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China's Intangible cultural heritage

I am translating something in Chinese into English. It is about Intangible cultural heritage (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Intangible_cultural_heritage).



From the Yimakan epics of Hezhe ethnic minority to the classical national chanting "Gesar Er", from the green tea making technique in the West Lake area to the art of embroidery, porcelain, opera and Kung Fu tea in the Chaoshan region, from Hainan’s Li brocade to Tibetan carpet weaving…, the rich and colorful intangible cultural heritage is strongly integrated with our modern life. It has become a rising star in the cultural tourism market, as well as a pop trend that the public is chasing for. Splendid artistry amazed audiences while other simple but rich folk festivals aroused nostalgia. The craftsmanship behind the arts passed from generation to generation and now builds a huge business market. Not only does Intangible cultural heritage exhibit the profundity and longevity of Chinese culture, it also achieves its own strong vitality and new possibilities through innovation.

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From the Yimakan epics of the Hezhe ethnic minority to the classical national chanting "Gesar Er", f. From the green tea -making technique in the West Lake area to the art of embroidery, porcelain, opera and, Kung Fu, tea infrom the Chaoshan region, from Hainan’s Li bBrocade to, and Tibetan carpet weaving, the rich and colorful intangible cultural heritage is strongly integrated withinto our modern life.

This was a long run-on sentence, so I broke this one sentence into two sentences. It could be broken into three sentences, but I didn't want to use the "from...to..." pattern many times. A list like this in the second sentence should be fine.

It has become a rising star in the cultural tourism market, as well as a popnew trend that the public is chasing foafter.

Splendid artistry amazed audiences while other simple but rich folk festivals aroused nostalgia.

The craftsmanship behind the arts passed from generation to generation and now builds a huge business market.

Not only does Intangible cultural heritage exhibit the profundity and longevity of Chinese culture, but it also achieves its own strong vitality and new possibilities through innovation.

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China's Intangible cultural heritage


I am translating something in Chinese into English.


It is about Intangible cultural heritage (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Intangible_cultural_heritage).


From the Yimakan epics of Hezhe ethnic minority to the classical national chanting "Gesar Er", from the green tea making technique in the West Lake area to the art of embroidery, porcelain, opera and Kung Fu tea in the Chaoshan region, from Hainan’s Li brocade to Tibetan carpet weaving…, the rich and colorful intangible cultural heritage is strongly integrated with our modern life.


From the Yimakan epics of the Hezhe ethnic minority to the classical national chanting "Gesar Er", f. From the green tea -making technique in the West Lake area to the art of embroidery, porcelain, opera and, Kung Fu, tea infrom the Chaoshan region, from Hainan’s Li bBrocade to, and Tibetan carpet weaving, the rich and colorful intangible cultural heritage is strongly integrated withinto our modern life.

This was a long run-on sentence, so I broke this one sentence into two sentences. It could be broken into three sentences, but I didn't want to use the "from...to..." pattern many times. A list like this in the second sentence should be fine.

It has become a rising star in the cultural tourism market, as well as a pop trend that the public is chasing for.


It has become a rising star in the cultural tourism market, as well as a popnew trend that the public is chasing foafter.

Splendid artistry amazed audiences while other simple but rich folk festivals aroused nostalgia.


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The craftsmanship behind the arts passed from generation to generation and now builds a huge business market.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Not only does Intangible cultural heritage exhibit the profundity and longevity of Chinese culture, it also achieves its own strong vitality and new possibilities through innovation.


Not only does Intangible cultural heritage exhibit the profundity and longevity of Chinese culture, but it also achieves its own strong vitality and new possibilities through innovation.

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