Dec. 30, 2021
Chairman's New Year's Speech! -- Help...!
Dear billiards family!
The new year of 2022 has dawned.
I hope that the new year will be bright and hopeful, leaving behind the memories of COVID-19 that has been difficult for many people.
Last year was a very difficult time. Due to the prolonged COVID-19, industries around the world have suffered many ups and downs, and the professional sports industry including the PBA was no exception.
Despite the difficult circumstances, the PBA is having a successful third season, starting with a strong opening match at Gyeongju Blue One Resort.
In the team league, where NH Nonghyup Card and Huons newly joined, about 50 players are competing in 8 teams. As the team league is now divided into the first half and second half leagues, players are showing higher concentration in the games. PBA team league has become a dream stage that many billiard players envy both in name and in reality.
The PBA also set up a stable tour structure. By establishing a perfect ascending system that leads to the 1st Tour, the Dream Tour and the Challenge Tour, we have successfully created the gateway for amateurs to becoming a professional athlete.
With each season, the interests of fans, media, and especially of sponsors, are growing. Even in the COVID-19 situation, we have expanded the TV and internet broadcasting platforms, and more fans are enjoying PBA, proving to the sports world PBA content’s effectivity on marketing.
All of these achievements would not have been possible without the help of all the people who believed in the PBA. Billiard players, sponsors, association staffs, and fans, thank you.
In the new year, PBA will devote itself to a higher goal.
We will put more effort to concretize construction of a professional billiards-only stadium. The PBA formed the <Exclusive Stadium Construction TF Team>, and we are working hard with the plan to confirm the site for an exclusive stadium in the first half of 2022. I am sure that the construction of a dedicated stadium will become a cornerstone for taking PBA to the next level.
From the early days of its inception, the PBA advocated ‘participation of the players’. We will further expand cooperation with the players who are the heroes and heroines of the tour.
Recently, the PBA held talks with the Professional Billiards Players' Association, in order to expand the base and strengthen the status of billiard players, such as by nurturing young talent, revitalizing school sports and cooperating in the 2nd and 3rd part tour. We agreed to work closely together. The PBA operating with the players will be the most ideal.
We will strive to improve the quality of game content. We will continue our effort to make a more professional game system. We will introduce a video review system to ensure clear judgment and sophisticated game operation. We will also focus on strengthening the expertise of referees and game management personnel.
We will continue to cooperate with foreign billiards organizations and other domestic organizations. PBA will not only pursue the success of professional billiards but will also seek to cooperate with amateur organizations, aiming to work together for the development of billiards.
In addition, we will spur overseas tours for global fans. In preparation for the time when the barriers of COVID-19 are lifted, we will not neglect to prepare for a global tour that extends to the world.
We will do our best to become a PBA where fans can fully enjoy their presence at the games. I hope that our players will soon be able to interact with the fans at the stadiums as restrictions ease with <With Corona>.
In the new year of the tiger, a symbol of bravery, I wish you all good health and good luck.
Chairman's New Year's Speech! -- Help...!
Dear billiards family!
The new year of 2022 has dawned.
I hope that the new year will be bright and hopeful, leaving behind the memories of COVID-19 that has been difficult for many people.
Last year was a very difficult time.
Due to the prolonged COVID-19 situation, industries around the world have suffered many ups and downs, and the professional sports industry, including the PBA, was no exception.
Despite the difficult circumstances, the PBA is having a successful third season, starting with a strong opening match at Gyeongju Blue One Resort.
In the team league, where NH Nonghyup Card and Huons newly joined, about 50 players are competing in 8 teams.
As the team league is now divided into the first half and second half leagues, players are showing higher concentration in the games.
PBA team league has become a dream stage that many billiard players envy both in name and in reality.
The PBA also set up a stable tour structure.
By establishing a perfect ascending system that leads to the 1st Tour, the Dream Tour and the Challenge Tour, we have successfully created the gateway for amateurs to becominge a professional athlete.
With each season, the interests of fans, media, and especially of sponsors, are growing.
Even during the COVID-19 situation, we have expanded the TV and internet broadcasting platforms, and more fans are enjoying PBA, proving to the sports world PBA content’s effectivity on marketing.
All of these achievements would not have been possible without the help of all the people who believed in the PBA.
Billiard players, sponsors, association staffs, and fans, thank you.
In the new year, PBA will devote itself to a higher goal.
We will put in more effort to concretize construction of a professional billiards-only stadium.
The PBA formed the
The PBA formed the <Exclusive Stadium Construction TF Team>, and we are working hard with the plan to confirm the site for an exclusive stadium in the first half of 2022.
I am sure that the construction of a dedicated stadium will become a cornerstone for taking PBA to the next level.
From the early days of its inception, the PBA has advocated for the ‘participation of the players’.
We will further expand cooperation with the players who are the heroes and heroines of the tour.
Recently, the PBA held talks with the Professional Billiards Players' Association, in order to expand the base and strengthen the status of billiard players, such as by nurturing young talent, revitalizing school sports and cooperating in the 2nd and 3rd part tour.
We agreed to work closely together.
The PBA operating with the players will be the most ideal.
We will strive to improve the quality of game content.
We will continue our effort to make a more professional game system.
We will introduce a video review system to ensure clear judgment and sophisticated game operation.
We will also focus on strengthening the expertise of referees and game management personnel.
We will continue to cooperate with foreign billiards organizations and other domestic organizations.
PBA will not only pursue the success of professional billiards but will also seek to cooperate with amateur organizations, aiming to work together for the development of billiards.
In addition, we will spur overseas tours for global fans.
In preparation for the time when the barriers of COVID-19 are lifted, we will not neglect to prepare for a global tour that extends to the world.
We will do our best to become a PBA where fans can fully enjoy their presence at the games.
I hope that our players will soon be able to interact with the fans at the stadiums as COVID restrictions ease with <With Corona>.
In the new year of the tiger, a symbol of bravery, I wish you all good health and good luck.
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Overall, your speech is very clear and makes sense. There are very few mistakes. Great job, and I hope all goes well! :)
Dear billiards family!,
This isn't necessarily wrong, but it looks a bit excited at a strange place to be excited.
The new year of 2022 has dawned.
In English, we would say "the new year" or "2022." Using both in the same sentence sounds redundant.
I hope that the new year will be bright and hopeful, leaving behind the memories of COVID-19 that, which has been difficult for so many people.
Due to the prolonged COVID-19 epidemic, industries around the world have suffered many ups and downs, and the professional sports industry, including the PBA, was no exception.
Despite the difficult circumstances, the PBA is having a successful third season, starting with a strong opening match at Gyeongju Blue One Resort.
In the team league, whereich NH Nonghyup Card and Huons newhave recently joined, about 50 players are competing in 8 teams.
As the team league is now divided into the first half and second half leagues, players are showing higher concentration in the games.
PBA team league has become a dream stage that many billiard players envy, both in name and in reality.
The PBA has also set up a stable tour structure.
We like to use the present perfect tense (현재완료) when the action has an effect on the event that we are describing.
By establishing a perfect ascending system that leads to the 1st Tour, the Dream Tour and the Challenge Tour, we have successfully created thea gateway for amateurs to becoming a professional athlete.
"The gateway" implies that you've created the only solution that is possible.
With each season, the interests of fans, media, and especially of sponsors, are is growing.
This is a strange rule of English that doesn't make much sense! "Interests" sounds more like 기득 권익, but "interest" sounds like 흥미.
Even in the COVID-19 situation, we have expanded theour TV and internet broadcasting platforms, and more fans are enjoying PBA, proving to the sports world PBA content’s effectivity on marketing.
AllNone of these achievements would not have been possible without the help of all the people who believed in the PBA.
In English, instead of "all would not," we say "none would."
Alternative: All of these achievements would have been impossible without the help of all the people who believed in the PBA.
Billiard players, sponsors, association staffs, and fans, thank you.
When staff refers to a group of people, it is always singular.
In the new year, PBA will devote itself to a higher goal.
We will put more effort into concrmpletizeng construction of a professional billiards-only stadium.
The PBA formed the <Exclusive Stadium Construction TF Team>, and we are working hard with the plan to confirm the site for an exclusive stadium in the first half of 2022.
This isn't grammar! In LangCorrect, 홑화살괄호 are HTML. They make the text inside invisible.
I am sure that the construction of a dedicated stadium will become a cornerstone for taking PBA to the next level.
From the early days of its inception, the PBA has advocated ‘participation of the players’.’
현재완료 again!
We will further expand cooperation with theour players, who are the heroes and heroines of the tour.
Recently, the PBA held talks with the Professional Billiards Players' Association, in order to expand the base and strengthen the status of billiard players, such as by nurturing young talent, revitalizing school sports and cooperating in the 2nd and 3rd part tour.
We agreed to work closely together.
The PBA operating with the players will be the most ideal.
The PBA operating with the players will be the most ideal.
We will strive to improve the quality of game content.
We will continue our effort to make a more professional game system.
We will introduce a video review system to ensure clear judgment and sophisticated game operation.
We will also focus on strengthening the expertise of referees and game management personnel.
We will continue to cooperate with foreign billiards organizations and other domestic organizations.
PBA will not only pursue the success of professional billiards but will also seek to cooperate with amateur organizations, aiming to work together for the development of billiards.
In addition, we will spur overseas tours for global fans.
In preparation for the time when the barriers of COVID-19 are lifted, we will not neglect to prepare for a global tour that extends to the world.
We will do our best to become a PBA where fans can fully enjoy their presence at the games.
I hope that our players will soon be able to interact with the fans at the stadiums as coronavirus restrictions ease with <With Corona>.
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This is very, very close to what a native speaker would write! Good job!
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Chairman's New Year's Speech! -- Help...! |
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Dear billiards family! Dear billiards family This isn't necessarily wrong, but it looks a bit excited at a strange place to be excited.
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The new year of 2022 has dawned. The new year In English, we would say "the new year" or "2022." Using both in the same sentence sounds redundant.
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I hope that the new year will be bright and hopeful, leaving behind the memories of COVID-19 that has been difficult for many people. I hope that the new year will be bright and hopeful, leaving behind the memories of COVID-19 |
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Last year was a very difficult time. |
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Due to the prolonged COVID-19, industries around the world have suffered many ups and downs, and the professional sports industry including the PBA was no exception. Due to the prolonged COVID-19 epidemic, industries around the world have suffered many ups and downs, and the professional sports industry, including the PBA, was no exception. Due to the prolonged COVID-19 situation, industries around the world have suffered many ups and downs, and the professional sports industry, including the PBA, was no exception. |
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Despite the difficult circumstances, the PBA is having a successful third season, starting with a strong opening match at Gyeongju Blue One Resort. |
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In the team league, where NH Nonghyup Card and Huons newly joined, about 50 players are competing in 8 teams. In the team league, wh |
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As the team league is now divided into the first half and second half leagues, players are showing higher concentration in the games. |
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PBA team league has become a dream stage that many billiard players envy both in name and in reality. PBA team league has become a dream stage that many billiard players envy, both in name and in reality. |
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The PBA also set up a stable tour structure. The PBA has also set up a stable tour structure. We like to use the present perfect tense (현재완료) when the action has an effect on the event that we are describing.
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By establishing a perfect ascending system that leads to the 1st Tour, the Dream Tour (Part 2) and the Challenge Tour (Part 3), we have successfully created the gateway for amateurs to becoming a professional athlete. |
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With each season, the interests of fans, media, and especially of sponsors, are growing. With each season, the interest This is a strange rule of English that doesn't make much sense! "Interests" sounds more like 기득 권익, but "interest" sounds like 흥미.
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Even in the COVID-19 situation, we have expanded the TV broadcasting and internet broadcasting platforms, and more fans are enjoying PBA, proving to the sports world PBA content’s effectivity on marketing. |
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All of these achievements would not have been possible without the help of all the people who believed in the PBA.
In English, instead of "all would not," we say "none would."
Alternative: All of these achievements would have been impossible without the help of all the people who believed in the PBA. |
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Billiard players, sponsors, association staffs, and fans, thank you. Billiard players, sponsors, association staff When staff refers to a group of people, it is always singular.
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In the new year, PBA will devote itself to a higher goal. |
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We will put more effort to concretize construction of a professional billiards-only stadium. We will put more effort into co We will put in more effort to concretize construction of a professional billiards-only stadium. |
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The PBA formed the <Exclusive Stadium Construction TF Team>, and we are working hard with the plan to confirm the site for an exclusive stadium in the first half of 2022. The PBA formed the This isn't grammar! In LangCorrect, 홑화살괄호 are HTML. They make the text inside invisible.
The PBA formed the <Exclusive Stadium Construction TF Team>, and we are working hard with the plan to confirm the site for an exclusive stadium in the first half of 2022. |
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I am sure that the construction of a dedicated stadium will become a cornerstone for taking PBA to the next level. |
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From the early days of its inception, the PBA advocated ‘participation of the players’. From the early days of its inception, the PBA has advocated ‘participation of the players 현재완료 again!
From the early days of its inception, the PBA has advocated for the ‘participation of the players’. |
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We will further expand cooperation with the players who are the heroes and heroines of the tour. We will further expand cooperation with |
|
Recently, the PBA held talks with the Professional Billiards Players' Association, in order to expand the base and strengthen the status of billard players, such as by nurturing youth, revitalizing school sports and cooperating in the 2nd and 3rd part tour. |
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We agreed to work closely together. |
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The PBA operating with the players will be the most ideal. The PBA operating with the players will be |
|
We will strive to improve the quality of game content. |
|
We will continue our effort to make a more professional game system. |
|
We will introduce a video review system to ensure clear judgment and sophisticated game operation. |
|
We will also focus on strengthening the expertise of referees and game management personnel. |
|
We will continue to cooperate with foreign billiards organizations and other domestic organizations. |
|
PBA will not only pursue the success of professional billiards but will also seek to cooperate with amateur organizations, aiming to work together for the development of billiards. |
|
In addition, we will spur overseas tours for global fans. |
|
In preparation for the time when the barriers of COVID-19 are lifted, we will not neglect to prepare for a global tour that extends to the world. In preparation for the time when the barriers of COVID-19 are lifted, we will |
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We will do our best to become a PBA where fans can fully enjoy their presence at the games. |
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I hope that our players will soon be able to interact with the fans as restrictions ease with <With Corona>. |
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In the new year of the tiger, a symbol of bravery, I wish you all good health and good luck. |
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By establishing a perfect ascending system that leads to the 1st Tour, the Dream Tour and the Challenge Tour, we have successfully created the gateway for amateurs to becoming a professional athlete. By establishing a perfect ascending system that leads to the 1st Tour, the Dream Tour and the Challenge Tour, we have successfully created "The gateway" implies that you've created the only solution that is possible.
By establishing a perfect ascending system that leads to the 1st Tour, the Dream Tour and the Challenge Tour, we have successfully created the gateway for amateurs to becom |
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Even in the COVID-19 situation, we have expanded the TV and internet broadcasting platforms, and more fans are enjoying PBA, proving to the sports world PBA content’s effectivity on marketing. Even in the COVID-19 situation, we have expanded Even during the COVID-19 situation, we have expanded the TV and internet broadcasting platforms, and more fans are enjoying PBA, proving to the sports world PBA content’s effectivity on marketing. |
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Recently, the PBA held talks with the Professional Billiards Players' Association, in order to expand the base and strengthen the status of billiard players, such as by nurturing young talent, revitalizing school sports and cooperating in the 2nd and 3rd part tour. Recently, the PBA held talks with the Professional Billiards Players' Association |
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I hope that our players will soon be able to interact with the fans at the stadiums as restrictions ease with <With Corona>. I hope that our players will soon be able to interact with the fans at the stadiums as coronavirus restrictions ease I hope that our players will soon be able to interact with the fans at the stadiums as COVID restrictions ease |
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