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Chickenpox

ponta 360 · Aug. 2

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The CDC reported the Delta variant of coronavirus is as transmittable as chickenpox. I remember I got chickenpox when I was a little child. It was agony because of the itch. In addition, I couldn't go to kindergarten or go out since chickenpox has strong infectivity and it's decided not to attend school until cured completely. The report is bad news.


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lynn 0 Aug. 2, 2021
Chickenpox
The CDC reported the Delta variant of coronavirus is as transmittable as chickenpox.
I remember I got chickenpox when I was a little child.
It was agony because of the itch.
In addition, I couldn't go to kindergarten or go out since chickenpox has strong infectivity and it's decided not to attend school until cured completely.

In addition, I couldn't go to kindergarten or go out since chickenpox has strong infectivity andso it's decidadvised not to attend school until cured completely. cured.

The report is bad news.
Correction 2 / 2
whimstories 0 Aug. 2, 2021
Chickenpox
The CDC reported the Delta variant of coronavirus is as transmittable as chickenpox.

The CDC reported the coronavirus Delta variant of coronavirus is as transmittable as chickenpox.

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I remember I got chickenpox when I was a little child.

I remember I gotgetting chickenpox when I was a little child.

It was agony because of the itch.

ItThe itch was agony because of the itch.

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Or: "It was agony because I was always itchy."
In addition, I couldn't go to kindergarten or go out since chickenpox has strong infectivity and it's decided not to attend school until cured completely.

In addition, I couldn't go toattend kindergarten or go outside since chickenpox hwas strong infectivity and it's decidely contagious, and I could not to attend school until curedI was completely cured.

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The report is bad news.

Theis report is bad news.

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"This" is more specific.

Overall feedback & comment:

Good job!
Comment added on 08/02/2021