Dec. 4, 2021
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Two years ago, I would never thoght the world going on like this. As a result, now I will do what I really want to do without considering the consequences years later. I really don't know what the world will be or even I would still live in the world.
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Two years ago, I would never thoght the world going on like this.
Consider also:
Two years ago, I would never have thought the world would be going on like this.
As a result, now I will do what I really want to do without considering the consequences years later.
This sentence is ok.
Allow me to suggest a little change or two so that the text might be able to flow in a more natural-sounding way (certainly in everyday spoken English):
"As a result, I will now do what I really want to do without considering the possible consequences in the years to come."
I really don't know what the world will be like, or even I would still live in the worldwhether/ if I will still be living.
Note that "if" and "whether" perform the same function here: each indicates the "doubt" in the sentence.
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Good work overall!
Please keep going, as you will improve steadily with ongoing and dedicated practice.
Let me know if you would like further help with any of the above issues.
Sincerely,
mjm
Dec. 5, 2021
Thank you!
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I really don't know what the world will be like or even if I would still live in the worldill be alive.
Dec. 5, 2021
Thank you!
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Two years ago, I would never thoght the world going on like this. Two years ago, I would never have thought that the world would be going on like this. Two years ago, I would never thoght the world going on like this. Consider also:
Two years ago, I would never have thought the world would be going on like this. |
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As a result, now I will do what I really want to do without considering the consequences years later. As a result, now I will do what I really want to do without considering the consequences As a result, now I will do what I really want to do without considering the consequences years later. This sentence is ok.
Allow me to suggest a little change or two so that the text might be able to flow in a more natural-sounding way (certainly in everyday spoken English): "As a result, I will now do what I really want to do without considering the possible consequences in the years to come." |
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I really don't know what the world will be or even I would still live in the world. I really don't know what the world will be like or even if I w I really don't know what the world will be like, or even Note that "if" and "whether" perform the same function here: each indicates the "doubt" in the sentence.
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