May 23, 2020
We have a can of corn in our refrige, we opened it the other day,and we thought maybe we could make corn pancakes afterwards.
But we forgot that can of corn until today.
It occurred to me that it is still in refrige,so I reminded blair maybe we should make corn pancakes today. She agreed.
We started cooking after she finished her religious class with some ppl.
I went down the stair to get flour since we ran of our flour last time we made corn pancakes.
Our co-worker ,Miss ara who is chinese living with his husband live downstairs.
I ask her to borrow some flour, she gave me a jar of flour ,she said generously "you can use all of it if you need all of them,we can buy it from ibu"
We prepare all the ingredients ,which is flour can of corn, green onions, salt ,black pepper.
Chopped the green onions with knife and put all the ingredients into a steel mug and add some water,and stir it with spoon.
I took out pan from our room , put it on stove.
And poured some butter on the pan , turned on the the fire with spatula in my hand.
Wait for few seconds and I poured some of my watery ingredients into the pan. Wait for it and flip it. It is done when both side of the pancake is a little burnt.
It took me a long time to cook all the ingredients beacuse the pan is too smal to put a large ingredients on it.
Blair was using her cellphone while waiting for me.
Blair took a plate of corn pancakes and gave it to Miss ara as well as return the flour left.
The corn was good, a little sweet. I had three of them.
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We have a can of corn in our refrige, wrator. We opened it the other day, and we thought maybe we could make corn pancakes afterwards.
It occurred to me that it is still in the refrige,rator, so I reminded bBlair that maybe we should make corn pancakes today.
She agreed.
We started cooking after she finished her religiousn class with some ppl.
I went down the stairs to get flour since we ran of ourut of flour last time we made corn pancakes.
I ask her to borrow some flour, s. She gave me a jar of flour ,s. She said generously "yYou can use all of it if you need all of them,it, we can buy it from iIbu"
We prepare all the ingredients , which isare: flour, a can of corn, green onions, salt , and black pepper.
CI chopped the green onions with a knife and, put all the ingredients into a steel mug, and addded some water, and stirred it with a spoon.
AndI poured some butter oin the pan , and turned on the the firstove with a spatula in my hand.
WI waited for a few seconds and I poured some of my wateryet ingredients into the pan.
"Watery" technically isn't wrong as a description of the liquid's texture, but "wet" is used more often in baking and cooking as a distinction from "dry" ingredients.
WI waited for it andto be done, then flipped it.
To keep past tense consistent throughout description.
It is done when both sides of the pancake isare a little burnt.
Blair was using her cellphone while waiting for me.
The corn was good, a little sweet.
I had three of them.
Feedback
Good job! I bet your pancakes were delicious.
corn pancake and how to make it
We have a can of corn in our refrige, wrator. We opened it the other day, and we thought maybe we could make corn pancakes afterwards.
refrigerator / fridge for short
This is a run on sentence here (comma splice).
But we forgot about that can of corn until today.
It occurred to me that it is still in refrigerator,so I reminded bBlair maybe we should make corn pancakes today.
She agreed.
We started cooking after she finished her religious class with some ppl.
I went down the stairs to get flour since we ran of our flour last time we made corn pancakes.
'I went downstairs' is okay too.
Our co-worker , Miss aAra who is cChinese livinges with hiser husband live downstairs.
I ask her to borrow some flour, she gave me a jar of flour ,she said generously "you can use all of it if you need all of them,it, we can buy it from ibu"
Not sure what 'ibu' is...
We prepare all the ingredients ,which is flour can of corn, green onions, salt ,black pepper.
ChoppedI chop the green onions with a knife and put all the ingredients into a steel mug and add some water,and stir it with spoon.
Be careful with your tense here.
I took out a pan from our room , and put it on the stove.
And poured some butter on the pan , turned on the the fire with a spatula in my hand.
Wait for few seconds and I poured some of my watery ingredients into the pan.
Wait for it and flip it.
It is done when both side of the pancake is a little burnt.
It took me a long time to cook all the ingredients beacause the pan is too smal to put al for the larger ingredients oin it.
Blair was using her cellphone while waiting for me.
Blair took a plate of corn pancakes and gave it to Miss aAra as well as to return the flour that's left.
The corn was good, a little sweet.
I had three of them.
Feedback
Nice work!
You seem to switch between tenses so watch out for that. It reads a bit like a recipe, but it does sound like the pancakes turned out well.
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We have a can of corn in our refrige, we opened it the other day,and we thought maybe we could make corn pancakes afterwards. We have a can of corn in our refrige refrigerator / fridge for short This is a run on sentence here (comma splice). We have a can of corn in our refrige |
But we forgot that can of corn until today. But we forgot about that can of corn until today. |
It occurred to me that it is still in refrige,so I reminded blair maybe we should make corn pancakes today. It occurred to me that it is still in refrigerator,so I reminded It occurred to me that it is still in the refrige |
She agreed. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
We started cooking after she finished her religious class with some ppl. This sentence has been marked as perfect! We started cooking after she finished her religio |
I went down the stair to get flour since we ran of our flour last time we made corn pancakes. I went down the stairs to get flour since we ran of our flour last time we made corn pancakes. 'I went downstairs' is okay too. I went down the stairs to get flour since we ran o |
Our co-worker ,Miss ara who is chinese living with his husband live downstairs. Our co-worker |
I ask her to borrow some flour, she gave me a jar of flour ,she said generously "you can use all of it if you need all of them,we can buy it from ibu" I ask her to borrow some flour, she gave me a jar of flour ,she said generously "you can use all of it if you need all of Not sure what 'ibu' is... I ask her to borrow some flour |
We prepare all the ingredients ,which is flour can of corn, green onions, salt ,black pepper. This sentence has been marked as perfect! We prepare all the ingredients |
Chopped the green onions with knife and put all the ingredients into a steel mug and add some water,and stir it with spoon.
Be careful with your tense here.
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I took out pan from our room , put it on stove. I took out a pan from our room , and put it on the stove. |
And poured some butter on the pan , turned on the the fire with spatula in my hand. And poured some butter on the pan , turned on the the fire with a spatula in my hand.
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Wait for few seconds and I poured some of my watery ingredients into the pan. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
"Watery" technically isn't wrong as a description of the liquid's texture, but "wet" is used more often in baking and cooking as a distinction from "dry" ingredients. |
Wait for it and flip it. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
To keep past tense consistent throughout description. |
It is done when both side of the pancake is a little burnt. This sentence has been marked as perfect! It is done when both sides of the pancake |
It took me a long time to cook all the ingredients beacuse the pan is too smal to put a large ingredients on it. It took me a long time to cook all the ingredients be |
Blair was using her cellphone while waiting for me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Blair took a plate of corn pancakes and gave it to Miss ara as well as return the flour left. Blair took a plate of corn pancakes and gave it to Miss |
The corn was good, a little sweet. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I had three of them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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