June 8, 2021
I remember many of the dreams I had. I used to write down interesting dreams in my notebook, but not now, because many recent dreams I can tell which are reflections of reality, which is boring to me. But I don't easily forget some specific scenes and events in those dreams and I recognize the existence of precognitive dreams.
CHALLENGE 8: Dreams
Most of the time, I remember many of the dreams I hadve.
I added most of the time, since it just sounds more natural and you put “many of the dreams” (which implies that you don’t remember your dreams all the time)
I used to write down interesting dreams in my notebook, but not now, because many recent dreams I can tell which areI don’t anymore, because many dreams recently/lately have been reflections of reality, which isare boring to me. and not worth writing down/recording.
You don’t need to put “now” here, since you already have “recent dreams”
But even though I don'’t easily forgetwrite them down, I still remember some specific scenes and events in those dreams and I recognize the existence of—some which I think are precognitive dreams.
“Don’t easily forget” is kind of wordy and it would be more simple and straightforward to just say “remember”
To clarify the “but” here, I put an explanation so readers can understand it better
CHALLENGE 8: Dreams |
I remember many of the dreams I had. Most of the time, I remember many of the dreams I ha I added most of the time, since it just sounds more natural and you put “many of the dreams” (which implies that you don’t remember your dreams all the time)
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I used to write down interesting dreams in my notebook, but not now, because many recent dreams I can tell which are reflections of reality, which is boring to me. I used to write down interesting dreams in my notebook, but You don’t need to put “now” here, since you already have “recent dreams”
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But I don't easily forget some specific scenes and events in those dreams and I recognize the existence of precognitive dreams. But even though I don “Don’t easily forget” is kind of wordy and it would be more simple and straightforward to just say “remember”
To clarify the “but” here, I put an explanation so readers can understand it better |
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