April 9, 2021
A couple of days ago, I visited Chuson-ji temple that is famous for its national treasures. For an example of the treasure, Konjiki-do is a building covered with gold and beautiful decorations. In specific, mother‐of‐pearl works on pillars were excellent. It resembles Kinkaku-ji in Kyoto, but the former is built as a grave and older. There are many Buddha statues and they are all valuable to see. If you come to Tohoku region, Japan, I recommend visiting this place.
Chuson-ji Temple
A couple of days ago, I visited Chuson-ji temple that, which is famous for its national treasures.
For aAn example of theis treasure, is Konjiki-do is, a building covered with gold and beautiful decorations.
In sSpecific,ally, the mother‐of‐pearl works on the pillars were excellent.
"In specific" sounds more like something that you would say, but isn't necessarily grammatically correct.
It resembles Kinkaku-ji in Kyoto, but the former is built as a grave and is older.
There are many Buddha statues, and they are all valuable to see.
If you come to Tohoku region, of Japan, I recommend visiting this place.
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There are many Buddha statues and they are all valuable to see. There are many Buddha statues, and they are all valuable to see. |
Chuson-ji Temple |
A couple of days ago, I visited Chuson-ji temple that is famous for its national treasures. A couple of days ago, I visited Chuson-ji temple |
For an example of the treasure, Konjiki-do is a building covered with gold and beautiful decorations.
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In specific, mother‐of‐pearl works on pillars were excellent.
"In specific" sounds more like something that you would say, but isn't necessarily grammatically correct.
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It resembles Kinkaku-ji in Kyoto, but the former is built as a grave and older. It resembles Kinkaku-ji in Kyoto, but the former is built as a grave and is older. |
If you come to Tohoku region, Japan, I recommend visiting this place. If you come to Tohoku region |
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