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ponta

May 8, 2021

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City Bikes

A city bike is a popular transportation in Japan. It's convenient to go to grocery stores or to pick children up. I often see mothers riding a bike that has baskets in front and rear. They put children and shopping bags in the baskets. To prevent UV, some lady wears a hat, sun visor, and arm covers, which are all black. The sun visor covers the face and looks like a welder's helmet. When I see the ladies riding a city bike, I think they are armored soldiers riding a horse.

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City Bikes

A city bike is a popular transportationway to get around in Japan.

or

A city bike is a popular means of transportation in Japan.

It's convenient to use to go to grocery stores or to pick up children up.

This sounds more natural in the US.

I often see mothers riding a bike that has baskets in the front and rearin the back.

More naturally sounding in the US

They put children and shopping bags in the baskets.

To prevent UV exposure, some ladywomen wears a hats, sun visors, and arm covers, which are all black.

The sun visor covers the face and looks like a welder's helmet.

When I see the ladies riding a city bike, I think they are armored soldiers riding a horse.

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面白そうです。よく出来ました。

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ponta

May 9, 2021

217

ありがとうございます!

I often see mothers riding a bike that has baskets in front and rear.


I often see mothers riding a bike that has baskets in the front and rearin the back.

More naturally sounding in the US

City Bikes


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A city bike is a popular transportation in Japan.


A city bike is a popular transportationway to get around in Japan.

or A city bike is a popular means of transportation in Japan.

It's convenient to go to grocery stores or to pick children up.


It's convenient to use to go to grocery stores or to pick up children up.

This sounds more natural in the US.

They put children and shopping bags in the baskets.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

To prevent UV, some lady wears a hat, sun visor, and arm covers, which are all black.


To prevent UV exposure, some ladywomen wears a hats, sun visors, and arm covers, which are all black.

The sun visor covers the face and looks like a welder's helmet.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I see the ladies riding a city bike, I think they are armored soldiers riding a horse.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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