June 17, 2021
C1- writing task
We would like to improve the information for new students on our college website. At present, the website has lots of factual information about courses. We would like to include more advice for new students.
We would appreciate your views on topics such as study skills, living in a new city, dealing with finances and making new friends. Please write to the website director, explaining what sort of advice new students might find useful.
Dear Sir or Madam,
It is a pleasure to contribute with some of my thoughts to your college newsletter magazine.
As I have been a student myself at your renewed institution I suppose I can offer some useful tips and interesting suggestions to freshman students.
Although moving to a new city can be seen as something exciting, it’s essential to feel safe and do a quick research about the city before taking the leap.
Students might be curious to know about the city’s cost of living, weather, food, and how they can get around. It’s also critical to make sure they bring enough money to get by at the beginning. Not only will this help students settling down faster but it will also provide them sufficient time to learn how to deal with their finances.
In addition to feeling comfortable during the semester, students might encounter some difficulties getting used to their new college schedules. Providing students with some great studying tips such as how to organize their study time, establishing a health study routine, and learning how to take clear, concise, and organized notes in class will definitely make their first semester more relaxing.
After so much study it is time to unwind, students might find it very handy to get some information about the college's surroundings and the most famous places to have some enjoyable time with their new friends. Something that might help is offering a tour of the city upon arrival.
I hope I was able to provide some insightful ideas.
Please, let me know if I could be of further help on the matter.
Yours sincerely,
We would like to improve the information for new students on our college website.
At present, the website has lots of factual information about courses, but we would like to include more advice for new students.
Combining the two sentences sounds more natural.
We would like to include more advice for new students.
We would appreciate your views on topics such as study skills, living in a new city, dealing with finances and making new friends.
Please write to the website director, explaining what sort of advice new students might find useful.
Dear Sir or Madam,
It is a pleasure to contribute with some of my thoughts to your college newsletter magazine.magazine. (OR: college newsletter)
Both 'newsletter' and 'magazine' sound odd here. It would be fine to just pick one or the other.
As I have beenwas once a student myself at your renewowned institution, I suppose I can offer some useful tips and interesting suggestions to freshman students.
'Renewed' means 'to be made new again; to be refreshed'. 'Renowned' means 'famous, well-regarded.'
Although moving to a new city can be seen as somethingseem exciting, it’s essential to feel safe and do asome quick research about the city before taking the leap.
Students might be curious to know about the city’s cost of living, weather, food, and how they can get around.
It’s also critical to make sure they bring enough money to get by at the beginning.
Not only will this help students settlinge down faster, but it will also provide them sufficient time to learn how to deal with their finances.
In addition to feeling comfortable during the semester, students might encounter some difficulties getting used to their new college schedules.
Providing students with some great studying tips such as how to organize their study time, establishing a health study routine, and learning how to take clear, concise, and organized notes in class will definitely make their first semester more relaxing.
After so much study it is time to unwind, so students might find it very handy to get some information about the college's surroundings and the most famouspopular places to have some enjoyable timefun with their new friends.
This sounds more natural.
Something that might help is offering a tour of the city upon arrival.
I hope I was able to provide some insightful ideas.
Please, let me know if I could be of further help on the matter.
Yours sincerely,
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We would like to improve the information for new students on our college website. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At present, the website has lots of factual information about courses. At present, the website has lots of factual information about courses, but we would like to include more advice for new students. Combining the two sentences sounds more natural. |
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We would like to include more advice for new students.
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We would appreciate your views on topics such as study skills, living in a new city, dealing with finances and making new friends. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Please write to the website director, explaining what sort of advice new students might find useful. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Dear Sir or Madam, This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is a pleasure to contribute with some of my thoughts to your college newsletter magazine. It is a pleasure to contribute Both 'newsletter' and 'magazine' sound odd here. It would be fine to just pick one or the other. |
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As I have been a student myself at your renewed institution I suppose I can offer some useful tips and interesting suggestions to freshman students. As I 'Renewed' means 'to be made new again; to be refreshed'. 'Renowned' means 'famous, well-regarded.' |
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Although moving to a new city can be seen as something exciting, it’s essential to feel safe and do a quick research about the city before taking the leap. Although moving to a new city can |
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Students might be curious to know about the city’s cost of living, weather, food, and how they can get around. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It’s also critical to make sure they bring enough money to get by at the beginning. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Not only will this help students settling down faster but it will also provide them sufficient time to learn how to deal with their finances. Not only will this help students settl |
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In addition to feeling comfortable during the semester, students might encounter some difficulties getting used to their new college schedules. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Providing students with some great studying tips such as how to organize their study time, establishing a health study routine, and learning how to take clear, concise, and organized notes in class will definitely make their first semester more relaxing. Providing students with some great studying tips such as how to organize their study time, establish |
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After so much study it is time to unwind, students might find it very handy to get some information about the college's surroundings and the most famous places to have some enjoyable time with their new friends. After so much study it is time to unwind, so students might find it very handy to get some information about the college's surroundings and the most This sounds more natural. |
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Something that might help is offering a tour of the city upon arrival. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I hope I was able to provide some insightful ideas. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Please, let me know if I could be of further help on the matter. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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