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kiwy

Aug. 15, 2021

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Cats

When I was having an online English class, there were some loud noise outside. It sounded like several babies were crying. But there is only one infant nearby, so it couldn't be a baby. I soon realised that they were cats in oestrus. Their voices like a knife split the silence in the evening. I felt a little horrible when they kept screming and screaming. I paied attention to my class again and had no idea when they had gone.
They are wildcats because none of my neighbors keep a cat. Cats in town aren't uncomman, because some people raise them to catch mice. Yes, there are many mice in town. The cats never get vaccinated because the towners never have the concept. They only vaccinate the animals that can benefit them, like pigs. And people never sterilize their cats either. Since most cats are free, they will go everywhere. As a result, there are many wildcats who rely on garbage dump.

(Caution: The following paragraph should make you uncomfortable)

I think the worst thing which people do for the cats is: some people will eat the cats. Because of a kind of superstitions, they think cat is more nutrient than pork or fish.
There are a lot of superstitions so that is why more and more animals in great danger disappear in this country. I hate this a lot, but I can do nothing which make me helpless. As the technology developing, humans get more and more advantages and have a better life. But most of them never try to get more knowledge scientifically. Their equiments are the newset while their mind is the ancient. It is the sadness of the world.

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When I was having an online English class, there were some loud noises outside.

It sounded like several babies were crying.

But there is only one infant nearby, so it couldn't be a baby.

I soon realised that they were cats in oestrus.

Their voices like a knife split the silence in the eveningsplit the evening silence like a knife.

I felt a little horrible when they kept screaming and screaming.

I paied attention to my class again and had no idea when they had gone.

They are wildcats because none of my neighbors keep a cat.

Cats in town aren't uncomman,on because some people raise them to catch mice.

Yes, there are many mice in town.

The cats never get vaccinated because the towners never have the codon't recognize the importancept.

They only vaccinate the animals that can benefit them, like pigs.

And people never sterilize their cats either.

Since most cats are free, they will go everywhere.

As a result, there are many wildcats who rely on garbage dumps.

(Caution: The following paragraph should make you uncomfortable)

I think the worst thing which people do forto the cats is this: some people will eat the cats.

Because of a kind of superstitions, they think cat is more nutrienttious than pork or fish.

There are a lot of superstitions, so that is why more and more animals in great danger disappear in this country.

I hate this a lot, but I can do nothing, which makes me helpless.

As the technology developings, humans get more and more advantages and have a better life.

But most of them never try to get more knowledge scientifically.

Their equipments are the newset is new while their mind is the ancients are old-fashioned.

It is the sadness of the worlda shame.

kiwy's avatar
kiwy

Aug. 16, 2021

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Thanks for your corrections.

Cats

Whilen I was having an online English class, there wereI heard some loud noise outside.

It sounded like several babies were crying.

But there iwas only one infant nearby, so it couldn't be a baby.

I soon realised that they were cats in oestrus.

I'm not sure what an oestrus is

Their voices like a knife splitcries cut through the silence in the evening like a knife.

I felt a little horrible when they kept screaming and screaming.

I paiedreturned my attention to my class again and had no idea when they had goneleft.

They are wildferal cats because none of my neighbors keeps a cat.

Cats inside the town aren't uncommaon, because some people raise them to catch mice.

Yes, there are many mice in town.

The cats never get vaccinated because the townersspeople never have the concept.

They only vaccinate the animals that can benefit them, like pigs.

And people never sterilize their cats, either.

Since most cats are free, they will go everywhere.

As a result, there are many wildcats who rely onfinding food in the garbage dump.

(Caution: The following paragraph shcould make you uncomfortable)

I think the worst thing whichthat people do forto the cats is: some people will eat the catsm.

Because of a kind of superstitions, they think that cat is more nutrienttious than pork or fish.

There are a lot of superstitions, so that is why more and more animals are in great danger of disappearing in this country.

I hate this a lot, but I can do nothing which make me helpless.

As the technology developings, humans gethave more and more advantages and have a better life.

But most of them never try to getain more knowledge scientificallyscientific knowledge.

Their equiments are the newset while their mind is the ancienttools are modern while their mindset is antiquated.

It is thea great sadness ofin the world.

kiwy's avatar
kiwy

Aug. 16, 2021

0

Thanks for your corrections.

Cats

When I was having an online English class, there were some loud noise outside.

When I was having an online English class, there were some loud noises outside.

Whilen I was having an online English class, there wereI heard some loud noise outside.

It sounded like several babies were crying.

But there is only one infant nearby, so it couldn't be a baby.

But there iwas only one infant nearby, so it couldn't be a baby.

I soon realised that they were cats in oestrus.

I soon realised that they were cats in oestrus.

Their voices like a knife split the silence in the evening.

Their voices like a knife split the silence in the eveningsplit the evening silence like a knife.

Their voices like a knife splitcries cut through the silence in the evening like a knife.

I felt a little horrible when they kept screming and screaming.

I felt a little horrible when they kept screaming and screaming.

I felt a little horrible when they kept screaming and screaming.

I paied attention to my class again and had no idea when they had gone.

I paiedreturned my attention to my class again and had no idea when they had goneleft.

I paied attention to my class again and had no idea when they had gone.

They are wildcats because none of my neighbors keep a cat.

They are wildferal cats because none of my neighbors keeps a cat.

Cats in town aren't uncomman, because some people raise them to catch mice.

Cats inside the town aren't uncommaon, because some people raise them to catch mice.

Cats in town aren't uncomman,on because some people raise them to catch mice.

Yes, there are many mice in town.

The cats never get vaccinated because the towners never have the concept.

The cats never get vaccinated because the townersspeople never have the concept.

The cats never get vaccinated because the towners never have the codon't recognize the importancept.

They only vaccinate the animals that can benefit them, like pigs.

And people never sterilize their cats either.

And people never sterilize their cats, either.

Since most cats are free, they will go everywhere.

Since most cats are free, they will go everywhere.

As a result, there are many wildcats who rely on garbage dump.

As a result, there are many wildcats who rely onfinding food in the garbage dump.

As a result, there are many wildcats who rely on garbage dumps.

(Caution: The following paragraph should make you uncomfortable)

(Caution: The following paragraph shcould make you uncomfortable)

I think the worst thing which people do for the cats is: some people will eat the cats.

I think the worst thing whichthat people do forto the cats is: some people will eat the catsm.

I think the worst thing which people do forto the cats is this: some people will eat the cats.

Because of a kind of superstitions, they think cat is more nutrient than pork or fish.

Because of a kind of superstitions, they think that cat is more nutrienttious than pork or fish.

Because of a kind of superstitions, they think cat is more nutrienttious than pork or fish.

There are a lot of superstitions so that is why more and more animals in great danger disappear in this country.

There are a lot of superstitions, so that is why more and more animals in great danger disappear in this country.

There are a lot of superstitions, so that is why more and more animals are in great danger of disappearing in this country.

I hate this a lot, but I can do nothing which make me helpless.

I hate this a lot, but I can do nothing, which makes me helpless.

As the technology developing, humans get more and more advantages and have a better life.

As the technology developings, humans get more and more advantages and have a better life.

As the technology developings, humans gethave more and more advantages and have a better life.

But most of them never try to get more knowledge scientifically.

But most of them never try to getain more knowledge scientificallyscientific knowledge.

Their equiments are the newset while their mind is the ancient.

Their equipments are the newset is new while their mind is the ancients are old-fashioned.

Their equiments are the newset while their mind is the ancienttools are modern while their mindset is antiquated.

It is the sadness of the world.

It is the sadness of the worlda shame.

It is thea great sadness ofin the world.

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