a
alisiah

May 14

English

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I saw on the Sorbonne University website that you are looking for someone experienced in catalyst development. Due to that, I have read some of your research papers. They are impressive, indeed. One of my research interests revolves around developing new synthetic strategies, particularly asymmetric ones, for biological applications or research per se, so your work in this field suits my research interests. Since I have worked on a catalyst project during my master’s, I have a good experience and knowledge in the catalyst field. Thus, I believe that my experience in this area would be an asset to your team.

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I saw on the Sorbonne University website that you are looking for someone experienced in catalyst development.

Due to that, I have read some of your research papers.

Due to thatis, I have read some of your research papers.

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They are impressive, indeed.

They are indeed impressive, indeed.

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One of my research interests revolves around developing new synthetic strategies, particularly asymmetric ones, for biological applications or research per se, so your work in this field suits my research interests.

One of my research interests revolves around developing new synthetic strategies, particularly asymmetric ones, for biological applications or for pure research per se, so your work in this field suits my research interests.

"Per se" sounds a bit strange to me there. Perhaps "pure research" better captures the idea of research without a definite application yet?

Since I have worked on a catalyst project during my master’s, I have a good experience and knowledge in the catalyst field.

Since I have worked on a catalyst project during my master’s, I have a good experience and knowledge in the catalyst field.

Since I have worked on a catalyst project during my master’s, I have a good experiences and knowledge in the catalyst field.

Thus, I believe that my experience in this area would be an asset to your team.

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