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Chuson-ji Temple

ponta 263 · April 9

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A couple of days ago, I visited Chuson-ji temple that is famous for its national treasures. For an example of the treasure, Konjiki-do is a building covered with gold and beautiful decorations. In specific, mother‐of‐pearl works on pillars were excellent. It resembles Kinkaku-ji in Kyoto, but the former is built as a grave and older. There are many Buddha statues and they are all valuable to see. If you come to Tohoku region, Japan, I recommend visiting this place.


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oceandrive76 13 April 9, 2021
Chuson-ji Temple
A couple of days ago, I visited Chuson-ji temple that is famous for its national treasures.

A couple of days ago, I visited Chuson-ji temple that, which is famous for its national treasures.

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For an example of the treasure, Konjiki-do is a building covered with gold and beautiful decorations.

For aAn example of theis treasure, is Konjiki-do is, a building covered with gold and beautiful decorations.

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In specific, mother‐of‐pearl works on pillars were excellent.

In sSpecific,ally, the mother‐of‐pearl works on the pillars were excellent.

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"In specific" sounds more like something that you would say, but isn't necessarily grammatically correct.
It resembles Kinkaku-ji in Kyoto, but the former is built as a grave and older.

It resembles Kinkaku-ji in Kyoto, but the former is built as a grave and is older.

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There are many Buddha statues and they are all valuable to see.

There are many Buddha statues, and they are all valuable to see.

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If you come to Tohoku region, Japan, I recommend visiting this place.

If you come to Tohoku region, of Japan, I recommend visiting this place.

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Overall feedback & comment:

Great Job! Just a few corrections!
Comment added on 04/09/2021