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Common Mental Illness

When we are thinking in mental illness, we think in kinds like bipolar disorders, schizophrenia, psicothic disorders or obssesive-compulsive disorders. They are a very serious disorders, but also there are other mental illness very common between people. Throughout our lives, all of us we can suffer depressive disorders. There are more, like ansiety disorders, disorders related to stress or eating disorders, that could be a good example too. In brief, the mental illness can be more common from what we think.

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Common Mental Illnesses

When we are thinking in of mental illnesses, we might think inof kinds like/types such as bipolar disorders, schizophrenia, psicothic disordersychosis, or obssessive-compulsive disorders.

They are all very serious disorders, but also there are also other mental illnesses that are very common betweenamong the peopleulation.

Throughout our lives, all of us we can suffer depressive disorders.

All of us can be prone to depressive episodes. A disorder is something more unique to someone with a lasting chemical imbalance. A depressive episode is something we can all go through, even if we don't have a mental illness.

There are more, like ansany more, such as anxiety disorders, disorders related to stress, or eating disorders, that could be a good example (of ------) too.

mention what it is a good example of.
e.g that could be a good example of how the brain struggles to adapt to the modern era.

In brief, the/conclusion, mental illness canould be more common from w/prevalent/widespread thatn we think.

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Well done :) I added some alternatives. Hope this helps!

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Jan. 13, 2022

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It help a lot. Thanks.

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Ducky

Jan. 13, 2022

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It help a lot. Thanks.

Common Mental Illness

Common Mental Illnesses

When we are thinking in mental illness, we think in kinds like bipolar disorders, schizophrenia, psicothic disorders or obssesive-compulsive disorders.

When we are thinking in of mental illnesses, we might think inof kinds like/types such as bipolar disorders, schizophrenia, psicothic disordersychosis, or obssessive-compulsive disorders.

They are a very serious disorders, but also there are other mental illness very common between people.

They are all very serious disorders, but also there are also other mental illnesses that are very common betweenamong the peopleulation.

Throughout our lives, all of us we can suffer depressive disorders.

Throughout our lives, all of us we can suffer depressive disorders.

There are more, like ansiety disorders, disorders related to stress or eating disorders, that could be a good example too.

There are more, like ansany more, such as anxiety disorders, disorders related to stress, or eating disorders, that could be a good example (of ------) too.

In brief, the mental illness can be more common from what we think.

In brief, the/conclusion, mental illness canould be more common from w/prevalent/widespread thatn we think.

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