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June 8, 2021

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CHALLENGE 8: Dreams

I remember many of the dreams I had. I used to write down interesting dreams in my notebook, but not now, because many recent dreams I can tell which are reflections of reality, which is boring to me. But I don't easily forget some specific scenes and events in those dreams and I recognize the existence of precognitive dreams.

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CHALLENGE 8: Dreams

Most of the time, I remember many of the dreams I hadve.

I added most of the time, since it just sounds more natural and you put “many of the dreams” (which implies that you don’t remember your dreams all the time)

I used to write down interesting dreams in my notebook, but not now, because many recent dreams I can tell which areI don’t anymore, because many dreams recently/lately have been reflections of reality, which isare boring to me. and not worth writing down/recording.

You don’t need to put “now” here, since you already have “recent dreams”

But even though I don't easily forgetwrite them down, I still remember some specific scenes and events in those dreams and I recognize the existence of—some which I think are precognitive dreams.

“Don’t easily forget” is kind of wordy and it would be more simple and straightforward to just say “remember”
To clarify the “but” here, I put an explanation so readers can understand it better

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heyyawn

June 8, 2021

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Thank you very much for the corrections!

CHALLENGE 8: Dreams

I remember many of the dreams I had.

Most of the time, I remember many of the dreams I hadve.

I used to write down interesting dreams in my notebook, but not now, because many recent dreams I can tell which are reflections of reality, which is boring to me.

I used to write down interesting dreams in my notebook, but not now, because many recent dreams I can tell which areI don’t anymore, because many dreams recently/lately have been reflections of reality, which isare boring to me. and not worth writing down/recording.

But I don't easily forget some specific scenes and events in those dreams and I recognize the existence of precognitive dreams.

But even though I don't easily forgetwrite them down, I still remember some specific scenes and events in those dreams and I recognize the existence of—some which I think are precognitive dreams.

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