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heyyawn

June 5, 2021

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CHALLENGE 6

Making enough money to be able to come in handy when I need it. This way, I can live in a room where I don't have to put up with my roommates who like to make damn racket while eating, make a lot of noise at night, and stay up all night. Four people live in a small dorm room because of the order of their school numbers! There is no sense of privacy or boundaries in forcing a group of people you don't know to live together, and that drives me crazy.

Other than that, I want to enjoy real nature every day, not developed sites - I don't want to put up with crowds of people yelling and screaming, and I hate it when plants are pruned and arranged to look "nice" and then confined to small flower beds.

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CHALLENGE 6

Making enough money to be able to come in handyCurrently, my top priority is making enough money for when I need it.

This way, I can live in a room where I don't have to put up with my roommates who like to make a damn racket while eating, make a lot of noise at night, and stay up all night.

You can definitely say "make a damn racket," but keep in mind that it's informal and slightly impolite ;) not exactly swearing, but a bit close...

Four people live in a small dorm room because of the order of their school numbers!

There is no sense of privacy or boundaries in forcing a group of people you don't know to live together, and that drives me crazy.

Other than that, I want to enjoy real nature every day, not developed sites - I don't want to put up with crowds of people yelling and screaming, and I hate it when plants are pruned and arranged to look "nice" and then confined to small flower beds.

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heyyawn

June 8, 2021

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Thanks :)

CHALLENGE 6


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Making enough money to be able to come in handy when I need it.


Making enough money to be able to come in handyCurrently, my top priority is making enough money for when I need it.

This way, I can live in a room where I don't have to put up with my roommates who like to make damn racket while eating, make a lot of noise at night, and stay up all night.


This way, I can live in a room where I don't have to put up with my roommates who like to make a damn racket while eating, make a lot of noise at night, and stay up all night.

You can definitely say "make a damn racket," but keep in mind that it's informal and slightly impolite ;) not exactly swearing, but a bit close...

Four people live in a small dorm room because of the order of their school numbers!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There is no sense of privacy or boundaries in forcing a group of people you don't know to live together, and that drives me crazy.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Other than that, I want to enjoy real nature every day, not developed sites - I don't want to put up with crowds of people yelling and screaming, and I hate it when plants are pruned and arranged to look "nice" and then confined to small flower beds.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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