think It's a relaxing routine...

Thanks for any correction,. I'll read yours, too. :D

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Very nice! Good work!

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brytcelf

Feb. 13, 2023

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Thank you ^-^

Daily Life - Routine

Hi, I'm here again.

It's difficult to learn a new leanguage because I'm learning alone, without any class, any course or any app, okpp. OK, that's not really true, I have a free course that I found ion the Internet and an app for vocabulary, but. However, it's not complete, so I need to watch videos on Youtube forto understand better.

When you use "any" before "class", you don't need to use it with the other items on the list.
I have split this into 3 sentences as I think it's too long otherwise.
"to understand" - the correct preposition.

So, according to this free course, today I should write about my daily life.

Let's go:

I get up at half past six.

After I take a shower, I doeat my breakfast and go to work.

Alternative: After TAKING a shower, I eat my breakfast and go to work.

I start to work at nine and finish at half past four.

I hadve lunch at 1:00.

"had" is the past tense of "have"

After work, I come home and eat something fast, a pasta, a sandwich or leftovers from last night's dinner.

"Pasta" is non-countable

At 6:00 pm, I (start to) study english for an hour and a half.

"start to" isn't wrong, but it is unnecessary

Then, I do exercise, take another shower, and listen to music or podcasts ( l. Lately, I listen thishave been listening to these just in eEnglish or fFrench, because I need to learn eEnglish and I don't want to forget the little bit I learn of fFrench) that I learned.

In English, you listen TO something.
Languages always have a capital letter.

Finally, I go to sleep at about eleven.

Alternative: Finally, I go to sleep around eleven.

Yes, I think Iit's a relaxing routine...

Thanks for any corrections, I will read youthem :D

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Good luck on your English learning journey! Hope you have lots of fun :)

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brytcelf

Feb. 10, 2023

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Thank you :))

Daily Life - Routine

Hi, I'm here again.

It's difficult to learn a new leanguage because I'm learning alone, without any class, any course, or any app, ok, that's not realpp. It's actually not entirely true, because I have a free course that I found ion the Internet and an app for vocabulary, but. However, it's not complete, so I need to watch videos on Youtube forto understand better.

So, according to this free course, today I should write about my daily life.

Let's go:

I get up at half past six.

After take a shower I dohave my breakfast and go to work.

I start to work at nine and finish at half past four.

I hadve lunch at 1:00.

After work, I come home and eat something fast, a pasta, a sandwich, or leftovers from last night's dinner.

At 6:00 pm, I start to study eEnglish for an hour and a half.

Then, I do exercise, take another shower, listen to music or podcasts ( lately, I listen thishave been listening in just in eEnglish or fFrench, because I need to learn eEnglish and I don't want to forget the little bit I learn of fFrench I have learned).

Finally, I go to sleep at about eleven.

Yes, I think It's a relaxing routine...

Thanks for any correction, I read youthem. :D

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brytcelf

Feb. 10, 2023

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thank you

It's difficult to learn a new leanguage because I'm learning alone, without any class, any course, or any app, ok. Okay, that's not really true, I have a free course that I found inon the Internet and an app for vocabulary, but it's not complete, so I need to watch videos on YoutTube forto understand better.

After takeing a shower, I dohave my breakfast and go to work.

I start to working at nine and finish at half past four.

I hadve lunch at 1:00.

Changing to present tense here to match the previous sentence

After work, I come home and eat something fast, a like pasta, a sandwich, or leftovers from lastthe previous night's dinner.

Speaking about a generalization/habit, it makes more sense to say "the previous night's dinner" instead of "last night's dinner"

At 6:00 pm, I start to study eing English for an hour and a half.

Then, I do exercise, take another shower, and listen to music or podcasts ( lately, I listen thiso them just in eEnglish or fFrench, because I need to learn eEnglish and I don't want to forget the little bit I learned of fFrench).

Finally, I go to sleep at about eleven.

Yes, I think Iit's a relaxing routine...

Thanks for any corrections, I will read youthem :D

No problem!

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Good job, keep it up

Daily Life - Routine

My Daily Life - Routine

Hi, I'm here again.

It's difficult to learn a new lenguage because I'm learning alone, without any class, any course or any app, ok, that's not really true, I have a free course that I found in Internet and an app for vocabulary, but it's not complete, so I need to watch videos on Youtube for understand better.

It's difficult to learn a new leanguage because I'm learning alone, without any class, any course, or any app, ok, that's not realpp. It's actually not entirely true, because I have a free course that I found ion the Internet and an app for vocabulary, but. However, it's not complete, so I need to watch videos on Youtube forto understand better.

It's difficult to learn a new leanguage because I'm learning alone, without any class, any course or any app, okpp. OK, that's not really true, I have a free course that I found ion the Internet and an app for vocabulary, but. However, it's not complete, so I need to watch videos on Youtube forto understand better.

It's difficult to learn a new leanguage because I'm learning alone, without any class, any course or any app, ok. Okay, that's not really true,. I haveusing a free course that I found inon the Internet and an app for vocabulary, but it's not complete, so I need to watch videos on Youtube foto get a better understand bettering.

It's difficult to learn a new leanguage because I'm learning alone, without any class, any course, or any app, ok. Okay, that's not really true, I have a free course that I found inon the Internet and an app for vocabulary, but it's not complete, so I need to watch videos on YoutTube forto understand better.

So, according to this free course, today I should write about my daily life.

So, according to this free course, today I should write about my daily lifroutine.

Let's go:

Let's go:.

I get up at half past six.

After take a shower I do my breakfast and go to work.

After take a shower I dohave my breakfast and go to work.

After I take a shower, I doeat my breakfast and go to work.

AfterThen I take a shower I do, eat my breakfast and go to work.

After takeing a shower, I dohave my breakfast and go to work.

I start to work at nine and finish at half past four.

I start to work at nine and finish at half past four.

I start to work at nine and finish at half past four.

I start to work at nine9am and finish at half past four4:30pm.

I start to working at nine and finish at half past four.

I had lunch at 1:00.

I hadve lunch at 1:00.

I hadve lunch at 1:00.

I hadve lunch at 1:00pm.

I hadve lunch at 1:00.

After work, I come home and eat something fast, a pasta, a sandwich or leftovers from last night dinner.

After work, I come home and eat something fast, a pasta, a sandwich, or leftovers from last night's dinner.

After work, I come home and eat something fast, a pasta, a sandwich or leftovers from last night's dinner.

After work, I come home and eat something fast, a like pasta, a sandwich or leftovers from last night's dinner.

After work, I come home and eat something fast, a like pasta, a sandwich, or leftovers from lastthe previous night's dinner.

At 6:00 pm, I start to study english for an hour and a half.

At 6:00 pm, I start to study eEnglish for an hour and a half.

At 6:00 pm, I (start to) study english for an hour and a half.

At 6:00 pm, I start to study eEnglish for an hour and a half.

At 6:00 pm, I start to study eing English for an hour and a half.

Then, I do exercise, take another shower, listen to music or podcasts ( lately, I listen this just in english or french, because I need to learn english and I don't want to forget the little bit I learn of french).

Then, I do exercise, take another shower, listen to music or podcasts ( lately, I listen thishave been listening in just in eEnglish or fFrench, because I need to learn eEnglish and I don't want to forget the little bit I learn of fFrench I have learned).

Then, I do exercise, take another shower, and listen to music or podcasts ( l. Lately, I listen thishave been listening to these just in eEnglish or fFrench, because I need to learn eEnglish and I don't want to forget the little bit I learn of fFrench) that I learned.

Then, I do exercises, take another shower, and listen to music or podcasts. ( lLately, I listen thio things just in eEnglish or fFrench, because I need to learn eEnglish and I don't want to forget the little bit I learn of frenchof French I've learned).

Then, I do exercise, take another shower, and listen to music or podcasts ( lately, I listen thiso them just in eEnglish or fFrench, because I need to learn eEnglish and I don't want to forget the little bit I learned of fFrench).

Finally, I go to sleep about eleven.

Finally, I go to sleep at about eleven.

Finally, I go to sleep at about eleven.

Finally, I go to sleep abrout elevennd 11pm.

Finally, I go to sleep at about eleven.

Yes, I think It's a relax routine...

Yes, I think It's a relaxing routine...

Yes, I think Iit's a relaxing routine...

Yes, I think It's a relaxing routine...

Yes, I think Iit's a relaxing routine...

Thanks for any correction, I read you :D

Thanks for any correction, I read youthem. :D

Thanks for any corrections, I will read youthem :D

Thanks for any correction,. I'll read yours, too. :D

Thanks for any corrections, I will read youthem :D

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