July 22, 2022
Concert in the summer?
No, I didn't go to a concert this summer because I usually don't assist to big events like that, I prefer staying in my house with my family but one time because of my mom my family and me went to a Caifanes concert and had a great time
No, no fui a un concierto este verano porque usualmente no asisto a eventos grandes como ese, prefiero quedarme en mi casa con mi familia pero una vez por mi mamá fuimos a un concierto de Caifanes y tuvimos un buen rato.
Concert in the summer?
No, I didn't go to a concert this summer because I usually don't assistgo to big events like that,. I prefer to staying in my at housme with my family but o. One time because of, however, thanks to my mom, my family and meI went to a Caifanes concert and had a great time.
This sounds more natural in the US.
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July 23, 2022
No, I didn't go to a concert this summer because I usually don't assistgo to big events like that,. I prefer to staying in my at housme with my family but o. One time because of, however, thanks to my mom, my family and meI went to a Caifanes concert and had a great time.
This sounds more natural in the US.
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CA concert in the summer?
No,. I didn't go to a concert this summer because I usually don't assist(go?) to big events like that,. I prefer staying in my house with my family, but one time because of my mom my family and me went to a Caifanes concert and had a great time
"No," also works informally. I'm not sure what you meant by "assist." "My family and me" should technically be "my family and I," but even most native speakers just write "my family and me."
July 22, 2022
No,. I didn't go to a concert this summer because I usually don't assist(go?) to big events like that,. I prefer staying in my house with my family, but one time because of my mom my family and me went to a Caifanes concert and had a great time
"No," also works informally. I'm not sure what you meant by "assist." "My family and me" should technically be "my family and I," but even most native speakers just write "my family and me."
Oh thanks and yeah I wanted to write "go to"
No, I didn't go to a concert this summer because I usually don't assist tottend big events like that, I prefer staying in my house with my family, but one time ,because of my mom, my family and me went to a Caifanes concert and had a great time.
No, I didn't go to a concert this summer because I usually don't assistgo to big events like that, I prefer staying in my house with my family but o. One time I did go to a concert because of my mom m. My family and meI went to a Caifanes concert and had a great time.
Hi! This was written really well :)
Your first sentence was a run-on sentence, so it was a bit hard to read. It did not give the reader a break to think about what you wrote (if that makes sense), so I broke up the sentence.
July 22, 2022
No, I didn't go to a concert this summer because I usually don't assistgo to big events like that, I prefer staying in my house with my family but o. One time I did go to a concert because of my mom m. My family and meI went to a Caifanes concert and had a great time.
Hi! This was written really well :)
Your first sentence was a run-on sentence, so it was a bit hard to read. It did not give the reader a break to think about what you wrote (if that makes sense), so I broke up the sentence.
Thanks I'm bad at separating sentences.
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Concert in the summer?
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No, I didn't go to a concert this summer because I usually don't assist to big events like that, I prefer staying in my house with my family but one time because of my mom my family and me went to a Caifanes concert and had a great time No, I didn't go to a concert this summer because I usually don't Hi! This was written really well :)
Your first sentence was a run-on sentence, so it was a bit hard to read. It did not give the reader a break to think about what you wrote (if that makes sense), so I broke up the sentence. No "No," also works informally. I'm not sure what you meant by "assist." "My family and me" should technically be "my family and I," but even most native speakers just write "my family and me."
No, I didn't go to a concert this summer because I usually don't This sounds more natural in the US.
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