July 10, 2022
Chapter 4 Charlie and the Chocolate Factory
In Chapter 4 Grandpa Joe is telling Charlie the story he knows about Willy Wonka's workers. Time ago, when Grandpa Joe worked for Willy Wonka at the Factory, everyone knew that Mr. Wonka was having problems with the spies that get into the Factory as normal workers to steal his recipes. When other sweet makers started imitating and even exceed Wonka's inventions, he thought it was enough to shut down. All the workers were sent home and said to never come back. The Factory stop working for a while and people thought Wonka will never open up again. But, one day the chimneys began to smoke and people could heard the machines working. The question everyone had was, "who is working?" "Nobody knows whom are" Said Grandpa Joe to Charlie. The only thing we know is that this people is short, no more taller than your knee.
I am summarising chapter 4 in my own words.
Chapter 4: Charlie and the Chocolate Factory
In Chapter 4, Grandpa Joe is telling Charlie thea story he knoew about Willy Wonka's workers.
TA long time ago, when Grandpa Joe worked for Willy Wonka at the Factory, everyone knew that Mr. Wonka was having problems with the spies that geot into the Factory as normal workers to steal his recipes.
When other sweet makers started imitating and even exceeded Wonka's inventions, he thought it was enough to shut his company down.
All the workers were sent home and saiwere told to never come back.
The Factory stopped working for a while, and people thought Wonka will never open up again.
"Nobody knows whom a were" Said Grandpa Joe to Charlie.
The only thing we know is that thise people isare short, no more taller than your knee.
Chapter 4: Charlie and the Chocolate Factory
Perfect use of title capitalization here :)
In Cchapter 4, Grandpa Joe is telling Charlie the story he knows about Willy Wonka's workers.
The advice I always got in school was to write out numbers under 10, but I don't think there's a set rule about it.
TA long time ago, when Grandpa Joe worked for Willy Wonka at the Factory, everyone knew that Mr. Wonka was having problems with the spies that get into the Factory (disguised) as normal workers to steal his recipes.
When other sweet s-makers started imitating and even exceeding Wonka's inventions, he thought it was enough to shut down.
Match gerund tense: imitating/exceeding or imitate/exceed.
All the workers were sent home and saitold to never come back.
The Factory stop working for a while and people thought Wonka willould never open up again.
Conditional tense
But, one day, the chimneys began to smoke and people could heard the machines working.
"Nobody knows whom we are," Ssaid Grandpa Joe to Charlie.
It is rare to see "whom" in modern English (US).
The only thing we know is that thisese people isare short, no more taller than your knee.
Plurality: /this person/ vs /these people/
July 16, 2022
In Cchapter 4, Grandpa Joe is telling Charlie the story he knows about Willy Wonka's workers.
The advice I always got in school was to write out numbers under 10, but I don't think there's a set rule about it.
I always have questions about how to write down numbers.
July 16, 2022
When other sweet s-makers started imitating and even exceeding Wonka's inventions, he thought it was enough to shut down.
Match gerund tense: imitating/exceeding or imitate/exceed.
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Chapter 4 Charlie and the Chocolate Factory Chapter 4: Charlie and the Chocolate Factory Chapter 4: Charlie and the Chocolate Factory Perfect use of title capitalization here :)
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In Chapter 4 Grandpa Joe is telling Charlie the story he know about Willy Wonka's workers. In Chapter 4, Grandpa Joe is telling Charlie |
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Time ago, when Grandpa Joe worked for Willy Wonka at the Factory everyone knew that Mr. Wonka was having problems with the spies that get into the Factory as normal workers to steal his recipes.
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When other sweet makers started imitating and even exceed Wonka's inventions, he thought it was enough to shut down. When other sweet makers started imitating and even exceeded Wonka's inventions, he thought it was enough to shut his company down. When other sweet Match gerund tense: imitating/exceeding or imitate/exceed.
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All the workers were sent home and said to never come back. All the workers were sent home and All the workers were sent home and |
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The Factory stop working for a while and people thought Wonka will never open up again. The Factory stopped working for a while, and people thought Wonka will never open up again. The Factory stop working for a while and people thought Wonka w Conditional tense
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But, one day the chimneys began to smoke and people could heard the machines working. But, one day, the chimneys began to smoke and people could heard the machines working. |
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The question everyone had was, "who is working?" |
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"Nobody knows whom are" Said Grandpa Joe to Charlie. "Nobody knows who "Nobody knows who It is rare to see "whom" in modern English (US).
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The only thing we know is that this people is short, no more taller than your knee. The only thing we know is that th The only thing we know is that th Plurality: /this person/ vs /these people/
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In Chapter 4 Grandpa Joe is telling Charlie the story he knows about Willy Wonka's workers. In The advice I always got in school was to write out numbers under 10, but I don't think there's a set rule about it.
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Time ago, when Grandpa Joe worked for Willy Wonka at the Factory, everyone knew that Mr. Wonka was having problems with the spies that get into the Factory as normal workers to steal his recipes.
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