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Blood Donation

ponta 310 · Dec. 30

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I've decided to go to blood donation next year. I don't like to see blood and to be pulled out of my blood, but I want to contribute to others. When I finished blood donation, I'll report how it was.


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Correction 1 / 4
nschafer888 0 Jan. 15, 2021
I've decided to go to blood donation next year.

I've decided to go to blood donationdonate blood next year.

I don't like to see blood and to be pulled out of my blood, but I want to contribute to others.

I don't like to see blood and to be pulled out of my blood, but I want to contribute to others.want to contribute to others, even though I don't like to see blood coming out of my body.

Or maybe you could say "I don't like to see blood being drawn" or "I don't like needles".
When I finished blood donation, I'll report how it was.

When I finishedAfter my blood donation, I'll report back and tell you how it wasent.

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Tia 0 Dec. 30, 2020
Blood Donation
I've decided to go to blood donation next year.

I've decided to go to give blood donation next year.

I don't like to see blood and to be pulled out of my blood, but I want to contribute to others.

I don't like to see blood andor to be pulled out ofhave my blood drawn, but I want to contribute to others.

When I finished blood donation, I'll report how it was.

When I have finished blood donationdonating blood, I'll report how it was.

Overall feedback & comment:

Good luck!
Comment added on 12/30/2020

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documentrix 0 Jan. 15, 2021
I've decided to go to blood donation next year.

I've decided to go togive blood donation next year.

'go to blood donation' doesn't sound natural - it's not the usual way that this would be said.
I don't like to see blood and to be pulled out of my blood, but I want to contribute to others.

I don't like to see blood and to be pulled out ofhave my blood drawn, but I want to contribute to others.

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becky82 0 Dec. 30, 2020
Blood Donation
I've decided to go to blood donation next year.

I've decided to go to blood donationdonate blood next year.

I don't like to see blood and to be pulled out of my blood, but I want to contribute to others.

I don't like to see blood and to be pulled out ofhave my blood drawn, but I want to contribute to others's well-being.

When I finished blood donation, I'll report how it was.

When I have finished blood donationdonating blood, I'll report how it was.