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Dec. 30, 2020

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Blood Donation

I've decided to go to blood donation next year. I don't like to see blood and to be pulled out of my blood, but I want to contribute to others. When I finished blood donation, I'll report how it was.

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I've decided to go to blood donation next year.


I've decided to go to give blood donation next year. I've decided to go to give blood next year.

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'go to blood donation' doesn't sound natural - it's not the usual way that this would be said.

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I don't like to see blood and to be pulled out of my blood, but I want to contribute to others.


I don't like to see blood andor to be pulled out ofhave my blood drawn, but I want to contribute to others. I don't like to see blood or to have my blood drawn, but I want to contribute to others.

I don't like to see blood and to be pulled out ofhave my blood drawn, but I want to contribute to others's well-being. I don't like to see blood and to have my blood drawn, but I want to contribute to other's well-being.

I don't like to see blood and to be pulled out ofhave my blood drawn, but I want to contribute to others. I don't like to see blood and to have my blood drawn, but I want to contribute to others.

I don't like to see blood and to be pulled out of my blood, but I want to contribute to others.want to contribute to others, even though I don't like to see blood coming out of my body. I want to contribute to others, even though I don't like to see blood coming out of my body.

Or maybe you could say "I don't like to see blood being drawn" or "I don't like needles".

When I finished blood donation, I'll report how it is.


When I finished blood donation, I'll report how it was.


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When I have finished blood donationdonating blood, I'll report how it was. When I have finished donating blood, I'll report how it was.

When I finishedAfter my blood donation, I'll report back and tell you how it wasent. After my blood donation, I'll report back and tell you how it went.

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