July 18, 2020
Could you please have a look at my CV's contents?
WORK EXPERIENCE
1. Road Design Engineer
National Rural Access Program (NRAP), Ministry of Public Works [ 09/2012 – 09/2014 ]
- Contributed to the process of design and drafting of roadways by introducing a new
AutoCAD Civil3D design template which significantly increased the productivity levels of the design department.
- Extensively involved in the evaluation of more than 10 road rehabilitation proposals and negotiations with contractors.
- Played a major rule in the economic evaluation of 600 KM roads using HDM 4 Software.
- Conducted a workshop for a group of 40 civil engineers and introduced to them AutoCAD Civil3D software package.
2. Road Design Engineer(Non-Official Member)
Ministry of Public Works [ 10/2011 – 02/2012 ]
- Conducted on-site surveys of rural roads using a total station theodolite and utilized the survey data for the realignment of rural roads.
- Gained extensive knowledge on redesigning of damaged highway using the MX Road software package.
- Participated in weekly meetings at the ministry and reported over weekly activities during site visits.
- Organized a workshop regarding AutoCAD Civil3D software package for a group of 30 civil engineers, and explained to them the basic functions and applications of the software in terms of road design.
Internship:
Advanced Construction Team [ 06/2008 – 07/2008 ]
- Acquired practical insight into the management of road projects, their supervision, and reporting.
- Utilized Primavera software package to prepare activities required for building a construction project and allocated resources.
- Joined a workshop regarding STAAD Pro software, which is a structural analysis and design software application, and utilized it to analyze different elements of a multi-story building such as beams, columns, and slabs.
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National Rural Access Program (NRAP), Ministry of Public Works [ (09/2012 – 09/2014 ])
National Rural Access Program (NRAP), Ministry of Public Works (09/2012 – 09/2014)
- Contributed to the process of designing and drafting of roadways by introducing a new - Contributed to the process of designing and drafting of roadways by introducing a new
- Played a major ruole in the economic evaluation of 600 KM roads using HDM 4 Software.
- Played a major role in the economic evaluation of 600 KM roads using HDM 4 Software.
- ConductLed a workshop for a group of 40 civil engineers and introduced them to them AutoCAD Civil3D software package.
- Led a workshop for a group of 40 civil engineers and introduced them to the AutoCAD Civil3D software package.
2. Road Design Engineer (Non-Official Member) 2. Road Design Engineer (Non-Official Member)
Maybe a little more explanation of what a non-official member is could be useful here? Like, were you a volunteer, an intern, or what?
Ministry of Public Works [ (10/2011 – 02/2012 ])
Ministry of Public Works (10/2011 – 02/2012 )
- Gained extensive knowledge on the redesigning of damaged highways using the MX Road software package. - Gained extensive knowledge on the redesigning of damaged highways using the MX Road software package.
- Participated in weekly meetings at the ministry and reported over weekly activities during site visits.
- Participated in weekly meetings at the ministry and reported weekly activities during site visits.
- Organized a workshop regardingabout AutoCAD Civil3D software package for a group of 30 civil engineers, and explained totaught them the basic functions and applications of the software in terms of road design.
- Organized a workshop about AutoCAD Civil3D software package for a group of 30 civil engineers, and taught them the basic functions and applications of the software in terms of road design.
Advanced Construction Team [ (06/2008 – 07/2008 ])
Advanced Construction Team (06/2008 – 07/2008)
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Great job! I was a little more exacting on this one since it's for a job, but your only mistakes were little things. Good luck on your new job!
July 18, 2020
Thanks a lot for your help. I was thinking I made more mistakes, luckily I didn't. A million thanks to you and stay safe!
Could you please have a look at my CV's contents?
WORK EXPERIENCE
1. Road Design Engineer
National Rural Access Program (NRAP), Ministry of Public Works [ (09/2012 – 09/2014 ])
National Rural Access Program (NRAP), Ministry of Public Works (09/2012 – 09/2014)
- Contributed to the design process of design and drafting of roadways by introducing a new
- Contributed to the design process and drafting of roadways by introducing a new
AutoCAD Civil3D design template which significantly increased the productivity levels of the design department.
- Extensively involved in the evaluation of more than 10 road rehabilitation proposals and negotiations with contractors.
- Played a major rule in the economic evaluation of 600 KMkm roads using HDM 4 Software.
- Played a major rule in the economic evaluation of 600 km roads using HDM 4 Software.
- Conducted a workshop for a group of 40 civil engineers and introduced to them AutoCAD Civil3D software package.
2. Road Design Engineer (Non-Official Member) 2. Road Design Engineer (Non-Official Member)
Ministry of Public Works [ (10/2011 – 02/2012 ])
Ministry of Public Works (10/2011 – 02/2012)
- Conducted on-site surveys of rural roads using a total station theodolite and utilized the survey data for the realignment of rural roads.
- Gained extensive knowledge on the redesigning of damaged highway using the MX Road software package. - Gained extensive knowledge on the redesigning of damaged highway using the MX Road software package.
- Participated in weekly meetings at the ministry and reported overn weekly activities during site visits.
- Participated in weekly meetings at the ministry and reported on weekly activities during site visits.
Not quite sure what you were trying to say with “reported over”... I don’t think a phrase like that exists. If you were going for “made reports about” then try this correction^ but you might want to get a second opinion! =)
- Organized a workshop regarding AutoCAD Civil3D software package for a group of 30 civil engineers, and explained to them the basic functions and applications of the software in terms of road design.
Internship:
Advanced Construction Team [ (06/2008 – 07/2008 ])
Advanced Construction Team (06/2008 – 07/2008)
- Acquired practical insight into the management of road projects, their supervision, and their reporting. - Acquired practical insight into the management of road projects, their supervision, and their reporting.
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- Acquired practical insight into the management of road projects and their supervision and reporting.
- Utilized the Primavera software package to prepare the activities required for building a construction project and allocated resources. - Utilized the Primavera software package to prepare the activities required for building a construction project and allocated resources.
I don’t know what Primavera is, so it might be more appropriate to use “a” instead of “the”.
- Joined a workshop regarding STAAD Pro software, which is a structural analysis and design software application, and utilizsed it to analyze different elements of a multi-story building such as beams, columns, and slabs.
- Joined a workshop regarding STAAD Pro software, which is a structural analysis and design software application, and used it to analyze different elements of a multi-story building such as beams, columns, and slabs.
“utilized” isn’t wrong, but it’s a little unnecessary when the shorter “used” exists. It kinda felt out of place when you seem to be going for a more ‘to-the-point’ style.
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Looking good! These are mostly insignificant corrections. I realise you’re going for the bullet point kind of style, so articles, pronouns and short words like that can often be omitted, but there were some points where omitting “the” started to sound a bit unnatural. That’s probably just my opinion, so don’t worry about it too much!
Good luck!
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National Rural Access Program (NRAP), Ministry of Public Works [ 09/2012 – 09/2014 ]
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- Played a major rule in the economic evaluation of 600 KM roads using HDM 4 Software.
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2. Road Design Engineer(Non-Official Member) 2. Road Design Engineer (Non-Official Member) 2. Road Design Engineer (Non-Official Member) 2. Road Design Engineer (Non-Official Member) 2. Road Design Engineer (Non-Official Member) Maybe a little more explanation of what a non-official member is could be useful here? Like, were you a volunteer, an intern, or what? |
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Ministry of Public Works [ 10/2011 – 02/2012 ]
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- Conducted on-site surveys of rural roads using a total station theodolite and utilized the survey data for the realignment of rural roads. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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- Gained extensive knowledge on redesigning of damaged highway using the MX Road software package. - Gained extensive knowledge on the redesigning of damaged highway using the MX Road software package. - Gained extensive knowledge on the redesigning of damaged highway using the MX Road software package. - Gained extensive knowledge on the redesigning of damaged highways using the MX Road software package. - Gained extensive knowledge on the redesigning of damaged highways using the MX Road software package. |
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- Participated in weekly meetings at the ministry and reported over weekly activities during site visits.
- Participated in weekly meetings at the ministry and reported o Not quite sure what you were trying to say with “reported over”... I don’t think a phrase like that exists. If you were going for “made reports about” then try this correction^ but you might want to get a second opinion! =)
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- Organized a workshop regarding AutoCAD Civil3D software package for a group of 30 civil engineers, and explained to them the basic functions and applications of the software in terms of road design. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Advanced Construction Team [ 06/2008 – 07/2008 ]
Advanced Construction Team
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- Acquired practical insight into the management of road projects, their supervision, and reporting. - Acquired practical insight into the management of road projects, their supervision, and their reporting. - Acquired practical insight into the management of road projects, their supervision, and their reporting. or: - Acquired practical insight into the management of road projects and their supervision and reporting. |
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- Utilized Primavera software package to prepare activities required for building a construction project and allocated resources. - Utilized the Primavera software package to prepare the activities required for building a construction project and allocated resources. - Utilized the Primavera software package to prepare the activities required for building a construction project and allocated resources. I don’t know what Primavera is, so it might be more appropriate to use “a” instead of “the”. |
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- Joined a workshop regarding STAAD Pro software, which is a structural analysis and design software application, and utilized it to analyze different elements of a multi-story building such as beams, columns, and slabs.
- Joined a workshop regarding STAAD Pro software, which is a structural analysis and design software application, and u “utilized” isn’t wrong, but it’s a little unnecessary when the shorter “used” exists. It kinda felt out of place when you seem to be going for a more ‘to-the-point’ style. |
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- Contributed to the process of design and drafting of roadways by introducing a new
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