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bettty

Sep 08

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Books ive I read this summer

Did you read a book this summer? Was it in your native language or your target languages(s)? Did you finish it?

I've had a list of few books that i wanted to read this summer but i didn't get enough time to finish reading them. One of the books was Harry Potter. I wanted to read this book for a long time but once i started reading it i lost all of the interest. I don't know what's the reason but i think its because of how short my attention span has become. Due to social media, i can't read long books without getting bored.

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I've had a list of few books that i wanted to read this summer but i didn't get enough time to finish reading them.

I've had a list of a few books that iI wanted to read this summer but iI didn't gethave enough time to finish reading them.

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I've had a list of few books that iI wanted to read this summer, but iI didn't get enough time to finish reading them.

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One of the books was Harry Potter.

I wanted to read this book for a long time but once i started reading it i lost all of the interest.

I wanted to read this book for a long time but once iI started reading it i lost all of the interestI began to lose interest in the story.

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I've wanted to read ithis book for a long time, but once i started reading it iI lost all of the interest.

You could also say "I lost all my interest"

I don't know what's the reason but i think its because of how short my attention span has become.

I don't know what's the reasony I lost interest in this book but iI think it's because of how short my attention span has become.

[I don't know why I lost interest in this book]
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I don't know what's the reasony, but iI think its because of how short my attention span has become.

Due to social media, i can't read long books without getting bored.

Due to social media, iI can't read long books without getting bored. It's hard to focus. Social Media has only been a distraction for me.

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Due to social media, iI can't read long books without getting bored.

I know the feeling!

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