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Aug. 2, 2021

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Chickenpox

The CDC reported the Delta variant of coronavirus is as transmittable as chickenpox. I remember I got chickenpox when I was a little child. It was agony because of the itch. In addition, I couldn't go to kindergarten or go out since chickenpox has strong infectivity and it's decided not to attend school until cured completely. The report is bad news.

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Chickenpox

The CDC reported the Delta variant of coronavirus is as transmittable as chickenpox.

I remember I got chickenpox when I was a little child.

It was agony because of the itch.

In addition, I couldn't go to kindergarten or go out since chickenpox has strong infectivity andso it's decidadvised not to attend school until cured completely. cured.

The report is bad news.

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ponta

Aug. 3, 2021

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Thank you so much!

Chickenpox

The CDC reported the coronavirus Delta variant of coronavirus is as transmittable as chickenpox.

I remember I gotgetting chickenpox when I was a little child.

ItThe itch was agony because of the itch.

Or: "It was agony because I was always itchy."

In addition, I couldn't go toattend kindergarten or go outside since chickenpox hwas strong infectivity and it's decidely contagious, and I could not to attend school until curedI was completely cured.

Theis report is bad news.

"This" is more specific.

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ponta

Aug. 3, 2021

217

Thank you for your corrections!

Chickenpox

The CDC reported the Delta variant of coronavirus is as transmittable as chickenpox.

The CDC reported the coronavirus Delta variant of coronavirus is as transmittable as chickenpox.

I remember I got chickenpox when I was a little child.

I remember I gotgetting chickenpox when I was a little child.

It was agony because of the itch.

ItThe itch was agony because of the itch.

In addition, I couldn't go to kindergarten or go out since chickenpox has strong infectivity and it's decided not to attend school until cured completely.

In addition, I couldn't go toattend kindergarten or go outside since chickenpox hwas strong infectivity and it's decidely contagious, and I could not to attend school until curedI was completely cured.

In addition, I couldn't go to kindergarten or go out since chickenpox has strong infectivity andso it's decidadvised not to attend school until cured completely. cured.

The report is bad news.

Theis report is bad news.

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