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Aug 02

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Chickenpox

The CDC reported the Delta variant of coronavirus is as transmittable as chickenpox. I remember I got chickenpox when I was a little child. It was agony because of the itch. In addition, I couldn't go to kindergarten or go out since chickenpox has strong infectivity and it's decided not to attend school until cured completely. The report is bad news.

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The CDC reported the Delta variant of coronavirus is as transmittable as chickenpox.

The CDC reported the coronavirus Delta variant of coronavirus is as transmittable as chickenpox.

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I remember I got chickenpox when I was a little child.

I remember I gotgetting chickenpox when I was a little child.

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It was agony because of the itch.

ItThe itch was agony because of the itch.

Or: "It was agony because I was always itchy."
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In addition, I couldn't go to kindergarten or go out since chickenpox has strong infectivity and it's decided not to attend school until cured completely.

In addition, I couldn't go toattend kindergarten or go outside since chickenpox hwas strong infectivity and it's decidely contagious, and I could not to attend school until curedI was completely cured.

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In addition, I couldn't go to kindergarten or go out since chickenpox has strong infectivity andso it's decidadvised not to attend school until cured completely. cured.

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The report is bad news.

Theis report is bad news.

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