July 13, 2021
Constant Dropping Wears The Stone
There was an accident that a steel pole of traffic light fell over this February. The pole was 6.5 meters tall and it was supposed to last 50 years but it had been only 23 years since it was built. The police investigated, and find out that there was 42 times the amount of urea at the root compared with another one. It seems that dogs pissed at the pole again and again during dog-walking, and it caused corrosion. It was lucky no one (and dogs too) got hurt. This accident reminded me of one story; a prisoner patiently dropped miso soup on the handcuff and the door of his prison cell for a long period of time, and finally broke out.
Constant Droipping Wears Down The Stone
There was an accident that ain which the steel pole of a traffic light fell over this February.
The pole was 6.5 meters tall and it was supposed to last 50 years but it had been only 23 years since it was built.
The police investigated, and fiound out that there was 42 times the amount of urea at the rootbase compared with another one.
Careful to align verb tenses.
Root is used for living things, base for non-living things
It seems that dogs pissed aton the pole again and again during dog-walking, and it caused corrosion.
It was lucky no one (andeven dogs too) got hurt.
This accident reminded me of onea story; a: A prisoner patiently droipped miso soup on thehis handcuffs and on the door of his prison cell for a long period of time, and he was finally brokeable to break out.
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July 14, 2021
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There was an accident that a steel pole of traffic light fell over this February. There was an accident |
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The pole was 6.5 meters tall and it was supposed to last 50 years but it had been only 23 years since it was built. |
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The police investigated, and find out that there was 42 times the amount of urea at the root compared with another one. The police investigated, and f Careful to align verb tenses.
Root is used for living things, base for non-living things |
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It seems that dogs pissed at the pole again and again during dog-walking, and it caused corrosion. It seems that dogs pissed |
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It was lucky no one (and dogs too) got hurt. It was lucky no one ( |
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This accident reminded me of one story; a prisoner patiently dropped miso soup on the handcuff and the door of his prison cell for a long period of time, and finally broke out. This accident reminded me of |
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