May 19, 2021
Daily Dairy 2 (2021-5-19)
As the English improvement and cultural exchange program keeps going, I need to get up very early even though I am used to waking up around 9 am in my daily life. This program is held by a university located in Canada. Sadly, there is a huge time difference between Hong Kong and Canada. Hong Kong is fifteen hours ahead of Canada. The program time is set at 4 pm in Canada and I need to attend this program viz Zoom at 7 am in Hong Kong. However, I believe that this program can help me to meet folks around the world and improve my English. I find my classmates a little shy. They are shy to share their opinions and feelings during discussions. I need to take initiative to lead the discussions. It is hard for me since my English is not good. However, this situation has a positive side for me. If most of them are talkative and good at speaking English, I might be shy to share my points. but in this situation, I have more chances to practice my English speaking skills.
Besides the experience of joining the program, the most remarkable thing I would like to share today is the beautiful scenes I realized when I walked home. I walked from MTR station which is near my home around 6 pm. when I walked, the warm wind blew and went across me. I watched the blue skies and the white clouds, I felt peaceful and calm. When I walked alone the street, the sunshine radiated at me and the building, it is very beautiful and I could not find a proper word or expression to explain how wonderful it is. Thanks for the good weather and impressive views, I have good mode today.
Daily Dairy 2 (2021-5-19)
As the English improvement and cultural exchange program keeps goingcontinues, I need to get up very early, even though I am typically used to waking up around 9 am in my daily life.
The program time is set at 4 pm in Canada and I need to attend this program viza Zoom at 7 am in Hong Kong time.
However, I believe that this program can help me to meet folks around the world and improve my English.
I find that my classmates are a little shy.
remember in English we always need to use a version of the "to be" verb : is/are/was/were/etc
They arefeel shy abouto shareing their opinions and feelings during discussions.
In English we can't say I'm "shy to do" xyz, we have to say "I feel shy about"
I need to take the initiative to lead the discussions.
If most of them are talkative and good at speaking English, I might befeel shy abouto shareing my pointserspective.
Besides the experience of joining the program, the most remarkable thing I would like to share today is the beautiful scenesry I realized whenobserved as I walked home.
Scenes usually means like "scenes" in a movie. Scenery is more like beautiful nature.
We also can't realize scenes, we have to "observe" them or "look at them"
I walked from MTR station, which is near my home, around 6 pm.
whenAs I walked, the warm wind blew and went across me.
We have to use "as" here as you are describing what happened during the process of walking.
WhenAs I walked alone the street, the sunshine radiated at me and the building, it i. It was very beautiful and I could not find a proper word or expression to explain how wonderful it iwas.
Since this takes place in the past, make sure to check your tense.
Thanks forto the good weather and impressive views, I haved good moode today.
Again, remember to watch tense.
Also, we usually say "Thanks to..." as in "Thanks to XYZ, I felt ABC" or "Thanks to their help, we were able to get the job done"
Feedback
In general, you're english is very clear and it's great to see more advanced vocab words seeping in to your writing. My suggestions are quite picky because I want you to improve. Keep watching more English media and reading more books so you can get used to idioms/how words are used a little more!
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The program time is set at 4 pm in Canada and I need to attend this program viz Zoom at 7 am in Hong Kong. The program time is set at 4 pm in Canada and I need to attend this program vi |
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Daily Dairy 2 (2021-5-19) |
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As the English improvement and cultural exchange program keeps going, I need to get up very early even though I am used to waking up around 9 am in my daily life. As the English improvement and cultural exchange program |
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This program is held by a university located in Canada. |
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Sadly, there is a huge time difference between Hong Kong and Canada. |
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Hong Kong is fifteen hours ahead of Canada. |
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However, I believe that this program can help me to meet folks around the world and improve my English. However, I believe that this program can help me |
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I find my classmates a little shy. I find that my classmates are a little shy. remember in English we always need to use a version of the "to be" verb : is/are/was/were/etc
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They are shy to share their opinions and feelings during discussions. They In English we can't say I'm "shy to do" xyz, we have to say "I feel shy about"
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I need to take initiative to lead the discussions. I need to take the initiative to lead the discussions. |
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It is hard for me since my English is not good. |
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However, this situation has a positive side for me. |
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If most of them are talkative and good at speaking English, I might be shy to share my points. If most of them are talkative and good at speaking English, I might |
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but in this situation, I have more chances to practice my English speaking skills. |
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Besides the experience of joining the program, the most remarkable thing I would like to share today is the beautiful scenes I realized when I walked home. Besides the experience of joining the program, the most remarkable thing I would like to share today is the beautiful scene Scenes usually means like "scenes" in a movie. Scenery is more like beautiful nature.
We also can't realize scenes, we have to "observe" them or "look at them" |
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I walked from MTR station which is near my home around 6 pm. I walked from MTR station, which is near my home, around 6 pm. |
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when I walked, the warm wind blew and went across me.
We have to use "as" here as you are describing what happened during the process of walking.
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I watched the blue skies and the white clouds, I felt peaceful and calm. |
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When I walked alone the street, the sunshine radiated at me and the building, it is very beautiful and I could not find a proper word or expression to explain how wonderful it is.
Since this takes place in the past, make sure to check your tense.
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Thanks for the good weather and impressive views, I have good mode today. Thanks Again, remember to watch tense.
Also, we usually say "Thanks to..." as in "Thanks to XYZ, I felt ABC" or "Thanks to their help, we were able to get the job done" |
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